Starry Night Shimmer

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁

Completed? You won't be cuckooing anymore, right?

This book is updated frequently and has a sufficient number of words in each chapter. These two points alone have already defeated most newcomers. It is excellent. I saw the prologue you posted in the group yesterday, and out of curiosity I completed all the updated content today. Personally, I feel that you can pay attention to the following minor issues in the future. It doesn't matter if you think it doesn't matter. After all, it's just my subjective feeling. First of all, although the setting of the earth stopping is not novel, it is very interesting. However, in the content of more than ten chapters, I did not feel the impact of the stopping on the lives of ordinary people at all. Everyone just re-divided the territory, which is a bit of a waste of setting. Secondly, the post-stop setting is a bit too unrealistic. I see you said it didn't actually stop, but readers don't have this kind of God's perspective when reading the text. As long as the earth is still revolving there, it is impossible to stop. Otherwise, there are only two results: falling into the sun or flying into the universe. After the rotation stops, the daylight zone will be dried out and there will be no four seasons. There will be no life on the surface. The twilight zone is the territory that all countries want to compete for. In addition, you said that "sequence" is an unimportant setting, so why do you spend so much text on it? Moreover, this setting is not rigorous and has too many bugs. If you don't use it very much later, it is recommended to delete it directly. Finally, slow learning ≠ keeping a running account. It doesn't matter if the climax of the story takes its time, but the conflicts that should be there should be put as early as possible. I guessed that something was going to happen at the celebration at the beginning of the first chapter, so I just read two and a half chapters of "Birthday Party". I suggested reducing unnecessary dialogue and replacing it with scenes and action descriptions to enhance the sense of the picture. It's time to let the protagonist do his thing