Douluo: Dragon King, God King of Nature

I like this book very much. It's the best Dou San fanfic I've ever read. I hope the author can stick to it and don't end it.

Dou San is really difficult to write. If you take the path of Shrek, there will be a lot of competitions and so on, which is quite boring. The main reason is that Na'er will worship Yun Ming as her teacher and has to go. And how to deal with Tang Wulin? After cutting off Hu Na'er, wouldn't Tang Wulin want to draw blood every day from now on? But the introduction doesn't seem to mean that I want to deal with him.

As the title says, this post is fishing😜😜

Alas, the character of Xu Xiaoyan is really a failure. He is just a jerk. He has too many scenes and is very unlikable. The male protagonist's dog licking also has a strong smell, and he licks Xu Xiaoyan and Wu Siduo's. Each female protagonist has martial soul fusion skills that are really awesome. And I can't walk when I see a female character. The whole story is about driving high and walking low. The back part is really watery and shitty. If there weren't other Dousan fans, who would watch this thing?

The quality of this Dou San is far inferior to that of the previous Dou Er. It has already accumulated two and a half poison points in my book. The monthly ticket has been stopped. If there is another one and a half poison points, this book will be discarded. The following are the poison points that I personally think (if you think it does not count, you are right): 1. The phenomenon of water word count is serious. There are often typos, and a considerable proportion of the plot is copied from the original work 2. The protagonist can actually get together with Leng Yaozhu, who has become his teacher, and judging from the plot, it is difficult not to think that the author deliberately wrote it to satisfy his own bad taste 2.5 (About Kaihou Everyone has different opinions on things like the palace, so I'll take it as a half) But the protagonist's face makes me feel a little disgusted. He doesn't care about being a scumbag, but he is also upright and shameless. In a forced 1v1 activity like Poseidon, the protagonist actually has to pretend. If I were the host, I would definitely give it. This a** is out In my opinion, the only reasonable love lines are Xu Xiaoyan, Gu Yue and Xiao Mo. The others, Na'er has already recognized as her sister; Wu Siduo, the protagonist, was forced to tease her at the beginning; Ye Xinglan almost snatched it from Xu Lizhi; Lan Fuzi is currently confiscated, but I reasonably doubt that the author has an idea. All in all, I don't think the harem in this book is exciting, but rather poisonous😅 As of now (2025.3.15), I think this book has a tendency to start but end, and it depends on how the author handles the remaining important plots.

1. What kind of life-sharing contract was signed when snatching Yali from the Federation? If it was true, then why was Yali okay when Yun Ming died, and she had already been banned when he was snatched, and she had a lot of power of faith. When Yun Ming died, she also showed the status of a demi-god. If it were not suppressed by Tang Ritian, she might have been a god, please take a closer look 2. Every generation of Shirek Seven Monsters and some outstanding Shirek members will break into the federal military base. Once a student was killed, he rushed directly into the military base and killed those people. It was their fault and he was righteous 3. The Tang Sect hollowed out several cities in the Federation to build arsenals. Yun Ming could not have known it.

This is history. It's hard to think that the last book was written by you🙄🙄🙄

In my opinion, Shrek is the academic power of the world, the Tang Sect is the plutocrat of the world, the Spirit Chuan Pagoda is the monopoly trust of the world, it is better to let the protagonist join the Federation, wait for Shrek to be bombed, nationalize Shrek on the grounds that Shrek cannot protect the innocent residents of Shrek City, let the Federation take the lead in rebuilding Shrek, and then directly send troops to level the Spirit Pagoda headquarters and nationalize the Spirit Chuan Pagoda because it is related to the bombing of Shrek. , Then pretended to declare war on the two empires, introduced anti-trust laws on the grounds that the Tang Sect was collaborating with the enemy, dismembered the Tang Sect's capital (mainly because compared to Shrek and Spirit Transferring Pagoda, the Tang Sect did not have any important production materials), nationalized the Tang Sect Research Institute, waited for the end of the Annihilation period, then attacked the outside world, attacked the two empires to unify Douluo Planet, and launched an all-out space expedition. This is not invincible🐶🐶🐶 If the author agrees, please give me a boost

The story goes against the grain. When Cai Yue'er entered Shrek, she wanted to accept a disciple, so she just said that she would become a disciple of Tianfeng Douluo. It really had to be the same as the original, right? I'm speechless.

