Mushoku Tensei: The Perfect Life

Jobless fan fiction is not easy to write, especially from a first-person perspective like yours. It needs to describe more of the protagonist's psychological description, such as Rudy's views, his parents' views, and his views on the world, rather than focusing on other people's descriptions. This is more like a third-person perspective. The focus of the original novel is the protagonist's change in family relationships. The author's writing about change and redemption is actually pretty good, but the focus seems wrong. But compared to those unemployed fans who are just filling in the water, the author has actually written well. However, you should be able to do better. In this book, Sean is the protagonist. It is actually wrong for you to blindly avoid contact with the protagonists to achieve the goal of not accepting the three mothers.

If the author doesn't have time to update, please let me know. Don't disappear suddenly.

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It is recommended that the third person be rewritten, and the first person be eliminated. To reincarnate into this world without a job, it is recommended to wear it directly. The original book also said that you can get unlimited lifespan by wearing it directly. Let's make a proficiency panel and practice the twenty-four postures of Tai Chi taught in the school and the Tai Chi sword of the old man in the park. Isn't that just insulting the natives? It's okay to learn local swordsmanship Isn't the speed of Douqi swordsmanship close to the speed of light? At this speed, the magician should be able to circle the world before he has figured out what magic to use, and stab the magician in the butt, right?

I don't ask for more, I just ask that I can finish it in my lifetime 😫

It's really good-looking, and I feel it's the best-written among all the novels. But it's really rare, at least once a day.

After thinking about it carefully, the protagonist's mother is still too aggrieved, and the protagonist also has incorrect views Blindly guessing that there will be dog washes and saying that medieval feudalism comes from But the premise is that he is a religious person, and that dogma is monogamy, and Paul has to agree to this agreement. , After breaking the agreement, the family is about to break up. There is no good way to deal with it, so I just leave it alone and rely on Rudy to give me a step up. It is Senis who has been wronged and stepped down. After seeing the treatment in the author's book, I am not very satisfied anyway, and the impression is relatively poor.

It's a pity. The author's writing is really good.

I can't give you a reward even if I want to, but I really appreciate that the author only wrote it out of interest.

It's a bit surprising. Very few online novels can be written brilliantly using the DNF setting. On the other hand, although I am a jobless fan, it is rare to not think about having a harem but to focus on original work. However, if the characters of DNF are forced to become jobless, I am afraid that both systems will be destroyed and cannot be reconciled.