Martial Movement: Invincible with Lucky Draws, Godlike Comprehension at the Start

Author, could you please stop dragging Lin Dong into this? The protagonist is basically just a babysitter; providing some resources in the early stages is enough, but constantly dragging him along is ridiculous. For example, every time a high-grade spiritual herb comes along, he asks Lin Dong to purify it. Please, the Ancestral Stone isn't some kind of treasure for that purpose.

Did you use a file-swapping tool on your computer to replace Lin Dong with Lin Fan in the last 150 chapters? The content is exactly the same, word for word! I can report you!

Is it different from the original work? There should be some; his cultivation level is much higher than in the original story, but the ending is even more frustrating than in the original. 🙂

For the female lead, I suggest adding several, especially the powerful figures from the Eight Ancient Lords. Some are relatively easy to acquire, and they would provide assistance later in the Great Thousand World. Alternatively, you could introduce a time reversal, switching to Battle Through the Heavens, and then having both storylines lead to The Great Ruler.

Chapter 24 is already charging a fee; that's very impressive.

The author's fanfiction is actually pretty good, but is it really necessary to keep stealing the female lead who's more agile? You could write your own. The author says they're creating their own female lead, but is it really necessary to keep stealing the female lead who's more automatic? It's really frustrating.

6. Since Lin Xiao has already broken through to the Yuan Dan realm, why can't he strike first and wipe out the Xie and Lei families?

Are there any good Martial Universe fanfics?

Where is Shennong? I heard it's a story about a nanny?

Author, you should list the male and female leads to attract readers, like this.