In the Long River of Time, I Pretended to Be the Emperor Daozu

I offer it with my heart. From Su Renhuang to Maomao and here, the books are all very good. The first one is a waste of brains, and the second one is a waste of paper. I am looking forward to this one. I hope it will be more relaxed and refreshing~ Come on, okay~

I read the new book, which is meant to cater to the current market. In fact, you have written so many books, you can try other ones. People are under too much pressure nowadays, so many books are either in a relaxed and leisurely style, or simple and rough, cool writing. Is it easy to write this thing? In my case, I would just set a cheat or talent or other system that is not good, such as biosynthesis, fairy tales. Or high martial arts, fantasy, or even outdated spiritual energy recovery Collect common animal genes under certain conditions and synthesize them. Set the water level or precision, and work hard on synthesis, success rate, synthesis bias, such as synthesis success rate. I want to synthesize a dragon. The composition of the dragon, shrimp eyes, antlers, cow nose, dog mouth, snake body, fish scales..., Any setting, for example, the aura has just begun to revive, and collecting genes is not the plot. Let's not talk about the synthesis process, just water, it is synthesized, it is a lump of ready-made meat at the beginning, the body is mortal, and even the newly synthesized creature does not look like it, the body is fragile, or the success rate is low, something unexpected appears in the synthesis, and the dragon bar does not talk about other physical bodies. The scales are resistant to bullets. The scales were first synthesized from ordinary fish scales, but the result was that the flesh was fragile. What are the fish scales that can block bullets? There are better ones, such as crocodile gar. There are many chapters to look up information and get genes, and the synthesis is a process of trial and error. The ideas are wild and the plot is not monotonous. With the recovery of spiritual energy, the synthesized animals can also have other abilities. In other words, one of the words related to the resurgence of spiritual energy is mutation. The synthesis of genes from various mutated wild animals is also a plot. For example, it can be added and synthesized, which may be the only one. For example, it is similar to a mule, which is very powerful, but cannot reproduce. If the golden finger is a talent, for the growth of the protagonist, if you like the combination of great power, then add a setting, such as using certain effects of created animals and plants to accelerate understanding and physical evolution, or some synthetic species have various magical effects when eaten. If it is a talent, you can also add a talent evolution (add restrictions to avoid the plot getting out of control). Synthetic animals and plants are naturally friendly to the protagonist or cannot betray. If you like building and cultivating, just build a base. Plant protection plus help evolution, generate new abilities, provide food, auxiliary functions, animals, provide meat, build labor force plus transportation tools, combat pets, don't write too much. If you need more system operations, I will also give you a few synthesis quotas based on the background of spiritual energy recovery. On the basis of the above, normal people will try it out when they encounter a golden finger. The experiment consumes one, because life is good or survival is good. , Or simply like it. For example, the protagonist needs money, the recovery of spiritual energy has just begun, and he doesn't want to be high-profile. He discovers a new mutant fish in his hometown fish pond. It has no other use, but the meat is delicious, and it grows quickly. It eats all aquatic plants and has a short breeding cycle. , If you consider the safety of the food chain, you can also add that it is non-aggressive and is at the bottom of the food chain, just like the sunfish in the ocean. It relies on large-scale reproduction at one time to continue the race. If you consider the plot conflict, then add a small effect such as aphrodisiac, which consumes another quota. Then, if the protagonist has this kind of golden finger, will he want to obtain extraordinary power? It is about to be put on the shelves later, and the spiritual energy has almost recovered. Whether it is Shennongjia or a wildlife sanctuary, spiritual beasts or demonic beasts have begun to appear with greatly increased power, sudden changes in size, or possessing some strange abilities, or even possessing crystal cores. This is not a condition for system upgrades. Whether it's a good job or a new quota, this small map is here. For another example, in order to make the plot reasonable and avoid losing control in the later stage, add one or two settings. For example, due to the influence of traces of human life, the concentration of spiritual energy in the mountains is higher, and organisms are easier to evolve. The concentration of spiritual energy in cities is It is lower (similar to the fact that the temperature in cities is higher than that in suburbs, like some kind of heat island effect, just make up any reason, it makes sense), and the success rate of biological evolution is low, but the evolution of living things, especially animals, is not only reflected in the body, but also in spirituality. Cities have been harmed by humans in various ways. The existence of harmful stray cats and dogs, or people who abuse cats and dogs, causes certain animals to have high mood swings and are more likely to evolve under the influence of aura. However, due to its innate conditions, this kind of evolution not only has uncontrollable results, but is often hostile to humans. In cities, large-scale weapons are difficult to deploy. In this way, there is a conflict This can balance the slow evolution of humans but the possession of technological weapons, and the balance between animals without weapons but rapid evolution. The subsequent balance between land and ocean can also be balanced by earth veins. The continent has many mountains, the ocean area is large, and there are few mountains, so the ocean has many evolutionary bases, but only a few peaks. The protagonist can use the system or talent to be one step ahead of everyone else and explore the world. This way of writing is like writing a leisurely story about exploration in the main line, synthesizing new creatures, and the strange abilities of the new creatures. The side lines are explosive and show off, and it is not monotonous. The main line needs to write a passionate battle plot, not to mention it is easy to write, and the explosive points are also easy.

