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The author's moral concepts are questionable! Abandon books

The writing style is too immature, the plot is not very good, it is just cliche and there is nothing exciting about it.

Can Wan So-yeon do it? ? ?

As the title states, I have read Chapter 37, but the reason why I haven't finished the free chapter is very simple, two words, half a piece of cake. The reason why it is half a book instead of a book is because this book was probably readable ten years ago, but now~ Let me tell you in detail what I find boring. The main character is a modern time traveler in his thirties, but I don't feel the significance of this background at all. I don't think it's against you to say that he is an indigenous person. I am a person in my thirties, and my worldview is constantly being impacted in this article. If you had just traveled through time, I would not bother to tell you about it, but it turns out that you are still being impacted almost ten years after traveling through time. It's amazing. Then the protagonist is as if he has not seen a woman. He is shocked when he sees a woman, and even has to drop his book bag. Man, is this a person in the information age? In the end, the protagonist was also a naughty person. He was thinking about avoiding danger and staying away from trouble, but in the end, he took the initiative to approach him. What was he trying to do? Except this kind of plot won't advance the plot, right? The above is moist.

Nowadays, almost no one likes the silly male protagonist like Guo Jing, and the female protagonist who is too clever and calculating like Huang Rong. What a failure.

There are a lot of verbose words, a lot of monologues, and they are childish. I abandoned the book after 20 chapters.

What I wrote before is pretty good, but the bullshit erysipelas is so ridiculous. If you say it this way, then everything is poisonous, and you still have to eat it. Those spiritual herbs are all grown by spiritual energy, and your elixirs are poisonous. Then Isn't spiritual energy more poisonous? If you just don't practice, then you won't be afraid of poisoning. If you want to harm others, you don't need to use poison. Just give them elixirs. In a world of cultivating immortals, tell me, are you afraid of erysipelas? That's bullshit.

When I saw that there were not many comments but a lot of photos in the comment area, I knew that this book was impossible to read!

During the Qi training period, Shen tm made elixirs to create a catastrophe and bring down wisdom.

It's been a year and I still haven't found the sect, but I finally met Luo Lingxu, a mysterious figure. The male protagonist has the ability to move the virtual world. He has perfected the invisible skill and can help others hide. He can also see at a glance that the main devil has melted and the demons have melted, and they have to run away. He has two lives and is not suitable for playing a stupid male protagonist. I don't know if the author is stupid or just trying to count the words. The more he writes, the worse he gets.

It feels very strange. The character of the protagonist is very messy. She has to keep a low profile and act like a pig to eat the tiger, but she also portrays the heroine as a weirdo who creates trouble for the male protagonist.

How to say it? Haha, is it innate to be able to directly absorb spiritual energy? Is the realm of martial arts so simple? The development of the protagonist seemed too easy, and he immediately became a disciple of the immortal cultivator. The protagonist's gift of photographic memory has clearly not been demonstrated, and he has never memorized the book in front of outsiders. How the secret guard could see it is puzzling. It is human nature to repay a favor, but it is not too exaggerated for the protagonist to say that it would take his whole life or even his life to do so.

After seeing what the hell happened in Chapter 19, the master patted his ass and left, asking him to form a pill and then find him in the Central Territory. What a speechless unfolding. It's not like he's being hunted. If he just returns to his sect and takes an apprentice with him, he'll die, right?

This leaf is really annoying to look at. When will it die?

It's not good-looking. The front part is okay, but the female characters in the back make people feel uncomfortable. I suggest the author hone his writing style and the characters in the story, and consider the causes and consequences of his words. Those female characters gave me a silly, sweet, spring-like feeling.

I really can't stand it anymore. There are stitch monsters everywhere, copying here and there. The author himself writes like a housewife, and the protagonist has no personality at all. He falls down when he sees a girl and licks her desperately.

Personal opinion Just give it 5 points The plot is dragging, half of the 80 chapters are in the water, and there is no outline at all I wrote a supporting role, Lin Fan, but by the 80th chapter, I have no sense of existence at all, I have no idea what I am doing, and I have not written anything about it At present, it looks like boiled water, extremely bland and tasteless

In fact, although the outline is vulgar, it is still acceptable. The most important point is that the portrayal of the female supporting actress is not natural enough and seems particularly abrupt. It feels a bit familiar, which makes people very uncomfortable. First time commenting as a bookworm of over ten years. I hope the author can read more works of great masters and learn from them. The relationship between two people is based on stories and reasons. They don't just get to know each other as soon as they meet. Even Ye Zi, I feel that the wife who is with the male protagonist is out of the ordinary. Just imagine that the sister next door suddenly likes me, and I really like her. This relationship change is too uncomfortable.

I feel like the writing is okay, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch. Let's break up. There are always more people who are off the street than those who are on the market.

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The first few chapters are all about qualifications, but the writing goes wrong at the end. You shouldn't be exposed to the plot of cultivating immortals so early. It would be perfect if you write the role of the book boy first, then save the family, and finally become invincible to the secular world before approaching the plot of cultivating immortals.

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