Eternal Calamity: Bewitched by Yu Linglong at the Beginning

Eternal Tribulation fan fiction is too rare. Competitive games are like this, let alone time travel stories written in the world view of competitive games. As far as this site is concerned, the only one that is considered completed is Wuji Jinyi, but it was still broken. Writing about this subject naturally has less traffic, so I can't be too demanding, but personally I would like to point out that as the protagonist, Huang Kun is still too ordinary. A completely ordinary time traveler protagonist, starting with his life threatened, Rather than asking him to break the situation directly, there should be some guarantee so that readers can feel at ease 😆 Also, the current plot development is a bit step-by-step. Perhaps the plot pace can be sped up so that the protagonist can participate in major events as soon as possible. This is just a complaint from young readers. It is best for the author to have his own ideas.