The Legend of the Living Hero: I Become the Head of the Kongtong Sect

The author could completely eliminate the background of the game and create a clean martial arts novel. After all, not many people have heard of this game. There is no need to associate it with the game. After all, the game is not very popular.

At the beginning, the protagonist was poisoned by a cult villain and went undercover in the Kongtong sect. To be honest, I hated the feeling of being involuntarily controlled. There was a plug-in that gave me 32 times the practice experience value. One day was as good as someone else's for a month. After practicing for six or seven years, I thought the protagonist was invincible. He could directly attack the person who controlled his poison in seconds with a long-range attack. , It turned out that the poison was finally cured after reading chapter 30, but I really didn't see the process. Why did he deliberately expose the poison to attract the other side without moving away and controlling the mother of the poison, and why did he pretend to be a member of the cult to sneak attack. It really made me happy, and it suddenly felt boring. I simply didn't read the rest of it, bye

Huoxia is actually quite suitable for writing fan fiction. The essence is similar to that of Dragon Clan fan fiction. They have changed the regretful aspects of the original work Wen Qing. The characters are all lovable and the story is wonderful. However, the popularity of the subject matter is not as good as that of Dragon Clan. Come on 🙂

I just watched the male protagonist of this game and that's enough. Don't call me shallow. I can't play a game with an ugly guy anyway.

The author's biggest problem is that it's not exciting enough, it's not sexy enough, it's not decisive enough, and the emotional drama it writes isn't good enough. . If you can write about everything, you are called omnipotent. If you don't learn well, you are useless at anything. The author is still a little bit entrepreneurial, but he should be more focused. Do you think those stories that are not good but the erotic writing is good are also popular? 😍 Choosing one direction is to screen the audience. The more you screen, the fewer people will be.

To be honest, after reading Chapter 96, there are some places that I really want to complain about. The writing of the fighting is not very good. I usually write a few lines of action when the protagonist appears, and skip 50 rounds of the fighting process. This way of writing, if you are more outstanding in other places, you can basically ignore it, but there is no such thing. The protagonist is semi-invisible, and the main and branch plots are all advanced by supporting characters. In the end, the protagonist comes out to show off and cooperate with the fight I mentioned above. Is it really worth watching? Look, are you pretending to be? Ruzhuang In the end, events are often skipped at the end. On the way to a new event, review what happened at the end of the previous event. Do this again and again, and cooperate with what I said above to really magnify your shortcomings infinitely. This will give you a way to skip all the way when you are happy at the critical moment. I really don't want to watch it, it's boring, Then the description of the martial arts system is even more confusing, and there is no feedback on the system's comfort at all. The appraisal is zero. There are only the most basic martial arts masters such as a certain martial arts, and then no more. How powerful the subsequent moves are, all depends on the 32 times the internal strength in your book to build a foundation. Normally speaking, if you write like this, I will never read it. It has a certain level of plot and writing power, but the advancement is really bad. If I look at the score, the plot advancement is 0 points, and the plot writing power is 4.5 Out of 5 points. I was attracted by the heroine Xia Houlan, and the standing paintings are good-looking.

I even paid for a subscription to a chapter of this bullshit

It is not suitable for people who have never played the game. Seeing how hard the female protagonist is practicing martial arts, she is a direct descendant of the same family, and then being kidnapped by a man who suddenly appeared without any foreshadowing and played a role with a few coins and was kidnapped in a sack really poisoned me Maybe it's not strange after watching the plot in the game, but I really can't stand it. It's fine if the protagonist shows up to stop him before putting on the sack. I don't want to continue reading There are also some things written in a vague way without explaining the reason, as if everyone knows the reason by default.

It's really outrageous, there are still people writing this shit about Live Shrimp

Who is the author? The writing is really good. I originally came here to appreciate the works of netizens, but I didn't expect the quality to be so high. At this level, he can definitely be ranked in the top 3 in the martial arts category and the top 5 in the game category among contract signings.