Mysterious Detective

Nice name. The plot is also good. Too bad it's too messy. It's really messy. Forget it was chaos before. When Su Xia starts the task of being a scumbag and not a scumbag, it becomes extremely toxic. This hole is very badly filled. And it also started to be very toxic. Even though it was messy at the beginning, it was still exciting because of the plot. Later. . . I don't want to leave a bad review. Abandoned. . How to say, many things can be advanced by the discovery of the protagonist or the background of other characters or the discovery of written records. But the scumbag is not a scumbag. I was instantly confused. Why did the first protagonist become Su Yan? But I can guess that Su Yan may be Su Xia. But as the plot progresses, this is not very embarrassing. It would be more reasonable for Su Xia to work hard as a third party to change the main visual of the ending to advance the story. But the main visual changed to Su Yan to advance. It feels like a different protagonist. It's not that multi-visual propulsion is bad. But your writing is indeed not as good as your single vision advancement.

Subconsciously, it feels very brain-burning, but if you take a closer look, you will find that there is no loop at all. Although some things use the name of the protagonist, they feel like they are forcibly ** this timeline, so it makes people feel very messy.

The article has many advantages, but its shortcomings are also obvious. The detailed description, psychological activities and character expressions are indeed not very graphic. Except for the wonderful and unique plot concept, the language and literary artistry do not widen the gap with other online novels. It is recommended that Can Jian learn from writing styles such as "Zhu Xian" and "Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" in this aspect. On the basis of the grand world structure and wonderful plot conception, there will definitely be a qualitative improvement. There are tens of millions of best-selling novels emerging every year, but not many become masterpieces that can be read hundreds of times. Careful polishing is worth looking forward to.

At first glance, I thought my best friend had gained another Baiyin 😰

Why are there so many noxious weeds at the top of Qidian Novels rankings, but there are so many high-quality products at the back? And where do you find new books? The rankings are basically monopolized and basically unchanged.

Catch a miserable god

To be honest, I looked confused, didn't know what I was looking at, and couldn't catch anyone.

I like super optimization the most, it attracted me deeply at the time. At that time, I also downloaded the music that Can Jian gave me to awaken my spiritual awareness. In fact, I really want to ask the author if you have written the story of the protagonist and his ex-wife so realistically. Is it because of what you have experienced?

The master of 500 collections. . This is too difficult

This is the most miserable god I have ever seen, bar none...

Holy Mother! Not my cup of tea! Um! It seems like I've seen it before! Just the title of the book is magical!

This great god is so miserable. Miserable and miserable.

I can't understand, I'm confused 😰

You can update slowly, but don't be too eunuch, okay?

Wait, there are people watching. Although there are not many, we will support you. I've been waiting for you to put it on the shelves. I started from Douyin, come on, come on＾0＾~, don't be a eunuch, don't try 404

A thought blooms? What's the point of being a savior's wife? Aren't you tired? I am not in favor of being cynical and jealous, but I also don't like the idea of ​​sacrificing oneself to achieve others. I personally believe that no matter where and when, people are selfish beings, and even the superior gods and Buddhas cannot avoid it.

Seeing that Chengdu decisively quit, as a talented person who graduated from the nine-year compulsory education, he still has the heart to sacrifice himself for others. He deserves your novel to be thrown into the street.

Just one thought after reading it, it's very confusing!

Why, why is there really no more updates except the day it is put on the shelves? Is it true that there is no archived manuscript?

Let me make a guess. The Lord of Netherworld Castle is also Su Yan, right? But they choose to fall.

I've read this book before, Silver Alliance can't save it

Isn't this great account just for fun?

The various emotions of the protagonist and supporting characters come as they come, and the transitions are abrupt and far-fetched. It is not that the emotions have changed because of something they have experienced, but that the author needs such emotions to promote the plot, so the characters in the plot suddenly change their moods.

I'm looking forward to your next story. I like this book very much and hope you don't give up. I saw this book in other software, but I didn't expect it to end so soon, so I came to Qidian to say cheers to you. I hope you can continue to create this story because you decided not to leave at Qidian. You can't be irresponsible! 👍👍👍✌️✌️

What can I say about this kind of book? It's pointless to follow it. You can only save it and read it to find it interesting.

Author, do you believe in Buddhism? I don't.

Only when I saw the end did I know it was over. It's a bit baffling to watch (it doesn't seem like the dragon was killed in the end, it's just that the protagonist became Su Li and had no emotions 🤔)

What I wrote before is so messy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Try to see if the name is blue, Mysterious Detective

Sometimes, you can defeat yourself.