
American Comics: I Became a Citizen of My Country During World War I
美漫:我在一战当祖国人
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- 72k Words
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- Anime Crossover
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American comics: I drew Superman during the Great Depression
If your abilities are limited, engage in technology. Don't forget your super brain. You don't need to write down the process. Just say that you used your super brain to create so-and-so, and then use it.
The writing is a bit confusing. The most important point of excitement in the novel is the foreshadowing. The author just copied all the works of his predecessors. Obviously, the Great Depression can not suppress the protagonist and write a novel about the motherland. I slowly wrote American comics, but it was uncomfortable to write both. One of them was not interesting, it was bland, and it didn't match the title of the book. I don't know how you dared to name it. I didn't know how easy it was to write the novel. I didn't know how easy it was to write. In the end, I failed to play good cards. Go to the starting point for training. If you really want to eat novels,
When writing about people from the motherland, don't overwhelm the protagonist. Anyone who overwhelms the protagonist must not be able to write well about the people of the motherland. People from the motherland will have some facial expressions in public, but not much. If you do it unscrupulously in private, if you suffer a loss publicly, you will take revenge in private.
Your label is Invincible Flow. Don't be so deliberate about going after the Great Depression. The first three chapters of this book are really not so-called. They are too deliberate.
Is the author the trumpet of the Great Depression Superman? If that's the case, then I'm not very optimistic about it. I'll throw myself into the street.
The only thing that Mustache did right was to exterminate the Jews, but unfortunately he didn't do it completely.
Cut again
After cutting it and then coming back to write it, I found that all the people were gone, so I cut it again, right?
Continue the previous setting? Do you want to go out on the street again?
Looking at the introduction, I feel a bit familiar.
The imitation of my drawing of Superman in the Great Depression is not as good as that one.
I just read it today. When I read the last chapter, you told me that you planned to cut it?
Changing the perspective is a mess, and the plot logic is also a mess.
He's a eunuch
American Comics: I drew Superman during the Great Depression, exactly the same.
Hahahaha, the novel is average, but the fun comes first 😂
Hahahaha, after another, boomerang of boomerang
No, buddy, I saw the latest chapter and suddenly saw you cut it? !
①In terms of Tao and art, choose the road with fewer people, and choose the volume on the road with fewer people. It is recommended that the author should choose the road with fewer people and spend more time and energy. If failure is a high probability, why not be a fleeting meteor that can at least be remembered. It is better than a featureless book that dies in a corner and remains unknown from beginning to end. . ②Know clearly what your selling points are and what race track you choose. It is the only law, superiority, invincible literature, extraordinary reality, crossing between two realms, extraordinary village of novices, the weapon of truth bullies the weak, the story has always been in the kindergarten, why not to dominate, creation is the wilderness, for example, in the normal world of historical literature, you can change history by playing extraordinary games. For example, in the world of low martial arts, you can use the extraordinary skill to become an immortal. If you can't write anything, you can write it as mixed, so you don't go to the world of high-end power to find abuse. The starting point is too many junk books that abuse the master and suppress the combat power. . ③ Readers' feedback to the author, most people's feedback to individuals, the pros and cons of trade-offs. ④ If new and small authors want to stand out among many similar authors, they cannot listen to all the editors of Qidian. The interests of small authors like you are not the same as those of the Qidian platform. Understand that what everyone says and does when it comes to matters of vital interest is motivated by their own self-interest. ⑤The current path to "successful online writing" is the product of the daily update volume and the quality of the work, but the focus is different. . Unless you are confident that the quality of the work can stand out among similar works of the same period and become a minority, you will have to publish more updates. Rather than publishing it later, it is better to publish it early. Neither of them can win over others, so just rely on your luck or connections. . I feel that many new book authors are wasting their time and energy, spending their time and energy on things that can be grasped, rather than things that cannot be grasped. ⑥If there is a high probability that the result is a rush, then you must be a shooting star. . ⑦ Often the reader's perspective and standpoint. Why do readers spend money in exchange for your story text? Long-term subscription rewards are not given by charity, but by exchange. Human nature. . The god of farts, the god of weaklings, and the fighting routines that suppress the protagonist's combat power and upgrade step by step. 849) If the protagonist of the web novel chooses to change the world after traveling through time, powerful extraordinary plug-ins are a must. Of course, if you invest in a good pregnancy, choose to eat and drink, follow the general trend of history and be a speculator, or be an ordinary person in the so-called peaceful and prosperous times and live in peace, without thinking about changing history, this kind of choice does not require any powerful plug-ins. There are no powerful plug-ins to change the world. Either the author's writing style and ideas are excellent, or he is trying to outwit his opponents and the readers. The extraordinary cheat cheat tells readers clearly that the protagonist is superior for a clear reason, because the protagonist is a superman, and he and others are not competing for the same ecological niche at all. The effect of extraordinary cheat cheats is uncontroversial and certain, while some people give examples of controversial things, such as the bad luck of the enemy and the protagonist. What do you think is the core of what I said above? It is certainty, whether there is any controversy. At least I don't think that there is a high probability that future generations of soldier kings or engineers who travel back to the bottom of the dynasty will be able to change the world and fight for the dragon and become emperor. . Invincible flow solipsistic novel The keywords I gave: God in the world, solipsism, detachment from human nature, fun person, game world, chaotic neutrality, human possibility. I have read two self-centered novels. A certain secular powerful man hides behind the scenes and uses secular rules to embarrass the protagonist. The protagonist directly cheats and turns him into a pug 🐶 and a frog 🐸. . . 