I found a lot of problems When you write a book, the protagonist will fall into a lot of pits at the beginning, and others will drive the main plot. Su Yan was deposed and committed suicide in Tianlong Evil Lord, and needless to say in Tianji Divine Calculation, the cheap protagonist in this book just became a disciple and talked about it. After a while, the NPC jumped out again and wanted to slap him in the face, which caused the protagonist to be oppressed all the time. Although the main plot was established quickly and the plot was compact, it is easy for you to write a book. However, there are too many sensational parts, which makes those who like to read short stories feel that it is watery, and those who like it feel that it is watery. After chatting for a while, I found that time was running out and I had to enter the next dungeon. In this way, the protagonist's ability improvement was not shown. It was like a cheap protagonist breaking through to the eighth level of Qi training, and then to the tenth level of Qi training. If you didn't write down the difference, there would be no expressiveness. Then this It's just a numerical value. It's easy for everyone to think, oh, it's a breakthrough, so after that, you skip it and don't write it, and you chat again. In this way, everyone has no idea of the protagonist's ability, and they have no idea of how the next dungeon will perform, which makes it very tiring to read. The most obvious one is your "Restricted Simulation". It made me really tired to read it. I licked blood every day with the tip of the knife, and it didn't hurt to prick my tongue. You have good writing skills and good sensationalism, but if you start in this oppressive way, the main plot will easily become dark and incomplete. It will feel like the protagonist is being pushed around, and it is all about coping, and his abilities are all forced out. Coupled with this dark and incomplete main line, it is easy to sacrifice teammates. No matter how sensational you are, this is quite difficult for the public to accept, so Maomao was buried by the dismal results. Everyone likes a good ending. After all, short stories are popular on the Internet, and art that the public likes is good art. We all like to be more relaxed when reading and writing novels, so we should write less dark, deep and cruel stories. Use it as a tool to promote the plot. Don't sensationalize what looks good and suddenly appear a big hole that makes people think something bad is going to happen. I feel that we can add more parts to show the protagonist's abilities in the follow-up content. After all, the audience for a novice novel will be wider, and what does a novice novel want? What is needed is to show off, be strong in ability, win the hearts of thousands of people, and be decisive in killing, including some who like to watch torture the enemy. The main point is to show that the protagonist is strong. Go for the center, the core of the onion, and don't be too obsessed with the sensational and dark parts. I feel that the protagonist's expressiveness is what you lack. The specific expressiveness of the protagonist can be arranged in daily arrangements, including what the reader knows the protagonist can handle (this is the same idea as pretending to be a slap in the face), and the world should be friendly to the protagonist. If someone comes up and just complains, the protagonist will just use his mouth to do it, and there will be no time to enrich the world view or deal with other things. Moreover, it is easy to write this way. The rest of the heartthrobs are decisive in killing. I feel pretty good in the calculation of the secrets, but they still need to be polished carefully. There is also daily life. Your daily life is basically dialogue. When you get to the next dungeon, you have a dialogue. Someone comes and you complain. You have a dialogue. Once the dungeon is cleared, you have a dialogue and then reincarnation. Really, how should I put it, let the protagonist take a break and let the reader take a break too. I suggest you take a look at "A Cat's Time", which is well written about daily life and is also from a pet's perspective, which fits your cat theme. You used to say that writing was easy, but later on it would easily turn into