Greg: I'm Really Not the King of Elden

I thought it was an Elden Ring fanfic, but it turned out to be an online game novel for players? Npc? I really can't imagine why such an imbecile plot can still be written now. It's a pity that the beginning seems interesting.

The protagonist is like a wild dog on the roadside, anyone can kick him

When can I lick Marlenia's feet?

There are too many player perspectives. The protagonist is basically invisible

It was okay up front, but it's boring now that the players are out.

Have you ever thought about changing the title of the book to King of Elden: Golden Garric, something like this, because those who want to read the Ring of Magic fandom directly search for "Elden". I searched for "Elden" and read all the good ones, then started searching for "Gold", and I scrolled through it for a while before I saw you.

How can I put it, there are two shortcomings First, one chapter a day, the update is too slow, I am ready to wait for you to read it after you write 1.8 Million words Second, since you are writing about players, you are too petty. The real magic ring cannot be as few monster enemies as in the game. Players are called to be faded ones. Players have to live a full life, fight in an army of 1,800, and collectively self-destruct fanatical beliefs for the protagonist. You have to make the opponent feel the oppression of the fourth natural disaster. You can only summon three or five of them, but it's better not to summon them at all, and let the protagonist open all the plug-ins. Isn't this kind of novel just a pleasure to read? Crush and make up for regrets. The madness of the fourth natural disaster gives all opponents a sense of suffocation. When the heretics brutally kill the players, the fourth natural disaster retaliates in an even more crazy and cruel form, adding all aspects of momentum to the protagonist.

Dressed as the best of the golden clan? ! Lani stole her destined death and committed suicide, Rakad fed the snakes himself, and the young man sacrificed himself to become a god~ Are they all crazy? The bloodline of the Golden Clan has a backdoor, and it can control the Golden Clan to death with just one finger. Even if Malika, who became a god, was hung in the golden tree, would any golden clan or even demigod dare to save her?

As for the fourth natural disaster, Xiaoge should be killed first when the natural disaster occurs. Shicheng is set on fire, and all those who are not in the safe zone are killed. The women in the safe zone take turns, and the men are pushed out of the safe zone to be killed.

It seems that none of the books with Lao Ge as the protagonist lasted to the end.

It has nothing to do with the Ring of Magic, it's just an online game article disguised as a fan novel. Judging from the length of the article, I thought the protagonist was a player. The author said that the protagonist will come out later. I read this novel and the protagonist is invisible for most of the twenty chapters. Who wants to wait for you?

Time travel into that old and ugly thing like Greg?

The concept of the novel is wrong. The protagonist's identity is not suitable for this type of play, and the boundary is too small unless it is expanded. The correct way to write it should be to write a normal flow of struggle for hegemony, develop forces, and end the war of handover orders. You can add some infinite flows, introduce the power of other worlds, roads, overtaking in corners, or write about travelers from various worlds coming to stay. Writing about players is not suitable for the protagonist's identity. It should be suitable for situations that require the protagonist to run around and take risks.

Good-looking is good-looking. However, I still suggest that the author increase the number of people. After all, as the fourth natural disaster, there are no weird tricks. It's incomplete. I suggest the author to check out the World Tree game.

What about Racade, Latarn, Mikaela, Malenia, and Lani? They are all rebellious and can be killed. Only I, Wang Laoge, and my family are all golden😡😡😡

One piece a day, I'm really afraid you'll cut it

The preface does not match the postscript

It's interesting and awesome, I hope I can stick with it

Updates are a bit slow, but the writing is pretty good