Fantasy Game Simulator

Have you ever traveled through time? Just scribble here

The first incident at the beginning is that a group of bandits attacked a noble's team of twelve knights and then killed them all. The bandits attacked either for food or money. Why did they attack the army? Do you want to grab weapons and armor?

This is no longer a problem of slow pace for you. The free chapters are so annoying. How much water will you need after they are released? The first dungeon has more than 50 chapters with no progress, and the game is still played at the player's house. Are you going to write 300 chapters for the first world? If you put the plot of more than fifty chapters in this book, it will be finished within twenty chapters at most.

The first dungeon starts from Chapter 7 or 8. There are so many crazily described things that are so bad at the beginning. Those are just mentioned in one stroke. Is this what the reader wants to read? It depends on the war and hegemony. For example, which earl's territory you go to, you can just mention it in one stroke on the way. Here are a few pictures. There are also a lot of things in that earl's territory. You can take them in one stroke. There are still more than a dozen pictures. Is there any foreshadowing in writing so many things?

Nothing happened for a long time, the pace was really slow, and it was a period of my life, but I started writing from my childhood. The writing skills are good and so are the details. Keep it

Moreover, what everyone in Infinite Stream sees is fighting, solving puzzles, and manipulating power. What does it mean to pretend to be drinking wine with a bunch of aristocratic men here? Aside from his cheerful appearance, who knows the difference between a reincarnator and aboriginals? Have you really become a sweet, soft and polite boy?

It's too shabby, and the protagonist's combat power is quite overwhelming. It's normal to write the progress according to a book, but isn't your life in a copy? Do you plan to write tens of thousands of chapters?

Don't follow the example of Amber Sword, it's no longer popular.

To be honest, it's very watery, adding a lot of unnecessary modifiers, ah! He has bright and deep eyes, a strong and perfect body, and exudes an eye-catching light. He is the son of our respected Baron 😜😜😜

Is it okay to give it a detailed outline? 😭😭😭😭 It's too watery. This is a dungeon simulation.