Witcher: I Can Gain Monster Abilities

I usually don't post when I read novels. At most, I just comment on the good places I see in the book. But reading this novel really made me feel uncomfortable, and I couldn't help but feel unhappy. First of all, the author's concept is very good, the idea of ​​killing monsters to gain special skills is good, and the author's control of the plot of the story is also good. The protagonist is not a virgin who dares to kill anyone. This also motivated me to read dozens of chapters. But, is your protagonist really a time traveler? Your setting is about a college student traveling through time. But which college student would dare to debone someone just a few days after time travel? Just think of it as a psychological change after gaining power. But did you, a college student, travel through time and lose your brain? Have you forgotten all the knowledge you learned in history and politics classes, and all the TV series you watched? When encountering the troublesome people and barons, they would only wait for others to get in their faces before fighting back. Especially the scene later when the baron and the protagonist are negotiating in the tavern really made me laugh. He actually let the baron go like this. Is the protagonist SB? The baron said that if you kill me, my soldiers will kill everyone in the village, and the protagonist will not take action! ! ! Apart from killing the baron, you didn't have the option of kidnapping him and threatening the soldiers at all, right? Is it because I traveled to the magical Middle Ages and my brain was contaminated by magic? Is your talent for plundering invisible and robbing monsters of their IQ? You kidnap the baron and see if his soldiers dare to kill the villagers regardless of his life or death. This is the Middle Ages. If a soldier dares to disregard the life and death of his lord, he will die as well if the lord dies. And don't think of each of these soldiers as NPCs with full loyalty, okay? In this case, the male protagonist is decisive in killing, and then his IQ drops, which will cause a serious separation of the character's behavior and personality, and it will be very uncomfortable for people watching! One more thing, the author, when you wrote the plot of Baiguoyuan, did you consider the issue of productivity. As mentioned earlier, there are only a few hundred villagers in this place, let's call it two or three hundred. There must be too many soldiers under this baron. There must be more than 50 people in total. (I only saw the hero and the baron negotiating in the tavern) And ridiculously nearly half of them were cavalry. Do you know how much it costs to feed these soldiers? What's more, the baron still maintains a luxurious life. Are the trees produced in Baiguoyuan's lumberyard made of gold? Although I know you wrote it like this to advance the plot, it's really very divisive. I couldn't stand it any longer and ran away.

Now that I've read Chapter 10, let me first say that I really like this subject. There is a problem with the setting of the witcher. As for the author respecting games and novels so much, I have nothing to say. You disrespect yourself, and the readers. Your value is to create your own different story in the original destiny and radiate your own brilliance. Obviously you don't have this ability, that's my evaluation of your first 10 chapters. Excessive respect for authority and superstition of idols. Your views on games and novels are too good, which led you to write this novel. You respect this novel, respect this game and film and television series. But you don't respect yourself, let alone the readers. The first 10 pieces of writing have no problems at all, but the narrative and story are like an old woman's footcloth, smelly and long, and I can't chew it anymore. Goodbye.

I laughed when I saw the part about the witcher not killing humans in Chapter 11. When I played the Witcher 3, Geralt killed a few scoundrels in the tavern as soon as he arrived at the Orchard. It's not for nothing that people say you are the Holy Mother. It's you. The Holy Mother is not a witcher.

Judging from the situation, the protagonist's outlook is similar to that of modern ordinary people, and the combat effectiveness brought by the golden finger is improved, if any. I couldn't stand the chapter when I saw the protagonist arguing with the baron about who was right and who was wrong. Earlier, the protagonist had just killed the baron's group, and the girl he had just fallen in love with was captured and her life and death were uncertain. She might have been gang-raped (a widow in the village had already been gang-raped and died and fell into a tree). Then the protagonist went to see the baron and argued for a chapter about who was right and who was wrong, trying to prove verbally that the baron was wrong. It looks very awkward.

The setting of the original work is inherently unreasonable. Everything is based on the premise that there will no longer be collisions between celestial bodies and there is no need for demon hunters anymore. But the problem is that you need it in reality. So why aren't you afraid of a Superman? Have you seen Ancestors? Why was it filmed? It's because Superman's setting is anti-human, which is stupid! If you hit me, I can't fight back. Ordinary people can't kill. An idiotic setting. That's why ancestors slaughter ordinary people. This is true human nature!

You will never find a witcher novel that doesn't have the Virgin Mary nanny in the starting point, because those protagonists are just a thing to wipe other people's butts, and no author writes the protagonist to jump out of the disgusting witcher framework setting. In the game, players help people to do it for extremely low money, and do various hunting missions just because the game itself does this so that you can experience more plots. As long as it is as free as Baldur's Gate 3🤓

What a stupid pig's trotter, written as a time traveler, but ended up being imprisoned in the witcher rules like an indigenous witcher, and turned out to be just a tool

Alas, I don't need to read in depth now. I just need to carefully look for the chapter where the protagonist has contact with normal people. Alas, I can know whether my book is good or not. I don't need to read the content at all. I only need to read two or three paragraphs to avoid poison. This novel is also a classic plot. If you can't fight back, if you can't retaliate when you scold, I just want to let you go, let you live, and let you call people to continue beating and insulting. Alas, the main theme is a cheap demon.

