Hard-Training Martial Arts: My Body Can Be Strengthened Without Limit

..., The author should be steady, otherwise he will easily lose his job if he does it all the time. Suitable for writing Yakuza style, In the early stage, you can imitate writing styles such as Get Out/Bear Wolf Dog/Two Big Pineapples/Night and Snow/Gray Tombstone, but in the later stage, try to write a Yakuza style with personal characteristics. Go away, needless to say, the setting is as novel as ever, anticlimactic, and a new book is also open The early Devil Trilogy of Bear Wolf Dog was good but not profitable, and the latter was indescribable, but profitable (it is considered semi-waste) Two Big Pineapples, Night and Snow, a rising star, with the qualifications of a great god, but it is a pity that he has changed nearly 10 trumpets, except The previous 2.3 Books, other books Eunuch (Power Generation for Love, Eunuch Supervisor) Another book has been published recently, if you like it, you can read it Gray Tombstone, a new author, the first book is okay, the second book "I Can Go Back to the Mysterious Era" is very good, and the third book "Holy Fist" currently open is still worth reading

You can combine chivalry and iron shirts, and people will read it. Don't write randomly.

It looked fine from the front, but slowly it turned into something different! Well!

If it's an ancient background, it's fine, but if it's a modern background, I really can't read it. It's not that the writing is not good, it's mainly that there are too many modern constraints, and it feels weird to read 😥

Even though the protagonist is a master, there are still so many people looking for trouble. Even though he is a master, everyone who practices in other sects is just a fool.

I like the weird Yakuza that you wrote the most. From the Iron Cloth Shirt panel to the chivalrous style, I think the next few books are average. One of the monster flow was blocked, and I also like that one. But the weird Yakuza you wrote is really good, but it is easy to collapse in the later period. The two Myriad Realms books are also good. I still hope you write the weird Yakuza 😭. Write well and the monthly votes will be huge.

I don't know why people who write Yakuza-style and some systems wait for others to come to them before solving problems, and they don't know how to take the initiative to find enemies and develop cheats. It is said that it is never too late for a gentleman to take revenge within ten years, and for a villain to take revenge from morning to night. If you have the ability to take revenge, you must be a villain. Such novels will not seem aggrieved. At the beginning, the beggar gang wanted to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist did not even think about taking the initiative to find them and kill them for revenge. Is this logical? Also, the introduction of Gui should not be so abrupt. It could be that the protagonist develops a cheat and deduces from the things absorbed that it may be the source of Gui. Then his strength increases to the level of local high-level officials and he takes the initiative to find Gui. Later, because he does not understand Gui for the first time, other plots will be brought about, etc...

I said the author's name looked familiar, but he seemed to be someone who was very familiar with it😄

It's a bit illogical. How could the snake god be caught by the protagonist if he has a spiritual body? Where else can you get the points to instantly improve your innate physical strength?

Really just kill it from beginning to end. There are enemies everywhere. I can't stand it after reading dozens of chapters.