Open Douluo in the Way of Palu

Although it looks quite relaxed, your cultivation system is completely broken. Xiao Wu has a cultivation level of more than 70,000 years, while the Titan Giant Ape and Azure Bull Python have only more than 10,000 years and 30,000 years respectively, and A Yin has already transformed, which means that it is only a few years before the plot begins. I just want to ask, what can they do to cultivate to the level of 100,000 years at the beginning of the plot? Did he eat some treasure from heaven and earth, or is it because the soul beasts in your book can cultivate so quickly?

Half of Douluo's gods are not human 😏

If you don't do it, there will be Parugan 🙂

It's not interesting at all and the plot is too cliche. If you were still interested in reading this if it was written ten years ago. The protagonist just keeps going outside to seek death, right? It's okay to just stay in the Star Dou Forest, and the age of the soul beasts doesn't match up at all. How do you think these soul beasts like Xiao Wu have advanced tens of thousands of years in just a few decades? Even sucking the Heavenly Dream Ice Silkworm can't do it.

No, for the sake of plot development, forcibly creating some kind of conflict 😰 and fucking it twice is really 🐮ah😦

The subject matter is quite interesting, and I don't care about the soul beast cultivation bug, but your plot and deliberate crisis creation are a bit overwhelming. It takes a long time to write something, but it is very useless, and skipping it will not affect it. This kind of plot is the fatal flaw of new books that no one reads. If you don't have a successful vest, don't do this. If no one reads it, it will be difficult to put it on the shelves. The operation of the Palu plug-in is still too ordinary, not imaginative enough, and it cannot attract people. The setting is interesting at the beginning, but then it becomes an ordinary Douluo novel.

1. Xiao Wu's parents use the book-eating setting of Legend of the God Realm. 2. The writing style and plot are biased towards ancient fantasy. People just want to step on you (although this seems to be the case in Douluo Yi's original work). 3. The timeline is wrong. The original book said that Da Erming and Xiao Wu had lived together for more than 100,000 years. As a result, by the time Xiaowu appeared in this book for 76,000 years, A Yin had already transformed. 4. Douluo's low-level soul beasts are not very strong. Trained soulless soldiers can hunt down warriors who are under a hundred years old, and a team of hundreds of years old can be hunted down without any casualties.

The timeline is a mess. Tang Hao is already that old. Those soul beasts are already 100,000 years old, not 99,000 years old. What the heck, it's a mess. It was a good subject matter, but author Yun has ruined it.

Readers who like farming and readers who like crisis are in conflict. If you write both plots, you will only end up being unable to retain both kinds of people. I hope you can make a choice soon.

Every time I read your topic, I feel like I want to read it, but when I see the introduction, I have no desire to read it at all.

The protagonist is too weak. It's been so long and he still hasn't reached level 20?

When writing this novel, have you really read the original work? The Azure Bull Python has 30,000 years of cultivation and can still speak. A Yin has transformed into a human being. Xiao Wu has 70,000 years of cultivation. How do you write that?

😅 It was mentioned earlier that there is a resurrection setting. The protagonist is not dead, and they will not die. They can be resurrected no matter how they try to die. How do you write at the end that they can still be killed but cannot be resurrected? It's a good setting. It should be changed. Why do you still want to suppress the protagonist's mechanism? The card strength feels too strong. Getting stronger is also in the later stage. The early writing was good, but it was changed randomly. It's a good subject, but it was ruined by writing it directly.

This look was drawn by AI.

My writing skills need to be improved. It feels like I'm reading an essay.

The early stage is always a life and death crisis

By the way, is the little Yakuza a bit too strong at home? Tyrannosaurus Rex and Clear Sky Hammer a bit. That's too much. In this case, shouldn't he be allowed to become a single martial soul?

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good and the plot is average.

This book is very well written, but there is another book that I can still read - Douluo Peerless: Life Simulator

Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)

There are many pallu in Douluo Continent. If you don't do it, there will be many pallu.

You should change the timeline first, otherwise you won't be able to watch it at all.

The writing is getting better and better, and the improvement is obvious 😁

When did you go and capture the Silver Dragon King? 😁

It's written like a running account, the writing style is not very good, and there is no passion at all.

I finally found a Douluo from the A-yin period, and the writing was so good! What a pity. Do you have any recommendations for novels from this period?

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.