Ultraman: Evolving from the Ultimate Lifeform

1. Please don't take the setting for granted. Since the original work is about the Night Clan, and you know it, then don't use vampires to transform into ultimate creatures. You can't wait for a month to go on adventures. I wrote before that I was afraid of death. After extracting the blood of the Night Clan for research, I relied on vampires to devour the Night Clan. It's better than using a vampire to directly transform into an ultimate creature. 2. Can the place where silly girls can travel through time and space be changed? Don't take it for granted that Sha Niu can travel through time and space in Tiga. People have told you that Sha Niu relies on other things to travel through time and space. 3. Respect your own settings, and do not match the settings before and after. The more I write, the more I take it for granted, and I always wonder what to do.

Is it okay to rely on the Stone Ghost Face to turn into a vampire and then turn into an ultimate creature? Katz developed the Stone Ghost Face to release the potential of the Night Clan to overcome the weakness of the sun. The half-finished Stone Ghost Face can only allow them to face the sun and petrify to save their lives. You, an ordinary human, can use it Turning into a vampire with a Stone Ghost Mask is just a transformation from a grasshopper to a pet cat. They are all food for the Night Clan. They are not designed for human use. A vampire wearing a Red Stone Ghost Mask of Ai Zhe will probably be burned to ashes when exposed to ultraviolet rays. Without this diamond, how can he get the porcelain job?

The writing of this book is a bit messy. There is an inexplicable cheat. You are not allowed to write the system directly. And you, a new author, are a bit greedy and want to add everything to it. Can you grasp it? It is better to write a pure Ultraman. Wait until your writing ability improves and then write something like this.

When you wrote Chapter 11, when you described the protagonist's ability to activate, you said it would be better for Kaz to die honestly. You also said that the protagonist's ability will make items in the fantasy world disappear, otherwise why would Kaz die? Next, Chapter 14 also describes that the protagonist knows that the super body has medicine to develop the brain. As a result, I honestly had no intention of manifesting it at all. Author, you really need to be careful. What you write is a manifestation of fantasy, not theft!

Bohemian Rhapsody is more like a fantasy that materializes once a month, and it's not this Bohemian Rhapsody.

The main point should be to promote the change of the protagonist's thoughts in the plot, rather than to mix a little plot into a lot of thinking and chaotic settings. You just want to have both, and you don't have enough writing power to have an outline. If you take too big a step, it will be delayed. It is best to write a pure and refreshing article, which does not require too much writing power. After that, you can improve your writing power and then open new holes to add changes in thinking. You can Go look at the descriptions of emotions in more classic books. Don't use a lot of complicated settings to write about emotions. You can describe them bit by bit through side descriptions, such as a certain event or a change in a certain expression, or a supporting role in the text to set it off. Instead of writing an indifference here, an indifference here, an indifference here, something like before, something like that, and something like how it is now.

It's okay, but it's too wordy and not smooth.

You QQ life form feels inferior to the Little Golden Man, and you are a bit picky about your feet.

A novice author, but not much talent for writing books. The writing is too watery, bland and boring.

These are just a few pictures, but your plug-in settings have changed so quickly, it's so speechless.