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Technique? "Master" "Infinitely Stronger from Marvel" "Plane Little Butterfly" 20240731 Added "Invincible Urban Management" and "Ominous Bird Talisman" I have been reading books for so many years, and it is a strong power system. ●There is such a protagonist. The concepts of heaven, material, earth treasures, skills, magic weapons, props, etc. Are all illusory and useless to the protagonist. The external existence cannot harm or benefit the protagonist. The only price for the protagonist to become stronger is to awaken or lose me. . . From "Go and Create the World" ●There is such a protagonist, the eternal state caused by the blood lock, everything is set, edited and searched, and those infinite beings who practice detachment, who is stronger and who is weaker? From "World Modification System" ●There is such a protagonist, everything is information, everything is setting editing. From "Non-Human Gene Complex" ●There is such a protagonist, the setting editor describes all kinds of boasts, the transcendent, the unified, the perfect, the awakened, the real only exist outside the story ending and the story, and people are just watching the mainstream plot. . . From "The Magical Prop Master" Magic and superpowers, contained objects, gods and Buddhas. There are several most annoying situations in novels. 0) The protagonist of the Ordinary Person Template has neither so-called malice nor unreasonable kindness in his life and work. Both extremes make people feel that the story told by the author is particularly fake. 1) The protagonist obtains superpowers, permissions, systems, items or other types of cheats, and then immediately jumps to a family or organization. The protagonist must be accepted as his younger brother (pay attention to the difference between being led and cooperating). Personally, I think it is best to have an exclusive protagonist in the real world. If you look at the dungeon world, you need to add it. 2) The protagonist is originally an ordinary person, an ordinary person chosen by the author. As a result, it was discovered in the subsequent plot that the protagonist turned out to be the lost prince. Either one has noble blood or one's life is noble. Anyway, the protagonist is born dragon and phoenix. I believe that the vast majority of readers lack a sense of empathy, identification and belonging for this kind of protagonist, let alone emotional resonance and intimacy. 3) There is obviously invincible capital, but due to various reasons or things being restricted everywhere, readers feel frustrated. . . 4) The content here is dead 5) When you see a woman, you become mentally retarded, and when you meet a beautiful woman, you take her into the harem. The author only describes the relationship between men and women only about women's bodies and mating, and nothing else at all. 6) An inexplicable sense of superiority. . 7) The author cannot write a protagonist with a high IQ due to his own reasons (knowledge reserves, IQ above the line, individual ability, cognitive limitations, self-taken for granted, etc.), So he gives the villains a halo of mental retardation and feeds the readers with brain fragments, vulgar and low-level clichéd idiot plots, or there is no common sense, IQ, and common sense at all. 8) Lack of basic life common sense and social experience. 9) Distorted psychology and outlook, abnormal personality, some that conflict with my cognition. 10) For the purpose of promoting the plot or balancing the needs, especially books that abuse the main tone from beginning to end. 11) The character setting fails, or the character setting collapses in the story, or the character setting itself is inconsistent with the novel itself. 12) The storyline lacks content describing the changes in the lives and destiny of ordinary people. After all, the vast majority of readers are just ordinary people in the real world. Side descriptions and indirect explanations. 13) Conflicts in basic three views, such as braided novels, such as those who traveled through ancient times to purge foreign races from the Mongolian, Yuan, Manchu and Qing dynasties, and those who traveled to ancient times but did not intend to change history (then write a historical time travel novel), and those without basic social common sense, such as those who use reason to persuade gangsters to think that readers are idiots, and finally the self-brainwashing of some fanatical believers. 14) I found that the authors of online articles have actually started to make up lies to deceive people, here is zero or more than a hundred words! Due to some objective reasons, some things do not require small writers to expose or oppose, but at least they should not become an accomplice to fool the public. 15) The loss of the lowest level of rationality is the rationality of normal cognitive thinking of Homo sapiens. For example, a modern ordinary person travels to the late Song Dynasty and the late Ming Dynasty and becomes the bottom. Without any extra golden fingers, he can change history and become the emperor. What does this kind of protagonist do to save the world? Talk? **Or the identity of a time traveler? Both blunt and self-consistent, a book like this is simply not written for people with normal intelligence. About system-type cheats and power systems Adding points means adding points, why make it so complicated (the author said that if there is a system, there will be a lottery and a mall, which shows that the author's thinking has been limited)? I have read a lot of novels about adding points, and my first reaction was "The Magical Prop Master" (this book has several million words. The protagonist's power system is mainly based on adding points. The difference is in durability, applicability and absolute characteristics. Of course there are upgrades, but at most it is the effect of adding points and the number of singular points). Feelings as an old reader To downplay the sense of existence of the system, the golden finger of the system is just a tool (those books that personify the system have a strong sense of existence, and they don't know who the protagonist is, and what other mandatory tasks or erasures are required. Haha, the protagonist can become stronger by chance, voluntarily, or forced by the environment (plot setting), but what does the system force it to do, is it a worker slave?). It is best not to worry about where the system comes from and what its purpose is, because the protagonist is an ordinary person in the real world. Finally, regarding the system, its origins can be explained or not explained, but there is a principle that must be high-minded, or it must be mysterious and not explained at all. Finally, the protagonist can transcend Goldfinger in the end. I have seen it, but it feels a bit redundant.