Mystery: Child of the Red Moon
诡秘，红月之子
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 316k Words
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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131Chapters
601Recommendations
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I finally understand why this book felt off.
The protagonist is too arrogant The protagonist keeps saying that he doesn't have any cheat codes, and that he feels he is choosing between something bad and something even worse. He also feels that the current sequence pathway is an outdated relic that will be eliminated by the times.
No, bro, you're a fanfic writer!
Dude, your writing is good and your thinking is clear, but you should be aware of how padded the beginning was. I saw your reply earlier saying that drinking potions in two days was too fast, so why don't you reflect on why it only took two days in over 30 chapters? To put it nicely, it's called meticulousness; to put it bluntly, it's just padded.
The author gives me the feeling that they want to capitalize on the popularity of the "Mystery of the Unknown" genre, yet simultaneously look down on it.
Writing is not about being as detailed as possible; otherwise, there wouldn't be a term called "appropriate balance of detail and summary." In my opinion, the two most common mistakes new writers make are: one is the excessive amount of nonsensical environmental descriptions (common in female-oriented fiction).
Too slow, more than 30 chapters and I still haven't drunk the potion.
It's currently very good, and the writing style is quite engaging. The key question is, is this book a single-character/multiple-character story? Honestly, this kind of world and the protagonist's personality aren't suitable for a female lead. I hope it doesn't end up like the last book where Su Xiaoqiang suddenly appears in the Dragon Raja universe; I almost gave up when I got to that part.
The ink marks, dozens of them, haven't even gotten to the main point yet. I thought it was written by some expert.
This is hilarious! I don't even know if the author has read *The Mysterious* or not. If he hasn't, he knows there's no oil in the protagonist's era; if he has, the protagonist's family can still dig oil out of the ground.
In Chapter 3, you already deduced that Rosell was a time traveler, so why did you start to suspect her again later? Besides, why didn't the protagonist look at the Emperor's diary? It's impossible that the protagonist's family didn't have the original diary.
The protagonist is just an ordinary person.
To think that one could understand the potion system is simply wishful thinking. The potion system in the mysterious world is already the most gentle supernatural system.
Who taught you to write an opening like this? 😅 You're just talking to yourself.