Douluo Dalu: The Dragon King's Star-Eating Wings

Qiangu Dieting Qiangu Qingfeng, Qiangu Dongfeng Qiangu Zhangting Protagonist: Qiangu Huangyu First of all, this name does not fit the naming style, and secondly, the Mary Su flavor is too strong. Do you really not consider changing the name?

The heroine of Dou San, a rare thing, support and support

The protagonist is a female, why do we need a female protagonist?

To put it bluntly, the reason is that it is too slow to follow the new trend. The protagonist's current strength can directly push the Sun-Moon Federation with the Holy Spirit Sect. Power tactics are played when the strengths are about the same. If there is too much difference, it will be very frustrating.

The protagonist has always called himself the Emperor of Heaven, but the author has not even written a few words about it. Why does Shining need to explain to the other party when giving gifts, and the other party needs to kneel down? If you can't write this kind of overbearing king, don't try it. The protagonist's tactics are also top-notch. It is the first time to accept a subordinate, and the subordinate gives gifts without achieving results. It is still a super artifact. No buddy, you are so big-hearted, you are not afraid of backstabbing. It is not good for non-god-level contracts to work in front of gods. According to the setting of King The treasure in the treasure can only be used by others unless the owner agrees to it, but the author has never mentioned that the protagonist can have a mental monologue. For example, if he wants to use it, he can recall it at any time. This makes the protagonist very stupid. He is just a primary school student who got a golden finger. He has power but does not have a matching state of mind. Maybe I have read too many dark novels recently. When I come back to read it, it seems that the protagonist is very stupid. I really wonder how many chapters the protagonist can survive in Gu Zhenren like this.

It's been too rough recently. First, I wrote more than 20 chapters in Shenglingtai. Author, you said you would change it later, but you ended up writing more than 20 chapters after the assessment. This is very rare among all the Dou 3 fans I read. Others passed the assessment in one sentence, and the copy was only fifteen chapters at most. It's not that the writing isn't good, on the contrary, the writing is pretty good, but it's just too watery. Just like today, you wrote a 4,000-word chapter about a soul tool, which made me feel lonely after reading it. I've read basically 123 of Dou 3's books. Author, you don't need to spend too much time explaining the setting. If it's too watery, it's really hard to get people interested in following it. Dou 3 has few female protagonists, and the subject matter of this book is quite new and interesting. The reason why I say so much is because I really like this book, and I hope the author can write better in the future.

I suggest you write less plots in which the protagonists are robbed, killed, and robbed in their own homes. It's very poisonous. In the plot, the protagonist group was intercepted and robbed twice, once in the Spirit Transferring Tower headquarters and once in Shrek City. This is outrageous. You must know that this is the core of the continent, not a small place like Donghai City that doesn't even have a titled Douluo. It must be a large twelve-level series array, energy-gathering compression, inspection and detection soul guide, and there are also a large number of high-level soul masters on our side. How could someone rob our core personnel and not even be discovered in the first place? You must know that the Sun and Moon Imperial City during the Dou Er period could threaten Ultimate Douluo, and the top soul masters could not threaten the Sun and Moon Emperor and the Crown Prince in the Sun and Moon Imperial City. At the end of the Dou II plot, the two Extreme Douluo, Long Xiaoyao and Ye Xishui, were also defeated in the Sun and Moon Imperial City. This was just relying on soul guides alone. The Sun and Moon side lacked the combat power of top soul masters. The Douluo Three soul guide technology has made great progress, and the upper limit has been raised to level 12. Generally speaking, level 10 soul guides can play a role at the extreme Douluo level. Level 11 is basically against standard gods, and level 12 can even threaten the strong ones who have just entered the god level. It is impossible for level 99 extreme Douluo to do whatever they want in the core areas of major forces. In the plot, the first time the protagonist group is robbed is at the Spirit Transferring Tower headquarters. The original Spirit Transferring Tower headquarters is a super giant building similar to the Tower of Babel. How did Di Tian accurately locate the protagonist and Qian Renxue? Using mental power to scan, there is no way Leng Yangjun and Leng Yangjun could not sense the inner soul detection device in the Spirit Transferring Tower. It would be outrageous even if he was teleported in and abducted before he was discovered immediately. The second time he was intercepted and killed by Pluto Douluo in Shrek City was similar. Limit Douluo used the power of space to open up a space to hide. If in Donghai City, Limit Douluo could do whatever he wanted with his understanding of space, but it was unreasonable that such a large space fluctuation was not monitored in Shrek City. In addition, Qiangu Huangyu's status is not much better than that of Dou Er Xu Tianran. He has a life-saving soul guide that should trigger defense and alarm. Similar to the love of the mortal world, he will not be intercepted or killed, and will not move or be discovered. Therefore, the plot of being intercepted and killed in the core area is very unreasonable, and readers have to store their minds before watching. Moreover, this kind of plot is not pleasing to the eye. Most book lovers prefer protagonists who are delicate and cautious, with low-key character development. Otherwise, there wouldn't be so many Gou Daoliu novels, because they are subconsciously involved in the reading process, and naturally averse to risks. As a result, the book is always blocked by the enemy in the early stage. Killing people on their own territory, and the level gap is too big. There is no way to resist, and they can only rely on talking to escape. This is quite poisonous. I suggest that there is no need to constantly screen and exclude readers. It is a rare Dou San heroine article. I still hope the author can write it well, and the poisonous plot should be as little as possible.

This book has plots and battles, and the pace is not sluggish except for Mingdu. It is already better than most books from Qidian. 😁

As in the title: Personal opinion: The number of God-Kings in the Great God Circle is not limited to the thirteen God-Kings in the rumor mill

Why is it that all the female channels are now replaced by male channels? I'm speechless.