The Urban Alchemist's Guide to Life

Daily Guide It's okay so far But the writing seems weird and there are problems with the plot development First of all, there is the unlucky protagonist's family. Although the reasons are explained, the protagonist's family is really unlucky and everything happens to them. There is also the abstract military department. The protagonist was arrested after he signed the contract and left. It was so abstract that he couldn't even save a hostage. Before returning to school, I met someone who stole the formula. I can only say yes. I went back to school and formed a team for a team fight for no apparent reason. I was confused. What happened? Why did this happen all of a sudden? Can't you take a break and develop yourself? It seems that the longest time for the protagonist to develop was when he first traveled through time. There is also the issue of foreshadowing. Sometimes it is mentioned out of nowhere (such as the unlucky book at the beginning) and then disappears. The background introduction of the characters feels a bit like an afterthought, and it is too long. I really can't understand the team battle formation, the plot arrangement is too tight. The above is based on my feelings. It looks okay, so I guess it's not easy to find a book like yours these days.

The society the author writes about seems a bit deformed. I don't believe there would be no anti-social organizations in such a society? After all, as long as you are a genius, you will always be targeted. The society the author writes about feels like a world of aristocratic families with no opportunities for civilians to improve. Even if you have the feeling, you will enter the research institute. The more you look at it, the more it looks like the social relationship of a full-time mage.

51 Persuasion/52/53/ Let's revise these chapters. There's nothing wrong with the rest. It's just that it's too boring, ink-stained and verbose. Not many people want to read novels like this. Are the protagonist's parents idiots (maybe only the reader's perspective can tell, but the design problem here is also quite big.)? They didn't realize that by bringing them to the capital, the protagonist would have nothing to worry about. Staying so far away would do nothing but make the protagonist worried. Such a profound image of the parents was completely ruined in these chapters, and the plot was dragged out and ink.

I originally thought Goldfinger was good, but the addition of some trivial daily ink stains brought the whole novel down.

Alchemists don't know how to make alchemy, literally.

I feel like I can't stand the new ones... Maybe it's because the remnants of the past are too abrupt, or the performance is too bad. It made me feel that it had no meaning other than the word count, and even lowered my overall expectations for this book.

If you remove the girl at the beginning, I feel that the trouble will be reduced by half. I feel that this girl is just causing trouble, so it is of no use.

After reading Chapter 100, I strayed away from the theme of alchemy.

An interesting soul must have an interesting story, come on👏

When I saw the team competition, I felt it was completely different from the previous ones.

After reading a few chapters, it feels a bit like A Dream, with the (pseudo-)omnipotent alchemy pot and the host family who have everything going wrong.

It feels like the author has built a large world setting, but it seems that I have no confidence in the author's writing skills! The setting is too big, so I'm afraid it won't be finished, so I'll save it first.

The next college competition will require a large number of NPCs. If you are interested in appearing in it, please leave a message with your expected character and name. Probability of falling in the book~

Why, Lu Zhengyu and Lu Yucheng are mixed together, can they be unified?