Well, I have read a few witcher novels recently, and I always felt that they were very uncomfortable. I have some personal complaints about the world of witchers. This so-called world of witchers is really fucked up. In particular, the protagonist is a demon hunter who is disliked by ordinary people, disliked by nobles, and disliked by soldiers. Damn it, he is tied up in all kinds of ways. Especially the protagonist of the book of the Bear School dislikes the world so much. We already have prestige, territory, money, and strength, so why not take the time to overthrow them? As long as the power develops, the protagonist of the Xiong School will ride on the ancient dragon. With the strength displayed by the current kingdoms, no one can withstand the beheading tactic.

Give me this kind of golden finger. If there is a piece of water ghost hair in the water, I lose. I directly gained the magical power. In addition, the protagonist's personality is as bad as a brainless person. Retreat first. . . Not suitable for me

As shown

Before it was released, this section was long and boring. When the protagonist arrived, he continued to describe the torture of the lord. If you want to promote it, you should suppress it first, right? Forget it, buddy, I can't stand it anymore. I don't want to see how you feel good later. The emotional incoherence that breaks off now and then. I suppress my desire first and feel disgusted. I can't stand it anymore.

How should I put it, the author is a bit too childish about currency, maybe it is to make it easier for readers to understand. In fact, in novels and games, currency is very complicated. There are banks, interest rates, bank loans, usury, and exchange rates, which will fluctuate with changes in the situation. At the same time, each country has its own independent currency. Take The Witcher 3 game as an example. There are two basic currencies in it, the Orens of the Kingdom of Temeria and the crowns of Novigrad. At the peak of Temeria, the exchange rate with Novigrad crowns was 1 crown ≈ 6 orens. When Temeria was destroyed, the orens instantly devalued and became worthless. Players in the game The coins you get from opening boxes at the wild treasure points in the Temerian territory such as Baiguoyuan and Velen are Orens, which can be exchanged for Novigrad Crowns at the Vivaldi Bank in Novigrad. I remember that the approximate ratio is 1 crown ≈ 13 Orens, and the tasks in the game are calculated in Crowns for the convenience of players. There are even more currencies that appear in the Witcher novels. For example, the currency used by the Kingdom of Kaedwen is the ducat, the currency used by the Free City is Linta, Temeria is Oren, and Novigrad is Crown (there are other cities and The country also uses krona), and the Nilfgaard Empire uses the florin (there is another main currency like 1 pound = 12 shillings). I forgot the currencies of Redania and Aedirn, except that the currency system of the Nilfgaard Empire is different. The conversion of the main currency (silver coins) and auxiliary coins (copper coins) of his currency seems to be 1=100. You need to check the specific information. In the novel, Geralt participated in hunting the golden dragon. In the story, Geralt accepted a task and the reward was the free city XX (the free city here is There are no noble feudal lords, it is a city with autonomous citizens but it still belongs to the kingdom rather than an independent city) 200 Lin Towers, Geralt bluntly said that it is not valuable at all and it is not enough to wear out the equipment. At the same time, the currency will also depreciate in purchasing power due to wear and tear. So I hope the author can improve this aspect to enhance readers' sense of immersion. Even if your economic system settings are a mess, changing the names of coins to names in games or novels can also enhance the sense of immersion. In addition, I would like to mention that whether it is Crown, Oren, Durant, or Florin, they are all called silver coins, but in fact they are gold and silver alloys, with gold accounting for the majority. The silver is added because of the manufacturing process and the exorcism effect of silver. In fact, they should be gold coins 🙂. The currencies in the game are also golden.

The topics were all wrong. Upgrade, transcendence, follow-up. You wrote about my thoughts and morals here, and also discussed human nature. It's quite inappropriate for me. You might as well take a look. Goodbye

How can I put it, maybe I am used to the kind of gratification in the martial arts arena, and I feel very uncomfortable when I see the protagonist being submissive in front of the lowest noble.

It's cool, it's over, I traveled to another fucking world and became a super human, and I still have to tie my hands and feet, and get rid of all the unruly people.

If I had this kind of plug-in, everyone passing by would be killed, and every NPC that came into view would have to try their explosion skills.

Probably exporting abnormal thoughts fooling readers

Looking at the introduction, it makes people think that instead of hunting monsters, they must help monsters, spread plagues, and win over inhuman races and extraordinary beings. Only when these countries are weak can there be room for demon hunters to survive. If you clean up monsters and help civilians, there is no benefit except stabilizing these countries and then dealing with extraordinary beings and non-human races. It's stupid to do this for your own living space

To be honest, I don't think those who come to scold you necessarily mean you well. As far as I'm concerned, if the writing was really rubbish, then I wouldn't even come to scold you, I would just leave. I think the author has not figured out the direction and purpose of being an author. When you are an author, you are either not interested in the author's three melons and two dates, but are here to have fun and practice writing. If you want to practice writing, then I will not say anything and just delete it. After all, "There are thousands of you in the world. If it doesn't work, I will change it." If you still want to eat this bowl of rice, then you should listen to the opinions of readers and read books written by great writers. To be honest, books written by great writers really don't give people the feeling of your book. I think your writing style is online, but you have not controlled the direction of your writing well. It's a pity.

The first 20 chapters are very good, but then it starts to drag. I want to describe the difficult situation of the witcher, but I am not good at writing. It is really smelly and long.