The Snake God of the Shrine Maiden

It should be said that the portrayal was wrong. It could have been written that the girl really regarded the protagonist as her father and relied on him, and the protagonist helped her to avenge her after understanding. Instead of writing that the protagonist saved the girl, she also forced a contract to control the protagonist to take revenge. Later, the protagonist's system counterattacked and took the initiative to contract to help her avenge. What a failure.

The abstraction is too abstract, turning into a snake thinking about hunting with tools,

You can't transform into a dragon, I want to see the snake god more

Such a confident author who dares to write about amnesia + depression. Wait for one to catch up and read + admit my mistake.

The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. The protagonist is either deflated or on the way to becoming deflated. The fighting plot is neither exciting nor exciting, and the plot is a complete mystery. Those who watch are lazy

Chapter 31 is still playing the dual-sword style. Author, you really don't want to use your super wisdom to think about what the protagonist's current body shape is and what size sword he wants according to the protagonist's current body shape. You can't fight a giant snake with a toothpick, so you might as well bite with your teeth. If it is a stone sword of equal proportions emmmmm are you serious? Can the protagonist really polish such a big sword? Unless your sword is a complete diamond, the material strength of the stone sword will break when touched. It cannot be used even a little, and it is not made of steel.

This title reminds me of a witch named Snake God whom I saw in a book a few days ago. The painting style is quite good.

There's nothing wrong with you even if you write that you need to practice your account again, but you just suffer from amnesia + depression. Do you think you've read too much and want to filter out readers?

Personally, I really hate the plot of falling to a low-level map due to various reasons such as lowering the level/seriously injured and disabled, etc. It is also more annoying to practice the alt, but it is also possible The prerequisite is that you know that he is practicing the alt and not It's a difficult amnesia-type amnesia state I'm going to tell you how to fight Amaterasu Classic boss fights where we both die and get seriously injured and so on, disabled leveling Or that's it Can we not have amnesia-type amnesia?

There are few realistic scenes, and the mountains and seas space can be written more. Wait until the protagonist is devoured and become a god, and then show off in reality, instead of just pretending half-heartedly. Moreover, the miko under his command is always being tortured, and the writing is not pleasant at all.

Amnesia article, this was a poisonous point many years ago, but it is still a problem now, just treat it like subscribing to feed the dog, bye, I will read the next book, bye

I found it inexplicable when I read it, and when I wrote it, I felt both happy and unhappy. When I should feel happy, I always pressed it inexplicably and it made me feel nauseous.

The girl I wrote about recently is really annoying. The protagonist can be gentle, but she can't be without character. Now those people have no respect for the protagonist. Author, what are you doing?

4, Restarting and amnesia are indeed a killer for new writers

Before the little girl's eyes were cured, I was quite looking forward to how the plot would develop. After the treatment, the series of plots can only be said to be dull and boring. 🤔The protagonist's sympathy is understandable, but the subsequent operations are simply the protagonist's mother's heart overflowing, which is completely incomprehensible. The following is a bunch of settings about gods and cultivation realms. It can basically be seen that it is another skin-changing fairy tale.

Um, I feel like the protagonist is too unqualified? The protagonist described in the article is extremely powerful, but how come a random person can get benefits without doing anything.

After saving a seven or eight-year-old little girl, the protagonist confessed his origins and discussed everything with the little girl. I'm not sure whether the protagonist is born a dog licker, but there is no lack of childish innocence and clear stupidity. In front of a seven or eight-year-old girl, the protagonist cannot make the decision on his own, so does he still need the girl to help share the psychological pressure?

An intelligent personality system with a strong two-dimensional flavor

The snake's tail is used as a sword, and there is a sword hidden in the body. Are you heading in the direction of Xiang Liu?