something dark and serious. The world view is part of it, and you can't control your sensationalism, and your sensationalism mainly relies on dialogue, so you should talk less in daily life and let the protagonist do other things. He is too chatty. You have ideas and the ability to write about black and deep residuals, but it is too pure. It is difficult for newbies to accept those bad ends, and old guys are uncomfortable watching them. However, those black and deep residual pearls and jade with good grades in Youdaogui are at the front, which shows that there is a way to write this, and everyone's mental state is acceptable, but the right food comes first. Let's write something that everyone likes to read first, and earn some traffic. Those who can express themselves are those who don't have to worry about eating and drinking. Also, expressiveness, it's like a big piece of the puzzle is missing, it's going to be uncomfortable no matter how you look at it. We readers will be affected by the shortcomings effect when reading novels. If I see that this book is not to my liking, I will give up decisively. But if there are no shortcomings, although the plot may be unspectacular and bland, even if it is an old routine, it will rarely arouse a person's disgust and lead to abandoning the book. But you have a lot of clever ideas, so there should be no problem in this aspect. At most, you can change the routine. But the most important thing is expressiveness, expressiveness, or ™ expressiveness. You have to create a protagonist who is sure of the future. He may be confused, but he cannot be confused. In the final analysis, he must have confidence in the future. You have made a big mistake in the Tianji Divine Calculation and the restricted-level simulation. It is a simulator, and its main focus is to be stable and rely on the information gap. The protagonist cannot be taken by others. Otherwise, the cheat will become a freeloader. This will make the protagonist look like a cheater who cheated into other people's high-end rooms. The result is a tragic victory, just like watching a clown. You should let the readers have enough confidence in the protagonist such as the simulator (don't give us the good news that the protagonist will be slapped in the face. It's normal to have some problems, but the slap will pass. This will make everyone dumbfounded). Let us see that the protagonist will first doubt others when encountering problems. If you can do this, you will have a charming personality. In this regard, I suggest you refer to "The All-Knowing One" and about cats. This book should be written in the light and daily category. It is difficult for people to bring the perspective of cats. In addition, it is very uncomfortable to see how many bad people are. Readers will feel very separated, including you must have seen in the previous book that it will become boring if you continue to read it. This is the reason. Jian, I have been reading your books for five or six years, from Tianlong Xiezun to now. Before, I was too cash-strapped to read the original version, but now I have turned it into an official version to support you. I also hope that you can write something that is suitable for both refined and popular tastes and is suitable for all ages. New wine in an old bottle or old wine in a new bottle doesn't matter to old people, but if you want to be familiar with it, you still need new readers, and it should be more targeted at novices. You have the power of writing, all you need is ideas. This book is still at the beginning, so hurry up and take a look at my thoughts. When the time comes, you won't be able to lose it, and you will have to reluctantly give up again 😭

It smells like tomato, the title of this book

It's better to have some fun, I'm under too much pressure now, I'll be able to emo when I'm being tortured while reading a novel

It's been a long time, this is the smell~

I am a human emperor, not a human being.

Support! By the way, I hope to be able to reproduce the previous feat of Tianlong Evil Lord with 50 updates a day 🤓

Leziren's novel, Leziren is not talking about the protagonist, but the author, and the impression is still good.

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Why isn't it updated? Another eunuch?