
Douluo Dalu: The Legend of the Dragon King: Nine Dragons Shatter the Abyss
斗罗龙王之九龙破渊
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- Completed
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- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I do not understand?
I don't understand why everyone is talking about Xiang Yu being trapped under cover? It seems that this ancient battlefield in the Central Plains is doomed to be a disaster for us. 20 Years ago, I embarked on a journey from Xuzhou and started the second Northern Expedition. Although the Chinese Begonias were unified, wherever our party and our troops went, the people welcomed us. It can be said that we have all the time. The realm of vitality and all things competing is still before our eyes. Just 20 years later, has this changed and become my burial place? In the ancient battlefield of Xuzhou, no matter how we say the battle strength is 800,000 versus 600,000, the advantage lies with me! 😡😡😡
Forcing Tang Wulin to eat the protagonist's problematic semen and blood, and fucking Cai Yue'er with passion. This is really disrespectful, and the enemy still covets Gu Yuena. If she didn't deal with it earlier, she said not to kill the child, so forget it, but she reluctantly endured it and waited for him to be killed. But what happened later was so disgusting that I regretted subscribing.
Quibble
Here I will explain the protagonist's attitude towards Qiangu Dieting and Leng Yaozhu when his martial soul awakens. Take the perspective of the protagonist, you have traveled through time, and are about to be struck by lightning when your martial soul awakens. When you thought you were about to die, what you saw was Leng Yaozhu standing in front of you. When Qiangu Dieting went out to fight the thunder, the protagonist did not feel it. Later you learned that your grandfather was a profit-oriented Qiangu Dieting, and you had a teacher by your side, Leng Yaozhu, whom even the Silver Dragon King would never forget. How should you choose? It is the choice of most people to choose to become a disciple and find a reliable backer. Later, when I saw the sluggish Qiangu Dieting, I wrote about the protagonist's inner tangle. The previous book said that the natives rushed to grandma's house. This book is about how you, the time-travelers, are brought into God's perspective again. I really cried to death😭😭😭
The author's emotional drama is so bad, harem stories are really not something you can write casually. Although the story without a heroine is a bit less attractive, it is really good if it is well written; the single heroine is suitable for novices who take the emotional line, and is attractive enough; the harem story is well written and has nothing to say, and the rest is really hard to describe in a word. You will find that after removing the main plot, it is just a short essay, which is the kind at the bottom. I think you might as well go to someone who specializes in writing short essays. And whether the protagonist is a real scumbag or a sanctimonious scumbag. Don't just accept it as soon as you find something good to write down later on, it will really drop in price.
Soul skills are too bad
Is the author not very imaginative? Why do the soul skills seem so low? The first soul skill, Metal Storm, seems to be that the control of the gold element is higher. Why not give yourself some buffs? The second soul skill, Ice Falls, is even more powerful. What do you mean by freezing a puddle of water from the sky? Do you really have the nerve to say that it is the soul ring of the Ice Dragon King? And after being suppressed for ten years, this is not a battle between one and two. If you fight one against two, the soul ring cannot grow. When Dou San has a spiritual ascension platform, you have absorbed rubbish. When I think that the soul skills behind the male protagonist are all corresponding elements that burst out in a 20-meter range, I really don't know how to complain. This is the same as blue silver entanglement. They are the characteristics of the martial spirit itself. If the author really thinks this way, I can only say that you have obtained half of Tang San's true inheritance.
I don't understand what the author's writing about Qiangu Dongfeng's killing of the protagonist's parents does to him. Could it be that the protagonist's mother can still take away his position as the tower master? Being found out after killing his mother may also cause Qiangu to fall and hate Qiangu Dongfeng. It feels like it's just for the protagonist to have a conflict with Qiangu Dongfeng, but the reason for this conflict is really a failure.
When I saw Sun Wukong in the introduction, I thought the martial spirit was the Coiling Dragon Stick, Fiery Eyes, or a monkey. However, your Coiling Dragon Stick has so many elements. When did Wukong become good at using these elements? I couldn't teach him even if he wanted to. Either the Dragon Coiling Stick was just a stick, or the dragon soul in it was replaced by the East China Sea Dragon from Journey to the West. The Dinghai Shen Needle will also work, it has its own suppression function, and is just for Poseidon.
What's the point of you writing chapters 164-166? To show how powerful Yun Ming is without otherworld plug-ins, the protagonist with monkey plug-ins looks like a clown? He makes a fool of himself, and then relies on the master to end the farce, pure clowning! The protagonist is both upright and stupid, but the original character design is also broken in various ways! I also like the whole embarrassing forced sensationalism 👍
I feel that the homogeneity of female characters has become a bit serious later on. It was good in the early stage. Ever since Leng Yulaigu Yuena started to actively help the male protagonist attract people to the harem, the whole relationship line has gone askew. Playing like a big sister family can easily erase personal characteristics.
There should be less emotional drama, it's too embarrassing 😰