Douluo Dalu: Reincarnation I Am Huo Yuhao

Wang Dong himself can't resist his father. It's just a mobile camera. Even if he has feelings, Tang Shenwang is just a memory eraser. I really don't know what the use is of putting her next to the protagonist.

I think Wang Donger is still too dangerous. If a gentleman doesn't build a dangerous wall, he can completely use Wang Donger to make the Tang Shenwang turn his head. Who knows, Tang Shenwang is still with Wang Donger. What kind of backup is left behind? His own daughter can cut people in half. You can't be too defensive. As a heroine, forget it. Don't be close or alienated, just hang it up.

It's hard to hold back. I was reincarnated and bullied for eleven years. It seems that most people in the fandom want to make up for some things that are difficult to deal with in the original work, or just to feel comfortable, they suppress it as soon as they come. Here comes the big one😅 For such a loser, it is better to be a dog for the Buddha. The Novice Village has been fucked by others for more than ten years, and they still want to resist the boss God King who is always observing in the sky.

Seeing that the author is so humble and wants both negative and positive reviews, I will tell you my negative reviews! I have only read the first three chapters, and overall it gives me a feeling of self-reliance. I have traveled through time for 11 years, and after being severely beaten by the Duke's Palace, a normal time traveler's character will not be so exaggerated. Watching the protagonist commenting on an original character every time he sees it, it feels like self-reliance. In the third chapter of the opening chapter, Tang San appears and yells, "You have a way to kill me." Without any details to flesh out the character, it seems very exaggerated.

Is this the standard second martial soul Ice Emperor and soul guide again? How can we avoid Tang San's surveillance? Moreover, there are no gods in Douluo Continent, and it is impossible to pass on the remaining god kings. The Silver Dragon King is also difficult to set. He has inherited wisdom but has such a shocking brain circuit.

I hope you guys can express your opinions more. Whether they are good or bad reviews, they inspire me and urge me to improve my work. Thank you all🙏🙏🙏

What happens in Chapters 20 and 21? Did you read it yourself? The weird dream caused by the protagonist's own nonsense. It would be better for you to directly say that the protagonist is the son of luck than to blindly expose it. I can't understand what the protagonist is doing there.

The protagonist still blames Tianmeng for being a loser, and looks down on Huo Yuhao? Don't even look at what you are

If you don't leave Princess Tang, you won't be able to write, right?

What's the cool thing about your novel? It's too bland and there's also the million-year soul ring. It's too stupid to pretend to be a ten-year soul ring just like the original novel. I believe many people will want to complain when they see this paragraph. Is it difficult to disguise the color of a million-year soul ring? Run Riyue also depends on talent. Even if you don't pretend, if you directly expose your soul skills to the examiner, what's the point of taking the exam? It's true that time travel ten years ago is the same as if you didn't time travel. You might as well just write about the time-travelling experience of Beat the Wind Baboon. You have traveled ten years and nothing has changed. If you write like this, you will be less scolded. The protagonist looks like a normal person, which is the highest praise for a novel protagonist.

Is the protagonist himself in trouble? Huo Yuhao can't play at all if he doesn't, after all, his soul is still in Tang San's hands.

The writing is okay, but the emotional progression is too fast.

The plot of writing a letter is a poisonous point. If you write it, it's the same as if you haven't written it. Also, you can release your talent directly. I don't believe that Jing Hongchen won't help you. You still need to buy soul bones with your own money. When the time comes, I can just give it to you if I tell you the situation I have to make some calculations at the same time. The Sun and Moon Empire has a good reputation and enjoys other people's things, and then sends letters to the enemy. It is said to be for revenge. In this case, why not go somewhere else and come to the Sun and Moon Empire to fight all day long. Don't you feel tired? I feel tired for the readers.

I'll add a cover to you 📖 and it'd be better if it has two heroines, so more people will see it.

Little Huo Niang

Princess Tang can definitely break up with Tang San. She likes destroying lives. If she has a foster father and adopted mother, she will be an awesome supporter.

It looks so scary. The protagonist stays away from Wang Dong and asks questions about why they are getting together again. Looking at Wang Dong's talking eyes, can't you bear it?