Lord of the Nation: Start with Daily Intelligence

The framework of the book is okay, but the things in this box in the early stage are a bit advanced and messy. The details are okay, but the overall priorities are a bit unclear and it feels messy. Some branches don't need to be written so carefully, and the main line is too general. Let's sort it out.

It's a bit messy. For example, for the treasure chest, if you don't plan to write 10 attributes, you can just say 3. If you don't like to write more, we won't write 1, which is a lot of useless stuff. In the battle, the protagonists are all ordinary people, killed one by one? ? ? Are you so violent? Author

Why is no one commenting? Is it really poorly written? 😭

If you have any good suggestions, you can share them and discuss them. 🙂

Is it a game planner to write a book? ? ? ? The game experience is a bit overwhelming

I'm speechless. It's so refreshing. It's only seven chapters and it's ranked sixth. I've given the tenth-level legendary unit a job change, a high-level mage unit, a ninth-level epic prop, a ninth-level epic hero, and a lot of other things. You can imagine what the top 10 will give you... I'm still a newbie for 2 days... I can't Imagine what the author will do later In the later stage, it will either collapse or suppress it with all its strength... I really don't understand how the treasure chest can soar easily on the spot Why do you need a golden finger... Putting the cart before the horse... Run away, even if it is on the shelves...

There is too much data, not suitable for this type of real-life game

The achievement of summoning a few girls should be better than this.