Super Power: I Can Create a Clone Every Day

Brother, are you here to write a novel or to take the postgraduate entrance examination (doge)

Writing is a clone every day, reading is an opportunity to awaken your talent every day, and speeding up idle practice every day. Because most of the things are done by the main body, while the other clones lie at home, or else one clone does it, and the main body and the other clones lie dead.

Stop writing about your emotional lines. All the female characters are offline. Even those can't be said to be emotional lines and should be called dog-licking lines. If you don't know how to write, then just stop writing. And I don't even bother to say the name of the female character.

What I don't understand is that the main body is required to show up during a fight. What does the clone do?

After reading the first chapter, I felt that this book was quite speechless. The protagonist's parents died in the line of duty, and there was no compensation at all. Even the inheritance of the parents could not be successfully inherited. You are too insinuating the real society, and it is even much worse than the real society. Is this a phenomenon that exists in a civilized modern spiritual society? There's something wrong with your book from the beginning

Chapter 7 is a big poisonous point. When a hero saves a beauty, he or she should save a beautiful school girl who is rich and beautiful and has awakened the power of prophecy. The protagonist has no money and no strength. Is Goldfinger still as brave as he was when he just came out? And he has cultivated immortality to the point where he becomes obsessed with just a rejection. Then he has never cultivated. The reason is too far-fetched.

The author has a good idea, but it is too immature. Many bad points are hard-written and the ideas are too casual. For example, the clone talent. The first idea should be that the main body is hiding and the clone goes on adventures. As a result, the author writes that the clone is hiding and the main body goes on adventures to save people. Many novels write about the main body and the main body to save people because the clone has no combat power and is equivalent to an illusion. But your completely synchronized main body does not apply at all. The author also makes excuses saying that the protagonist does not know that people will die if they are killed. Yeah, yeah, it's really interesting that a person whose parents both died doesn't understand.

Is this the author's fault? The plot is too cliche, a dog-licking novel. If you don't write about women, the plot will not develop. Hey, what was originally a very innovative plug-in was written in a clichéd way. To sum up, the plot is cliche, and the plug-ins are okay.

Good ability, but poor brains

All I can say is, it's too redundant. The author really didn't dare to think about it. One clone a day. Add another talent to the clone. The most important talent can be used at any time, no matter Xiao Xiami. Directly traveling between the two worlds, my god, the protagonist I wrote has no brain left. Are you trying to activate the two-world shuttle talent without preparation? ? ? Aren't you afraid of death? Do you think the protagonist is worse than a pig? . . . It's easy to collapse if you write like this, and you won't be able to write about 300,000 words. One avatar per day and 365 avatars per year, which means that the annual cultivation speed is 365 times that of the previous one. How many years will it take for you to become invincible and become emperor? The key is that you also give talents to each clone? Can you write that much? I turned around and forgot what talent the clone had. . . Chapter 70 will make you invincible.

There are a lot of poison points. First, the clone can awaken talents. Since many people have awakened this talent, everyone must know whether the clone can awaken the talent, but the author's book describes the protagonist asking the teacher for advice on whether it can be reactivated by going to the talent room to experiment. What's going on? If so, what are the consequences? What happens if I can't? Second, the clone can be awakened again after twelve o'clock every day, and the woman discovered it very casually. Extremely poisonous, with no sense of confidentiality at all. You can see it. Third, technological items are brought back to other worlds at will. Who doesn't know that technological items have backdoors? It is obvious that the protagonist Mengxin is simple, kind and cute. So easy to deceive. It is recommended to download the anti-fraud APP. . . . .

Setting it gives me a headache and makes me jump while reading. Will it affect my subsequent reading? Also, are there still so many settings later? If so, you won't be able to watch it.

If you don't know how to write about feelings, then really don't write anymore.

There are too many settings, clones and talents. This kind of setting is not something that novices can control. There are more and more clones, and there are more and more things to do. It's a bit messy at the beginning, and then it becomes even harder to write.

It looks weird 🙂 It was originally a modern cultivator, followed by the Two Worlds stream. . .

You crammed in a lot of settings at the beginning, and then the training arrangements were not very reasonable and the value was not maximized. The plot arrangement seems a bit rushed, take your time, don't rush. The secret technique of swallowing the stars and controlling souls is very suitable for your talent. You can make one as a reference.

