Conan: My Ghost Story Organization Started with Vests

It doesn't matter if there is no female protagonist. Why does it specifically describe the plot of Conan eating Xiaolan's welfare many times? I don't care whether the novel has multiple women or no women, but it is very poisonous to describe the ambiguous interactions between supporting characters and women many times. Reminds me of that trashy novel in which the main character, a young boy, is single and ends up pimping a useless master and starting a harem.

The naughty child's lunacy is so depressing, it's simply inexplicable, and the character is not created in such an inexplicable way.

Yes, less reasoning and solving crimes, more horror stories. It would be best to have a big scary event, such as the crisis of some S-class ghost destroying the city. 🙂

I don't understand. You said you can kill people and ghosts. If you kill everything, what's the red line?

In other words, everyone should be quite confused now. Maybe it's because the protagonist is quite confused. I feel like the protagonist just writes whatever comes to his mind. He just can't understand the logic. For example, if he doesn't accept the naughty child, he suddenly kills it. He thought it could be a sample, but the female brat suddenly accepts it. Of course there are great masters who can be fascinated all the way to the end like this, but I think the author is not like this. There are two main reasons: 1. There is too little psychological description of the protagonist, and a lot of thinking is omitted, making it seem like seeing flowers in the fog, only the outline 2. There are too few updates, and there are almost no climax points. With too few updates, naturally nothing can be seen, and the climax point is not just about fighting, but also about psychological games, "trapping" the character, and creating fun 😁

I was mentally prepared for it, but later I was confused when the winery was related to weirdness. And I feel like the protagonist isn't that strong, and it seems like he can't ignore physical attacks at the moment.

I've read about 70 chapters, and there's nothing major wrong with it. I think the criticism is that the main character is written with a high level of character, but it falls apart once the actual battle begins.

It's a bit like Corpse Scavenger. You can tell at first glance that it's following the trend. Goldfinger is similar. Even the cover is the same, but the writing of surprise and surprise is too vulgar.

Your worldview dictates that the government or the related Onmyoji witches must have real talents and knowledge. If nothing else, there must be mermaids in Mermaid Island.

It's possible that the witch from Mermaid Island could become her subordinate. Anyway, the people on that island have deceived her. Rather than being caught, it's better to get involved with the mermaid and leave.

Can one be considered a behind-the-scenes person if he ends up in person? 😌 And it basically means he has no vest. I thought the organization created by the protagonist was very impressive, but after dozens of chapters, he is still a little Karami.

Don't increase the strength of the winery too much. It's impossible for the official to know about the ghost story. After all, the shrine, one of Japan's three most evil spirits, is right next to the Japanese Police Agency.

I was confused in the first chapter. I didn't understand why the protagonist was able to subdue the cracked girl with punches and kicks.

Let's not talk about how it is written. Who taught the author to break the line directly after the comma? It looks really awkward.

I feel aesthetically tired. The woman in white in the back seat of the car looked a little attracted to Okino Yoko. That part of the plot felt less attractive and a bit aesthetically fatigued. Now that I saw the part about the four young detectives, I felt fatigued and had no desire to continue reading. Can we give more benefits to female characters? There are too few benefits, in a dream. The pajamas Okino Yoko is wearing must also be wearing slippers. The front of her feet may be exposed. What color is it painted on? Can't such benefits be given? This ghost is not scary either. It helps the male protagonist to increase his skills, enhance his strength, and drive the plot. Anyway, it really doesn't help my reading experience much. I feel aesthetic fatigue after watching it for a long time. Mouri Kogoro and Touko. There was also Conan's interactions, which didn't have much interest in them. The first person that the male protagonist can subdue is the Eight-foot-sama, how good he is, those legs are longer than the male protagonist's life. Well, if the speed benefits are good, it will be more attractive to some readers. Well, if the benefits are good, I won't feel aesthetic fatigue so quickly. It can be used as a short-term attraction.

The classic supernatural show Hell Sensei has released a new work. The author can go to Hell Sensei comics to learn from it. Several works of this comic combination are quite classic urban legends about monsters and aliens.

Since Karasuma Renya can find the opportunity to become a monster, I can only say that don't underestimate the others. The three evil spirits Yamata no Orochi alone are enough to be the boss.

Referring to East Asian horror movies and comics, the government and police in them are really just soy sauce, and they have to rely on themselves to survive! Only online novels can set up a powerful but useless government agency with no atmosphere!

In fact, I feel that it is best to write about the growth of the protagonist, otherwise it will inevitably be in the clouds. Failure to beat other Kaidan can be explained by the real character (transformation Kaidan) and the lack of ability. Failure to beat Toru Amuro can be explained by the fact that most of the power of the gap girl lies in the scissors. Amuro is still considered the pinnacle of human beings, and it is understandable that his strength is comparable to Kaidan. The most obvious thing about weird stories for humans is their weird abilities. Considering that physical strength is a bit inferior, this is indeed the most obvious progress, and it is also a power that can be seen by others.

How many chapters are left to finish? I still want to see you write a Douluo fanfic

The creativity is very good and the starting point is very high. However, the novel seems very obscure and the storyline is not smooth. It does not look like a sequence or a narrative. Before one thing is explained, I rush to write down the next thing. I feel like it's still a problem with the author's writing style.

I tried my best again

Oh, I give it all to you

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