Partners in Martial Saint Business

☝️🤓I have an idea, since I can copy the gains of a partner, why not find an ordinary person as a partner, and then give him my resources, and then take away the resources in his hand, give them to him along with the ones I copied, and then take them away... Wouldn't this be able to buy supplies? If the gifts don't count, you can also throw them on the ground for him to pick up.

Good guy, the protagonist's qualifications are really bad. How did he become a disciple with such qualifications? Without cheats, the protagonist is a waste among wastes, but with cheats, he is still a waste!

Goldfinger is very powerful, but after getting a senior sister, he is still uncontrollable, too dangerous and outrageous. Not friendly to the protagonist. The key point is that the senior sister is strong but the protagonist is weak. If I were too lazy to talk and listen to the senior sister, the protagonist is weak. The protagonist is just seeking death when he does things. To get the senior sister is purely to seek death. If it weren't for the senior sister's own problems, she would have been captured long ago, read her mind, tortured, and provided one-stop services to the protagonist, causing her to die early and be reborn. It's outrageous.

How to put it, in general, it's not bad, but it's easy to get bored. First of all, the protagonist's cultivation is basically useless and he can only rely on the system, but the protagonist's high IQ makes him not so useless, and the protagonist's purpose is actually very simple, just to do things crazy, and then use the system to get benefits. In addition, the protagonist's master's life experience and other issues will attract troubles, and then the style of cultivating the immortal has changed, and it has become a problem-solving problem, looking for a solution to the problem Problems are created to solve problems, and the protagonist's own plug-ins are too powerful and cannot give a sense of tension and danger. He can change his bindings at any time without any danger at all. It doesn't matter who he is at any time. As long as he is strong, he can provide the protagonist with enough experience. To put it bluntly, the danger is that others may covet his talent (system), so it cannot give people any sense of urgency. It is more like a daily game. When the design is clever, it can still feel interesting, but otherwise it will feel boring. It's okay to entertain me when I'm bored occasionally, but I'll really feel bored after reading a few more chapters. I don't mean to be disparaging. This is my personal opinion after reading it for two days (I know others finished it two days ago, but I'm a slow reader)

Finish the book and scatter flowers🌹🌹🌹

To be honest, I feel that the author is still writing in the manner of a detective story, using ambushes to solve events. The difference is that the protagonist has more scenes of doing things on his own, or the protagonist uses his brain more, without the straightforwardness and supremacy of force in a fantasy novel. In fact, the author is better off writing ancient martial arts detective novels. There are not many people in this track and the readership is high, but the initial score is not necessarily high. It would be much better to write a few more small cases and string them together. You can also develop in the direction of Dafeng. It is relatively niche and wants to make money unless it ranks high. There was a very good book on Demons before, but unfortunately the author used to be a farmer on the literary reform track. The second book didn't handle the issue well, so he changed the website. Now, if the author is not writing part-time for fun, it would be best to write more court detectives to maintain fans. Now this book is a bit vague and big. It is said that it is fantasy and a bit alternative. The line is too long and the world view is a bit confusing. There is no authoritative referee for reasoning. There are several equal forces without a unified superior organization. The identity of the protagonist is too high. The sect is in the future. It is equivalent to the national war of identity in the late stage of Chaotang Wen Da. The map becomes even more confusing when opening the map, which makes the reasoning useless. The fantasy system is too vague now.

My humble opinion, regardless of gender. First point: The female master's routine is too old. Only those with a certain reader base will have the patience to read the rest. Second point: Let's divide readers into three categories: those who like, those who don't like, and those who don't care. Male masters can include three categories, while female masters can only include one and a half categories (bad comments will affect the indifferent group) Third point: If you write about a female master, do you dare to write up? I don't dare, or I'll have to wait very late. If it's just ambiguous, I'll just hehe. Point 4: Either you write until I can't help but open the browser, or you don't write at all.

Not abstract enough😴

I only saw 8 of them. Why not give the protagonist a system space? Otherwise, the same item as her master suddenly appears in her hand. How to explain it when she is seen?

Has the author considered promoting it, such as asking other authors to trade py to promote the book? Otherwise, it will be too cool.