It was pretty good at the beginning, but after becoming a disciple, it started to get worse. The protagonist seemed to have a small head controlling a big head, licking every one he saw. I know this is a common problem in harem novels, but it was still quite disgusting. I really couldn't watch it, so I gave up. The quality of this book is average among Douluo fans. I really don't have enough books to read.

Shenzhou Tablet

It was originally copied, but the update is so slow. You are the original, and you wrote so many chapters for one assessment?

Are you sure you didn't copy this novel from Throne of the Void?

What I can't stand the most is not letting Na'er and Gu Yue merge. They are just one person, and for their own selfish desires, they force the Silver Dragon King to no longer be complete. Author, think about it, if you split into two people one day, and your lover says she doesn't want you to be a single person again, will you accept it?

A awakened martial spirit can last for three chapters, and after awakening its memory, it can think about an egg and then lose half a chapter. This is too ridiculous. The beginning is all nonsense, with no plot, no main content, and no character description. How can people continue to read it? If it weren't for the small number of people in Dou San Tong, this book would be too much for a monthly pass of 100 yuan.

This talent is really amazing. It only took one year to reach level three. This talent is really nothing compared to Yun Ming. It is even worse than the eternal limit. Can this protagonist reach the Soul Emperor at the age of 20 without cheating?

As long as there are multiple female protagonists, nothing can be written well

Halfway through, I felt something was wrong. You position your protagonist as the son of nature. Naturally, you are opposed to the Tang family. Plus, you are from the Spirit Transferring Pagoda, and you are opposed to Shrek. Halfway through the writing, you added that you wanted Na'er to become Yun Ming's goddaughter. That's really cool. I didn't even recognize the original work, but it was done in your writing. Didn't you want to laugh when you wrote it yourself? Jane is💩

Re-reading the chapters about Shrek's admission, I feel weird, intentionally or unintentionally licking or whitewashing. The protagonist in the previous chapters obviously still had some opinions about Shrek, but why he felt like he was being lowered when he wanted to enroll. I don't understand whether the following is whitewashing those Shrek and the Tangmen, especially those elders.

The writing is too rubbish, I don't recommend reading it

This can also make Cai disgusted and the protagonist is really a waste

Xu Xiaoyan

The protagonist is a scumbag, so scumbag that I don't understand, even if I mess with Leng, he is like a master-student love Dousan, but after the fight, he is irresponsible and wants to run away. This is the first time I have seen him 😴

There is a reason why it is not a high-quality one. When I saw the second soul, the protagonist was too lazy to pretend. He was a pure villain who became rampant and poisonous when he got his way.

Don't keep writing about invincible flow. What's the point? After reading the beginning, I could only get the results without any curiosity. Although Tangshan talked about twin martial spirits at the beginning, they were still useless Blue Silver Grass martial spirits. Everyone knew they were useless. They started to deal with top-notch twin martial spirits. What else was there to see? You can check out some well-written fanfics that don't do this. Even if the top talent at the beginning has a background, you don't just pick it up casually. If you have two five-red names, you will be awesome with two shengs and five souls.

The heroine doesn't have Leng Yaozhu at all, so why should she hang in there 😒

Xu Xiaoyan (Q version)

In an outrageous novel, the class teacher of Donghai College wants to determine the squad leader and then hold a knockout tournament. It is still 1v1. Douluo has auxiliary control and strong attack divisions. This 1v1 is also unbelievable for TM to fight with auxiliary and strong attack. No one knows On the surface, the male protagonist's martial soul is a purely healing martial soul, and the soul skills are all for healing. So he deliberately let the male protagonist, who is an auxiliary soul master on the surface, fight against an attack-type soul master with the same second level. The head teacher thought he was so smart. I've read so many fan fictions but I've never seen a teacher who asked a healer soul master to attack in a strong attack. Most of the games in the original novel are group matches because of the setting of auxiliary soul masters. Even the support and strong attack in Throne of Gods only requires the assistant to hold on for a certain time. When the time is up, the assistant wins. It's so easy for you to let the assistant win the strong attack. That teacher thinks she is so awesome. Some people oppose her and say that the auxiliary soul master also needs to be able to protect himself. Is self-preservation and PK the same thing? The so-called self-protection means that you go up and have a 1v1 with the attack-type soul master.

I can't stand the name of Shao Yu.

Agree with the group