It's My Turn to Be the Hero of a Cool Novel

The organization is clear, the writing skills are deep and solid, the content is compact and rich, I hope the author will continue, don't stop.

I have only read two chapters. The writing is concise and easy to read.

Everything is fine, but if the protagonist is not given a body cheat, he feels like he will become a carrot.

If you like traditional cool novels, those who pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, or those whose protagonists are suppressed, you can read this. The protagonist's subordinate was molested by Lao Deng, and there was power behind the other party. The protagonist put a knife to the man's neck and threatened him, but the matter was not settled at all. After a while, the protagonist was sent to the hospital by his grandson, and then he started writing other things. After dozens of chapters, Lao Deng was not dealt with. The protagonist did it secretly. No one knew that it was the protagonist who did it. They said it was to protect himself. Anyway, I didn't feel happy enough. After more than a hundred chapters, I still haven't been able to protect myself. As for the heroine, only one was listed before it was released. It was mentioned that it was First Blood, and several were listed after it was released. It was not mentioned whether she was a virgin, but one of them studied abroad... The protagonist is very greasy when he is with the girl, and often talks about earthy love words, and the heroine also likes to hear it... The character creation is also not good, anyway, none of them impressed me. The structure is very messy, with things going here and there, and I like to mention it once and only mention it again after dozens of chapters. So when I read it, I only had two feelings, one was confusion, and the other was aggrieved. The author arouses your anger, then ignores it, and will talk about it dozens of chapters later. Instead of giving you immediate feedback, he waits until you forget about it before mentioning it again. Anyway, I didn't feel very happy watching it all the way.

You are not happy at all. You were beaten up by gangsters. You stopped doing Internet and becoming a physical entity in 2008. Do you think you were born again?

I discovered a bug. If you encounter a bully who is teasing or blackmailing someone, you don't have to ask someone to fuck him. But will you call the police? Then there will be a lone hero pretending to be cool, and then you will make peace with others? Do you think there is a market for your book about Goujian? Dude, you write about marketing, do you think this can work? The police were invisible throughout the whole process. Do you think this logic is reasonable? It's been too long since I've written. I've regressed.

Everything else is quite right, the plot of urban beauties causing trouble is truezz

You are a cool guy, but you have so many worries when you meet a girl who is procrastinating.

Wouldn't it be better to write more honest entrepreneurial business battle plots? It's all a plan by a fool, and many of them are dirty tricks. The protagonist thinks that he will have a hand in any business, and it looks messy. Wouldn't it be nice for the protagonist to have the advantage of being a reborn prophet and delve into the future? It's okay to engage in Internet or venture capital based on current foreign trade. If it's not possible to engage in some awesome industries in the future. As you develop yourself, people in various places will naturally come to you and beg for investment. Now that I write, I feel that no one is a good person and all are utilitarian. I feel really tired after reading this!

What's written on the back of more than fifty pictures🐔be stuff?

My account does not have a monthly pass (I signed up Qidian specifically to read your book), but I will give you 100 points for every chapter I read of this book. Stop being a eunuch.

The protagonist was beaten up by a group of gangsters, haha, it was so cool!

The more I watch, the less interesting it becomes. Rebirth is not as good as the life before rebirth. Living is so tiring. What is the meaning of the protagonist's rebirth?

The author's style is still soft-boiled. The little male protagonist is OK, but the big male protagonist is not good at writing the scumbag character. It can be summarized in one sentence and is not convincing.

It's okay to pretend to be cool and slap in the face, but it's still a bit of a literary youth disease.

Fellow Taoists, what do you think of this book? I found that many authors in their 40s and 50s like to write stories about literary youths screwing around. Will there be a plot where a pig's feet are stabbed in the back after being raped?

After rebirth, I am not sure whether it is rebirth or not. Try flying first 😄 There is no one left.

I have the same problem with the recent book "Gang Eunuch", which was too loosely written. You want to write about anything and make money. Who is interested in seeing you make money in YY?

I also feel that the protagonist is speechless. Entities basically rely on relationships, but foreign trade is the most direct. The protagonist's ways of getting involved are very complicated, so what's the use? If you don't dig deeper, the Internet is still the best, because the physical limitations are too great. The Internet was a super invincible blue ocean at that time, unlike now where it is crazy.

In fact, the writing is quite good, but it is too in line with society. If it is good, then reality is very boring. It falls apart later, with the map, and the pace is fast. I probably didn't want to write much. I will treat this as an experience book.

There are a lot of gibberish, I think this book is quite good

After reading the introduction, I didn't have the courage to read further. How old are you when you code?

The writing is okay, but it must be done in one go. If you write once and then stop updating without saying anything, you will be speechless... Wouldn't it be gone if you stop updating once it becomes a habit... To become a great master, the most important thing is persistence.

You are too weak. If a national chain is going to be listed, the real estate agency will give it away.

The last few chapters have not been well written I feel like the protagonist went abroad to dominate the world, and started a Pinduoduo company where he could write a lot of content, and now he is doing something to reward Internet celebrities, which I don't understand.

Either 🈹, or just update normally, and no one like you will dare to subscribe.

Rubbish, dog-licking writing. Lin Yao is more like a pig's foot. The male protagonist is just a licking dog

Garbage, highly toxic. Don't you read what you write? Just sent it out directly?

There is a sign of cool writing, but the actual content is depressed and useless.

The protagonist is a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. There is no main plot at all. It's so confusing to watch.