The setting is novel, the plot is endlessly cliche, and the plot arranged by the female author is like shit. Doesn't it look boring? If it's out of five stars, my rating would be one star, and it's still based on the settings.

At the beginning, it felt like there wasn't much actual content. It just introduced what level and how much energy it needed to absorb. It was a pure introduction to the settings, but too many settings made it look confusing. Anyway, I already forgot what it was about when I wrote about the level after reading it.

1. There are too many settings, and there are too many unimportant settings. They can be split into separate chapters 2. We should pay attention to the protagonist's own development and reduce the appearance of female characters So it's too tiring to read.

To be honest, the idea is pretty good. Not a bad start either. It's a pity that it was written crookedly. And there is no main line. There is no goal in the early stage. The writing is like a running novel, with very little substantive plot. Provide creative direction 1. The academy stream is the main one, supplemented by traveling to different worlds. It mainly describes the plot within the school, with the main line being the improvement of combat effectiveness. For example, how much cultivation talent can each clone provide, or how much cultivation progress can be improved. How much impact does it have on combat effectiveness? Later, I will write in detail about the clones with special talents, and just say a word about common talents for the clones with ordinary talents. Of the two worlds, the wild combat world is the best. The other world is responsible for resources, combat experience, etc., And the main world is responsible for skills, spells, information, etc. In the early stage, you can also write about the college entrance examination flow, from remote areas to central areas. The current description of the battle is not at all, and it is even confusing the standard of combat power. In this way, there is no need to wait until the later stage. In the early and middle stages, readers should run away.

A clone every day, are you planning to explode the earth?

The clone can awaken abilities... Why not awaken a... Super-brain-like ability...? ? ? ? Having huge computing power... Makes it easier to control nearly unlimited clones? ? ? ? You can also awaken a... Teleportation ability... The clone is a spatial coordinate... The clone and the main body are teleporting to each other? ? ? What about... A storage ability... Both the clone and the main body share a storage space...? I also need... The ability to communicate and connect regardless of the space world... So that the protagonist's clone will not disconnect the main body when he travels between two worlds? ? ? Come on... A comprehensive recovery ability... That can quickly restore spiritual power... Restore wounds... Restore physical strength...? ? ? What's more... A shared ability... Can the clone and the main body share the ability of almost infinite clones? ? ? ? Except for the entity clone ability of the main body? ? ? ? But... It feels pretty good😎 With these abilities put together... Could the clone be the fourth natural disaster? ? ?

Fully booked! This book is the best book I have read in years. Each character is very full-bodied, the economic system is very rigorous, and the combat power is not compromised. The fighting scenes are as immersive as they are. The most important thing is that the plot is interlocking. The protagonist uses his absolute IQ to crush the enemy. There is no breakthrough on the spot, and no short-term plot. I really don't know how the author wrote such a masterpiece, which can be called a fantasy version of the epic.

One clone a day... A hundred clones in a hundred days? ? ? There are 365 clones in one year... 3650 Clones in ten years... 36500 Clones in a hundred years! ! This can be said to be almost infinite clones...

The content and background introduction is too cumbersome, I can't stand it anymore, so I say goodbye.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Some of them are awkward, starting from greeting the girl to following her.

Poison, too much poison. There is too much nonsense, it is all about children playing house, it is too depressing to watch. It's gone, it's gone

The writing is okay, there's nothing too bad about it, it's just that the resources needed and the new aura settings are a bit too much, so just skip it.

According to the author's conception (talented clones are not new, if the writing is wonderful, they will be very powerful, and it feels like it has nothing to do with the author), the talent is comparable to supernatural powers (there are many thieves), this is a higher latitude world of immortality. Look at how many of your writings are about cultivating immortals. They are not about trivial matters in life (similar to buying spiritual rice, etc. It is necessary to write in such detail and complexity. People who are not good at reading have long been tired of reading them, and they are tired of aesthetics, which is boring). Write a plot about a man and a woman having sex (same as above, I'm tired of watching TV series and the like, it's really boring) Summary: Not doing the right thing (the big world view of my own conception, write some side stories) If it is not for Shulang, please ignore it!

The writing is very good. The author writes carefully and don't listen to some people who are looking for problems.