Wild Wizard Plane Travel Notes

It's really good, still a classic combination of time traveler and chip, orthodox wizard novel.

Wow, I'm writing a novel again, come on 😏

The writing is good. Although it is a traditional wizarding novel, it is not very cliched.

Forage! There is no such thing as bitterness or deep hatred, and there is no such thing as indiscriminate mercy.

From the visual point of view of a bookworm of more than 20 years, this book is pretty good and has no bad points for the time being. Because of the early accumulation of chips, even if I feel that the protagonist's strength is progressing a little faster, it is still acceptable; the plot is also okay, so keep writing. There is no need to open a new book after just one month of full attendance. Some books will only be read after a certain number of people have read them. Lay a solid foundation, seize opportunities, and work hard to expand the number of readers. You will feel better. After all, it is not easy for newbies. You have to endure it slowly. Maybe the next book will become a hit.

Food and grass are just a little too little

Not bad🙂

Please change the end of chapter 11 and the beginning of chapter 2. Setting two days is too stupid. How many days have passed since the beginning of Chapter 12? Why not just set it two months later?

Still ok. See how to deal with it later. Food and grass lack some emotional guidance.

The writing is indeed good, although it looks confusing in some places, but the flaws are not concealed. In addition, the B level of the wizards in your wizarding world is too low. Why did the three-ring wizard appear so early? There are no B levels. It's not enough to write a mystery like this. Also, we need to make it clear that the chip's function needs to be strengthened. It cannot be strengthened all at once. For example, previously the protagonist had to use his eyes to input the chip. Now the chip is directly scanned. When was it strengthened? Of course, it's worth giving you three monthly votes

It is similar to ordinary wizarding novels, with meat pigeons fighting monsters and researching theories. The core of equivalent exchange is not obvious.

Mutual encouragement! I would like to take advantage of this opportunity to promote my own "Return to Death and Hunt Again"

Chapter 25 didn't hold up. It was written a bit weirdly. My brain doesn't work well because I'm old, so I'd better write it more straightforwardly.

It's quite immersive to read, keep it up.

No shortcomings and no advantages

I just started reading about a dozen chapters, and I felt that there were too many chapters related to knight skills.

You can write it, please keep it up.

Witcher, I think plane travel is more interesting when watching Academy War and Plane War. Your new map is full of Cthulhu suspense 😅

I feel that I have been in trouble recently. I have watched it and not watched it. The plot advance speed was fast in the past, but now it is slow. The conflicts between the main plot and the characters are not well integrated. I hope to keep up the good work. Come on.