The Zerg Lord Who Swallowed the Starry Sky

The normal plot should be accelerated, and it is better to write more about the Zerg Mother Queen. You can get some inheritance from the Zerg, quickly go to the domain, the law, and then the Zerg mother queen wakes up. This is what book lovers want to read! It would be meaningless if you proceed step by step. After all, this is a fan and everyone has read the original work! You have to be innovative to retain people.

This content is very ordinary. What's up with the recent Swallowing Starry Sky novel? There are fewer and fewer, and the quality is still poor.

The plot progresses slowly and the content is bland. I had to go to jail to write this for several chapters. The book was so bad at the beginning, but it got worse later on.

It's too shabby. The prison plot can be described in three or four chapters. Things that can be solved by saying "I am a quasi-martial artist" are just played without talking about it. The unknown supporting characters are also written very intelligently. I was a bit expecting to set up the Zerg mother queen as a clone, but in the end, it didn't have any special features, it was very ordinary.

The plot is exactly the same as the original work, why don't I read the original work?

Changing the protagonist to Luo Fen, I feel that the transition is almost seamless. Isn't it just a quick walk through Luo Feng's plot? This is outrageous.

Can you not repeat it? Don't say it is 100% repeated! You're almost 99% there, so why are you writing it out? There is nothing in the main plot. I skipped watching it and felt like it was a fucking waste of money.

It's a very ordinary Devouring fan, nothing special, and it's the kind that starts on the earth, which is a bad street.

There are so few comments, so the author has no ideas. There is no difference between what I write now and the original work.

I came here because of the name, but in the early stage it didn't have much connection with Chongzi. It was all about Shui's original plot. Even when he went to jail, he was with Luo Feng.

The clone looks like trash at first glance, and it's still a female even though it's been sleeping all this time.

Appraisal completed Overall, compared with many high-quality fans, it is a little far behind. In terms of writing rhythm, the plot advancement is very watered down, the pace is slow, hundreds of thousands of words, and I am still practicing in the universe level. In terms of innovative/enjoyable features such as cheat cheating with Goldfinger, there are not many things to praise. The cheating cannot be considered to have a big effect, and Goldenfinger completely ignores it. In terms of dealing with the relationship with the protagonist, I joined the group to keep warm all the way. I can't say hugging my thigh, I can only say you don't know how to lick. In terms of content setting, there are no copies, no branching plots, and the reading experience is average. The writing must be refreshing, but this one does not. In terms of character creation, there is no special feature, and there are not many places where rational jokes are played. The narrative is straightforward, quite satisfactory, and there are not many distinctive points.

There is no difference from the original work, except that there is an extra protagonist, and everything else is the same.

Nowadays, people who write fan fiction start to hug their thighs and wait until the protagonist becomes awesome and then become a nanny.

The World Lord-level Zerg Mother Queen's will is comparable to immortality, right?

I don't know why the spiritual masters who started the game on Earth all learned the wrong secrets from Earth's creation one by one, and they were all the same and had no new ideas. They were all warriors who had no other path. They didn't know any other weapons except swords and guns. I only got to the middle of it after reading a few pictures! !

It's the same plot again. I don't want to read it anymore just by looking at the chapter names.

Recommend a fan novel "The Eternal God Brain of the Swallowing Star Sky" [Single heroine·Ai Chen] The protagonist travels through the Swallowing Star Sky and obtains the Eternal God Brain. The Eternal God Brain can integrate all things and turn into its own clone. It has its own innate abilities and can evolve infinitely! Integrate with computers, gain computing talent, and evolve into the most powerful brain in the universe, capable of performing calculations tens of trillions of times in an instant. Integrate the immortal-class spacecraft of the mechanical race, obtain the talent of mechanical creation, follow the path of mechanical style, and create mechanical treasures that are better than those of mountain riders. Integrate with the Zerg Mother Queen, gain the talent of genetic analysis, and integrate various powerful bloodline genes in the universe to create a perfect divine body. ...................... Zerg: Damn it, how did this human Li Xin create warriors that were so much stronger than my Zerg? Mechanical Tribe: We are the worst off. Originally, we had the most advanced technology in the universe, but now human technology is even stronger than our Mechanical Tribe! Yaozu: Let's not talk about other things first. Why is the gene multiplier of human beings now higher than that of our royal family? Human: We don't know these questions of yours, you can ask him yourself. Each alien tribe: We sent people to ask, but every tribe member who went to ask died and could not even be resurrected! Li Xin: Why didn't I find anyone asking me?

Recommend your own book, "Swallowing the Starry Sky, Starting with the Weakest Special Life", the beginning of the Prison Clan