Douluo: My Father, Titled Douluo

It is recommended that brothers skip the two chapters 19-20. There is almost no plot in these two chapters and they are all the author's personal property.

I like the mature way the protagonist is written, but the setting feels weird. After reading the setting of the second week, I thought there would be a hard battle, but Shuangwen pushed it all the way, and the latest chapter was pushed to the Sun and Moon Continent, and it was almost a side story. Did you, Lao Yuan, survive a dog for one week? Xiaoyuan's second weekly test didn't have much effect. Shuangwen would have lost a lot of fun if it did not introduce the protagonist and the popular female character YY. Even if he didn't want to write, would a mature man like Lao Yuan tell Bibi Dong to drink more hot water? Would a mature man say this in real life? This is too illogical. Zhu Zhuqing didn't make any arrangements either. It feels like he was forgotten... It's probably a bug. There are many people in this book who do things that are inconsistent with their own personalities, and these plots seem quite awkward.

After reading 20 chapters, I found the topic to be very good, the ideas to be good, and the stance not skewed, but it was full of poisonous points. First of all, the protagonist has traveled through time. According to the settings, you are already a super Douluo. You can't change anything? You think you are an ordinary person, don't you think you are a super Douluo, are you useless? This is not ordinary, why is it so messed up? If you can't handle it in the later stage, you can't handle it in the early stage? If Bibi Dong can't change, can Dugu Bo still be defeated? Will the World Line Convergence take care of this? Even if you force me to explain, you won't even explain it. Secondly, I don't care if Tang San is black, but don't be embarrassed. Brainless blackness is really more uncomfortable than brainless licking. In the end, Tang San's character is indeed poor, but he really worked hard and tried his best. It seems to me that the protagonist is completely in a state of being a mess. Even if he is a mess, he still says that he is forced to do this. There is no other way. Knowing that the plot does not change at all in the end, he ends up being killed? I'll continue to see if you can change it later, whether you can get the Ice and Fire Eyes, and how you can get them back after you get them. It's really a good idea for this subject, but the setting is full of loopholes.

I remember that there was a popular book called Myriad Worlds, but the author committed suicide and made the protagonist's daughter fall in love with Iron Man because of her seclusion. The whole book was scolded for being a eunuch. This is how your book feels to me, a useless and useless protagonist.

Let me talk about it, First of all, this novel was indeed written by my brain. Yuan Xunlu is weak and useless. He is just an ordinary titled Douluo. No god likes him. This is a poisonous point. This book simply tells a story about Yuan Ling'er, who slowly became Tang San. (I don't know whether the protagonist is Yuan Xunlu or Yuan Linger...) If you like it, you can continue watching, If you don't like it, you can move on. //////// Then about the Ice and Fire Eyes and Fairy Grass. There are two ways to get fairy grass, first: civilization. Detoxify Dugu Bo, play well and get the fairy grass. Others can do it, but it is difficult for Yuan Xunlu, who was born in Wuhun Palace, to do it. Dugu Bo has always been the enemy of Wuhun Palace, and Yuan Xunlu was born in Wuhun Palace. You said you would detoxify Dugu Bo, but Dugu Bo wouldn't believe it because he was afraid that you, Wuhun Palace, would murder me. Even if Dugu Bo believed you, just let it go. Dugu Bo has been around for so long, so he should be careful. He gives you the poison pill and asks you to take it as a guarantee that you can successfully detoxify. Do you take it or not? You eat, what if Dugu Bo goes back on his word? Don't say that Dugu Bo is trustworthy. That's a character in a novel. Do you use the character in a novel to infer a person's character in real life? People's hearts are still separated from each other by the belly, but you are separated by a dimension. If you don't eat, there's no need to talk about it, and I'm not a fool. Second: Savage. Fight Dugu Bo away directly and rob him! Dugu Bo is decades older than you and has a higher level of cultivation than you. You may not be able to defeat him. You asked Wuhun Palace to bring in reinforcements, and you got the fairy grass. Okay, who does it belong to? How to divide? How many more will Qian Xunji compassionately leave for you? (So what if you find it? I have a gun!) When others eat the fairy grass, Wuhun Palace has a large number of strong men. Are they grateful to Qian Xunji or you? All my love falls on Qian Xunji. Are you willing to make a wedding dress for a QJ prisoner? ///////// The Wuhun Palace is not a saint's house, it is one of the three major political forces on the Douluo Continent. Is there a plan? Is there any intrigue? Are you fighting for power? Do you think they are the great reds in human history, who came specifically to liberate the All-Soul Masters? A feudal religious force, also worthy!

I am happy after reading the author's chapter. I just want to say that the starting point of the protagonist is already higher than that of most protagonists. There is no way to mess up the situation. In life, everyone says that it is bad and bad, but everyone is playing their own protagonists on the stage of life and working hard to make their lives better, so don't say how ordinary people are. The protagonist of this book is not qualified to compete with everyone who works hard to live in reality. In Douluo's stage life, I did not feel that the protagonist tried his best to play his role. Your book feels like the protagonist in those TV series who earns 3,000 a month and lives in a luxurious villa. He has become out of touch with the public.

