Traveling Through the Heavens, the Famous Opening Scene

This timeline and plot can be said to be nonsense, where did the Space Marines come from during the Unification War, Thunder Warriors: Where did we go? There is also Titan, the God's Mechanical Emperor who has not even gone to Mars. The oil guy: Good guy, we have nothing to do with him! All I can say is what is this?

The subject matter is well chosen, but the writing is poor. Brother, your writing is beyond words.

Your writing is terrible. Especially the dialogue. 😅😅😅😅

It's better than expected, but the writing is too dry. It should be polished a little more. The Warhammer part was written too hastily. It can be said that there are not many details, but I'm glad it didn't include a harem.

The author wrote the plot quite early. There really aren't many Warhammer novels that start from the same war. Also, if you want to change what will happen in the future and save people, have you considered starting with Amal Astartes? As the most powerful geneticist in existence who created the Thunder Warriors, the Warriors Astartes and the Primarch, if she can continue to survive, it will have a better influence in the future. Of course, if the time point has passed or writing this way will have a bad impact on your plot, you don't need to write it like this. After all, I am just talking about an idea.

More Gundam. Thank you. The monthly ticket has been given to 🙂🙂

I just want to watch Warhammer and the rest is boring

The writing is pretty good, why don't you update it?

The First Legion: Repent, tomorrow is your death day

The subject matter is good, but the writing needs more polishing.