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Others are okay. But the one you forgive for racial discrimination really persuades you to quit! ! The protagonist has no personality or stance at all. Play dier
Trivia: There will be a fine for pulling a horse on the road. The more you pull, the more the fine will be.
If you don't know how to write about conflicts, then don't write about it. Just play football and win one game after another. Because you are a player, whether you are a forward, forward or midfielder, that is scoring goals. Secondly, you have never been abroad at all, so you don't know what the racial discrimination is like there. I stayed in Lyon, France for 5 years and traveled throughout Europe. Let me tell you what I know. First of all, foreigners are very selfish. I don't pay attention to everything on the road. Otherwise, if I see so many homeless people on the road, do I have to buy some food for them? Secondly, who is racist? Just drunk people, and niggas who haven't been to school, they say chunk. Most people won't say it out loud if they hate you, because it's illegal, do you understand? If you kill him and find a good lawyer, you won't even go to jail.
A 16-year-old kid, in a fourth-level league, has a lot of off-field factors to create plot conflicts. Come on, author, the results will not be good if you write like this.
Shocked, it took so long to prepare for it, and then I rejected Manchester City.
I wrote a total of 150 chapters, and in the last ten or so chapters, I started laying the groundwork. This team wanted to buy Marado, and that one also wanted to buy it, and then refused. After that, Manchester City made a strong move to take Marado away. Although the board of directors of Cambridge United, which has assets of several million, is quite strange, from the board of directors' discussions, to the reaction of the head coach, to the operation of the agent, and the communication with the family. . At this level, it is incomprehensible. My parents in China are gone? Even if we don't show up, it's all discussed with my aunt and her family. . Don't your parents know this? Got AIDS? Writing like this is the standard human-machine writing method. . It's not like what a normal person would write. . Then Marado's family also proposed conditions and went to negotiate. In the end, I wrote about 10 chapters, and then finally rejected Manchester City. . Can this be written by a normal human brain circuit? Why did you write that you have been preparing to play football here for so long, just to fill it with water? If you don't want to write a chapter and refuse, if you don't want to go and don't go, then it's over, right? After laying the groundwork for about ten days, I refused. . Divine Logic There is really no most disgusting thing, only more disgusting ones. AI? Deliberately playing tricks on the remaining readers? Disgusting people? Is the brain circuit abnormal? It's not for people to see. .
Is this simply a way to clear the ground for racial discrimination? Breaking the ice with a racist person?
The title of the chapter "White Eyed Wolf" is indeed correct.
To say that he has a young mind does not explain his nature as a Muyang dog.
Don't be disgusted, Maradona. Forget about calling him Dog or Labrador.
This is a name that no normal person would think of. Is it diarrhea?
The protagonist is a typical colonist who worships foreigners and favors foreigners. He is groveling to foreigners and can be forgiven for racial discrimination, but he has a bad attitude towards Chinese people
The positioning is not clear! Is it for readers born after 2000? Football, if you don't start writing from the early years, how can you write 1,000 chapters about a game? Are you planning to break up in Chapter 200? Or is it a harem porn story disguised as a football?
Just those white pigs 🐷 and black pigs 🐷. There is a body but no brain, and there is a brain but no wisdom.
The author's pen name is the same as everyone else's
In fact, I thought it was pretty good at first, but the Internet violence part was too toxic.
Poison Tried No Solution Sick Poison
About Marado's parents
What is very unconventional is that my aunt is a guardian abroad, but Marado has signed a player contract and has slowly entered the world of professional football. Shouldn't this be communicated to his parents? My parents have not appeared on the phone now. . Normal people wouldn't write like this. . Ai?
Author, you'd better stop writing and read what you wrote to see if you understand it.
If you don't see it, run away
It's a mess, the author should stop writing it quickly
It's so well written. Listen to me and stop writing.
It was quite comfortable to watch at first, but after being beaten 7-0 by Japan, I couldn't stand it anymore. Come on, author.
It is best for the national football team to move forward. After the 2008 Olympics, the national football team has no hope. From the 1990s to the early 1990s, there may be good results. Nowadays, it is very popular to write about people aged 15 and over, but where are the results of the national football team, how can I write about them and how to make a difference? I don't feel comfortable writing about banana people or foreigners. It's too long ago and I don't have the memory to put it in. So the best thing to write about is the period from the 1990s to the beginning of the century. During this period, the competitive advantage of the national football team is still there, and there are also some representatives. In particular, there are some characters who hurt Zhongyong, so there is room for creative creation. For example, Yu Genwei, Su Maozhen, Dong Fangzhuo, etc. Who are not injured, as well as Chen Tao, Qu Bo, Qi Hong, Deng Zhuoxiang, Li Weifeng, Zhao Junzhe, Hao Junmin, and my favorite player, Li Jinyu who bends the bow to shoot the big eagle. Wait, I especially hope someone can write about Li Jinyu. If Li Jinyu is reborn, he will remember his previous life from his mother's womb and cultivate him from an early age. He will be stronger, faster, taller, and more skilled, combined with his super consciousness and ability. I dare not think about it.
Protagonist's character issues
It's too childish, the charisma of the character is not written out, and the off-field rhythm is a bit too much. And the commentator, I honestly don't have any passion at all. You can get a foreign commentator to explain the protagonist. After all, there is little information.
The author's writing is quite good and worthy of encouragement.
This book is indeed well written. You should reject such insignificant youth tournaments. The pressure of the league is already high, and it is not an echelon league. How many talented teenagers have been ruined because of this youth tournament? ?
Let's get some female stars
What kind of egret, please heat it up, Nazha, Meng Ziyi, Zhou Ye, please give me some more