There is nothing we can do. The family background and talents are all mediocre, and there is no ability to predict the future. There is nothing we can do if we don't want to. But the protagonist's family background and talents are all top-notch, and he still knows the future, but he can act like this. This kind of thing is even more disgusting than the rich second generation who goes out of his way to show off his family background.

All I can say is that if you accept that the protagonist is a cuckold, you can continue watching.

Traveling back decades before the start, Bibi Dong was still raped. This is a super poisonous point. First of all, he met Bibi Dong at the same time as Yu Xiaogang, and it also made Bibi Dong fall in love with Yu Xiaogang, a bragging master. How much of a waste are you? It's not that Bibi Dong is so beautiful and you have to like her. It's that you and Yu Xiaogang are in a competitive position at the same time. You can still lose or be succeeded by Qian Xunji. If you don't criticize her, who will you criticize?

I subscribed to a chapter specifically to comment on whether the author wrote cuckold articles because his lover had been raped.

I can probably guess a little bit about the context. I want to design it to be the kind of person who doesn't have much energy to work. When encountering some difficulties, he stops doing it, starts messing around, thinks he doesn't care about anything, and gets killed as soon as he goes to Jialing Pass. At once. . . It's very similar to the kind of plot that San Shao likes to write where he thinks he's cool. This kind of character is good for supporting characters, but not likable for the protagonist (although I personally like it). If you want to establish the protagonist's image, you still need to portray more early characters and arrange some stories, such as the conflict between the early efforts and the strong plot inertia. For Bibi Dong's love plot, the master must be promoted. He must be a truly talented, capable and ambitious person to attract Bibi Dong (the master was set up from the beginning as another protagonist template, with good theory, strong girlfriend, high birth, and martial arts that can counterattack with practice. This guy has solved the problem of cultivation and looks more like the protagonist than Tang San)

When the newspaper seller wrote about the plot of my sister's body collection, I didn't even notice it. It was about 500 words long, and I was scolded. You write like this and some people praise you, it's really outrageous. I don't know if those people I praised were unhappy with their lives or if they were hired by trolls. Anyway, I was plotted against me. If you really don't want to eat this bowl of rice, don't eat it. If you want to eat it, don't make those stupid mistakes. If you want to write Liu Bei's article, don't write it again. Isn't it nice to go to the moderator?

I don't understand. The protagonist in the first timeline can already kill Yu Xiaoan after level 95. Will Tang San still go to Shrek in the future? Will he still have the Eight Spider Spears? It is better to kill the old poison at level 95 and throw away the fairy grass than to leave it in the ice hot pot. Besides, the Ice Hot Pot Wrap also has the body of the Ice and Fire Dragon King. Wouldn't the protagonist, the Holy Dragon of Light, go and fish it out? I feel aggrieved when I see it.

I came here specifically to give rewards and complain, what kind of purity wheel suite is this? ? On the day of the secret room, was the protagonist helping from behind? This song of Purity Rondo, Even so, I still love you.

Specially reward 100 points for commenting. As for the questions about chapters 13 and 70, they are really poisonous to me. First, according to your setting, the character's personality is inconsistent. I won't go into details about the series of operations. In short, it is outrageous and does not fit the character. Secondly, as a time traveler, the protagonist's series of operations are even more stupid when he is familiar with the plot (as a reference). The timeline is there, and if he doesn't do anything, it will be ruined? What kind of tobacco do you have time for, but don't have time to make some changes? Don't talk about the so-called "world line closing". According to what you said in the article, as long as Tang San doesn't move, nothing will happen. There was a change the moment the protagonist appeared, not to mention the other effects the protagonist had on Douluo Continent. Third, the problem of text expression. After reading chapter 13, I saw your words and jumped to chapter 70. Later, I also skipped chapters to see the part before it was released. Your description gives people the feeling of being in a loop ntr, the protagonist tm is a waste, and he still doesn't know what it means. Fourth, regarding the problem of "sealed soul power", the female characters in the original novel are full of love brains, and the characters' IQs are problematic (this cannot be corrected). The endings of Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong are truly tragic (without interference, Tang San has no chance of winning at all), and there is nothing to say about the winner and the loser. But what you wrote here is disgusting. Reading novels is just to pass the time. Life is already fucked up, but reading a novel and making people think is speechless. As gorgeous as the celebration of the victors of the National War is, there is so much darkness under the curtain. We can imagine that you don't need to engage in such an operation to disgust readers. To summarize, I support you for hacking Tang San, and I applaud you for hacking a certain three dogs. However, there is something wrong with your angle. You wrote quite well before, but you suddenly did this. I cannot understand it. At this point, I really have no interest in reading anymore. See you soon. Finally, I wish you will write better and better in the future. We have a long way to go. See you again when we are destined. The above is just my personal opinion, discussion is welcome, please don't comment if you don't like it. Thank you!

