Joy of Life: Beneath the Shadows

In fact, time travel fans don't know that the plot is very poisonous. It can be said to be the most poisonous point in the fanfic.

The protagonist wants to become a fairy and has given up his house, money and beautiful women. Why does he have to follow him to Kyoto? Inexplicable and very confusing. There is innovation but not much

The author should delete the first five words. In the spring of the fourth year of Qingli, Fan Xian had grown up. The year he entered Beijing, he was not four years old.

Why do people who write fan fiction like to follow the protagonist and copy the plot?

What are you going to write about in this book? What do you want to express? What I saw was no beginning or end.

Zhang Lingyu's younger brother is also called Zhang Lingyu

I felt that Pig's Feet kneeled down and licked Begonias when they saw them in Qi State. It didn't fit the character, and it was a little bit toxic. Later, I didn't want to watch it anymore. He was obviously going to become an immortal, and his thinking and spirit were higher than ordinary people. Why was it described like a licking dog met a goddess, and fell in love at first sight? It didn't describe the character of Zhang Lingyu who was inferior to others. It was very vulgar.

Sorry, after reading it, I feel like it's just a forced plot. Goodbye.

Zhang Lingyu asked Zhang Lingyu what Xia He looked like? Play directly

According to the setting under one person, Zhang Lingyu is not a Taoist material. He is dishonest and dishonest to himself, and his talent is average compared to several major cheats.