
LOL: Why Did He Become the Mastermind Behind the Scenes?
LOL:怎么就成了幕后黑手了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 423k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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547Recommends
87Fans
167Chapters
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Thoughts after reading 116 chapters and 280,000 words
To be honest, personally, this is the best League of Legends fanfic I have ever written. From my point of view, it is all good. It has been a long, long time since I was so immersed in reading it that I forgot all about food and sleep. In my personal opinion, the threshold for reading this work is a bit high. With all kinds of jokes, various ideas, and descriptions of group portraits, this novel is like an exquisite delicacy. People who don't understand it can't feel anything. Sometimes I also think that in this era, the threshold for everything is getting lower and lower. Ai Shuangwen in novels, pre-made dishes in food, and games are becoming more and more simple and brainless. These things bring good and bad things, but they are definitely too boring. I wanted to make some suggestions, but I felt like there was nothing to offer. For me, this is the best League of Legends work I have seen so far. The author allows me to see another possibility of this world. I wish you better and better! Thoughts at 12:07 noon on August 17, 2024 (watched for 6 hours)
Complain about it
Until the 100th chapter, the protagonist is still an ordinary person, and it is completely impossible to tell where the mastermind is behind the scenes. If it is an ordinary world view, it will be fine. This is Rune Continent. Without hard power, it is no different from a clown. The trump card is the Death Star, but I don't see how it will develop. With the current progress, it will take two to three hundred chapters. How many people are willing to watch it? I know that the Death Star template given by the author to the protagonist is too big for fear that the combat power will collapse and affect the rhythm, but I just give it to the protagonist. The premise behind the scenes is that you can be weak at the beginning, but at least you must become stronger step by step It can be seen that the author's writing is good, but the plot setting is very bad. I hope the author can work hard. This is just my opinion.
Sarah Doom
This picture is a perfect match🤓
Why does the protagonist look like he's not wearing any clothes? He's still dead, and he's still divided. Nothing has changed. It's said that he didn't do anything behind the scenes, and his strength is too weak. Instead of thinking of ways to improve his combat power, he keeps thinking about it.
No, what are you talking about in chapters 33 to 38? Has someone been replaced?
I have followed this book from the beginning to now, and it is indeed quite good, but there are still a few problems 1. There are too many branches and too complicated, the main plot is a bit behind, and sometimes very abrupt, and the protagonist is portrayed too little 2. The plot advances too slowly 3. The world view is a bit too confusing. Although it is a group of portraits, there is no connection between them, making it a bit confusing (mainly because I don't know much about the world view of LOL) 4. Change the title of the book. It is a very good book, but the title is delayed 😅
Behind the scenes, either the protagonist becomes completely invisible and becomes a high-dimensional planetary consciousness. It focuses on a story that depicts summoned creatures and aboriginal people, enjoying the happiness of a farmer who guides their destiny, and attracts fans of the original book with well-known characters of another destiny. For example, Supreme Mage Stark, customized version of Spider-Gwen, Sunshine Brother Soldier Boy, etc. Not being invisible is the kingly online writing route. It is equivalent to a time traveler with its own summoner skill. It has the harem and cool points of ordinary online novels. The protagonist is essentially the protagonist of an ordinary online novel, and all the girls he should have sex with should be in place, otherwise, the protagonist will be superfluous and annoying. Especially the intensity. If you don't go up and you keep participating in the story, the enemy will appear weak and develop into a sand-diao text. Of course, you can also write about battles of wits, arranging troops and building forces. This requirement is far higher than adding combat power to the protagonist. The protagonist of online novels is essentially not afraid of high combat power, because you can throw him an enemy of the same strength at will... Or make the protagonist do nothing. I can destroy the world, but if I don't do it, I just play with you. Sha Giaowen is another writing style, focusing on a protagonist who is a villain and the author who is a spoof. However, the requirements for readers are relatively high, and they must have a certain amount of reading. Otherwise, the sand sculpture text will not have a sense of interactivity, and I don't know what it means. You still have to figure out what kind of story you want to write and what kind of content you are good at writing.
The main one is to listen to advice
The name has been changed, "Training from Bilgewater". The name is really hard to describe. The foreshadowing has been completed. The first volume has entered the main plot and is ready to be concluded.
Irelia
Alleria dancing on the battlefield
I'm a follow-up reader. It's really good, but it's a bit short. But I'll just write slowly and with high quality. Come on^0^~
How to say it? The writing is okay, but the plot structure feels a bit weird. The sudden appearance of the Death Star makes it very fragmented.
Nora
I understand, the protagonist is the cat's owner, Nora
I made it through the round of recommendations, brothers.
I finally got through the recommendation round, and the books of the same period were almost on the shelves for dinner. I just started to set up the stove. Whether this book can survive has been just a matter of reading in the past week. Please take the time, brothers, to read the latest chapter directly to the end, and give the author some support for the data on bacteria in the crotch. It took me three months to write the book, but I can't reach 100 reads, which is sad~~~ (I don't have extravagant expectations for the second round of recommendations, just don't let this book run naked)
There must be very few people watching this.
Come on, the writing is pretty good.
It's not the end of the world when you come back, buddy.
There's not much that can be done, but it's very well written, so please come on, author 😆