Some pig trotters in Douluo fan fiction are not as good as Tang San. This book is that no matter how double-standard Tang San is in Douluo Yi, no matter how disgusting he is, he always has good things. On the way to Poseidon Island for the assessment, he will see wolves slaughtering the village. He will be angry, and he will also pity the weak villagers. At least Tang San can do it, if he has the ability. Helping the weak, pig's feet allowed his soldiers to burn, kill, and loot. It was fine. After all, it was a feudal army. Raising morale depended on looting. While he and his daughter watched indifferently as his soldiers burned, killed, and looted, they were still sighing. The people deserve to be killed. I am the upper class and I should oppress you poor mudbloods. You should suffer.

I was secretly plotted by Daily Poison today.

First of all, I don't have any plot in reality, but if you want to say that the target is a Neptune, then I really can't accept it. Secondly, the protagonist is really useless and has no B qualities. It can be seen that the author worked very hard on the setting of Yuan Douluo Continent. The writing is indeed better than 90% of Douluo fans. It is not bulldozing, not mindless cheating, not embarrassing, the logic is relatively clear, and the character's IQ is online. However, the protagonist setting is really unlikable. I didn't even finish the free chapter before I started reading it. I clicked on it and went to the comment area. As expected, everyone was scolding me. All I could say was that it was right. I wanted to scold him at first, but after going through all the scoldings, I felt relieved just by looking at them. Of course, I can understand that as long as the protagonist is useful in the first place, and the daughter is involved, the book will not be written at all.

Even when the King of Soldiers returned, I couldn't resist you.

The heroine

Aside from the part where the protagonist reveals his true feelings, the plot is very interesting. As for the past and present lives of the father and daughter, my understanding is that both father and daughter were indigenous in the previous life, and the father's soul in the previous life was not occupied by the time travellers. In this life, the time traveler occupies the father's body, and the daughter has the memory of the previous life but is not the time traveler.

Damn, this trash protagonist Bibi Dong was still raped

Introduction to Yuanxun Road

I feel that the author has written quite well, with different development prospects, and some poisonous points of the protagonist in the previous life. Unlike other cool articles, it can be said that he has been favored. However, there is nothing wrong with writing this way. If I were to travel to the Douluo world, I don't think I would do better than the protagonist. Maybe I would just pass through. Nothing in life is smooth sailing, and there are always some unsatisfactory things. It is good to let the protagonist suffer a little bit. Come on, author.

Brother Jie's martial spirit: Pig (also known as the "Smiling Pig" by Lu Wei and others) (PS: The prototype is a Tang Dynasty funerary object in the Xinjiang Museum.)

After reading it, among countless Douluo fanfics, this protagonist has neither completed the modernization of the mainland nor solved the problems of the divine world to create peace for all generations. He is just hunting for beauty.

Oh, I finally understand that Qianxunji, Qianxunlu, Bibi Dong, and Yu Xiaogang are related. Bibi Dong likes Qianxunlu but only slightly didn't realize it. Later, Yu Xiaogang broke into Bibi Dong's world and made her think that she liked Yu Xiaogang. Then Qianxunji's plot is normal. As for why Qianxunji dared to do this, the reason is that although Wuhundian has been trying to find ways to get Xunlu Bibi Dong together, because the protagonist is too straightforward and Yu Xiaogang happened to break in, Qianxunji thought that they didn't like each other, so he dared to CZ Bibi Dong.

The writing is not bad, and so is my dad. There is just something wrong with the character development of the male protagonist. I think character creation is very important for a novel; if your character is pure and pure, but you have double standards later on, you may be scolded by readers. But if your protagonist's character is inherently double-standard, then double-standards will be easily accepted. The reason why I say there is something wrong with my character is because since I like Bibi Dong, why not take action? Today's readers should all like the protagonist to be superior to others, rather than someone else having the protagonist. And this is when the protagonist has the ability to change this matter. The protagonist is powerful, and there is an Ultimate Douluo father behind him. If the protagonist traveled through time when Tang San became a god, then it would be acceptable to act bad. The key is that Tang San started acting bad before he was born. Even if you write a story about a dad, you cannot shape the protagonist's character like this. As for Dugu Bo, at the time when the protagonist was born, Dugu Bo had not yet reached the title of Douluo. This shows that the two eyes of ice and fire have not been discovered yet. If it is because Tang San is the person chosen by God Asura, but there is a first-level God Angel God behind the protagonist, and the five god kings of the God Realm are divided into three camps, God Shura is one, destruction and life are one, evil and kindness are a bit salty, and God cannot interfere with the affairs of the lower world, does God Shura, the law enforcer, have to know the law and break the law? The God of Destruction is staring at God Shura. Of course, if you remove the character of the protagonist, it would still be a good novel. At least it would be more interesting to write other plots.

Evaluate it, this is a daddy novel

I've already ordered all of Chapter 358. You can tell the content by just reading the title. I don't want to read it. Can the author not make the title so detailed? It's not a famous book.