Reload 2007

After reading your book, I have the following comments that I would like to refer to: 1. The character of girls in comics is more popular in the market now. You have written realistically and readers are very critical. Although I think what you wrote is interesting. 2. Deepen the characterization of the heroine, use characterization as the driving force, and shape the story to serve the characterization. 3. Do not shape more than three or four girls at the same time. You can add them after one stage, and focus on sculpting those few at each stage. 4. Most of the readers are young and like to read things related to the male and female protagonists. When you write, reduce the length of supporting characters. I think your writing is good, but at this stage I just like to read the protagonist. 5. Test the heroine in the direction that the readers fantasize about, regardless of whether it is fake or not, they will just accept it. 6. You can reduce logic to a certain extent. The most important thing is for the protagonist to show off. Your protagonist is coquettish and bold, so keep leaning in this direction. You are my favorite protagonist in this book. 7. All heroines have a role with the protagonist, no matter it is a vase or something. 8. Your book is fine in the early stage, but it will be verbose in the middle and later stages, which is water. You should pay attention to this. Finally, there are two extremes in your style. If you can do it, you will be very awesome, but if you don't, you will be a loser. Go to various places to promote it. Your book is now equivalent to a blank slate, so don't be anxious. If you write well, you will get better.

Even if you're just pretending, at least promote your book.

Good guy, you made up a big one without saying anything.

Hey, I also want to work hard when I think of that book. It was so well written, but now the more I write, the less interesting it becomes.

It is indeed a bit awkward for senior high school students to start a business. The first is that senior high school students simply do not have time to start a business without the help of teachers and parents. The second is that most senior high school students are just adults or minors, and various procedures are also problematic. The third is that making physical products such as MP3 relies entirely on conceptual hype, collecting reservation deposits in advance and then operating. It is impossible for one person to lead and must rely on a small team.

I was a little confused. Didn't Li Dandan change his name to Meng Anni and go to South Korea to become a trainee? Why is there another Meng Anni in the university?

Although I gave up on this book a long time ago, I will come back to check the situation sometimes. At present, it looks like a eunuch again.

Good-looking and awesome. Come on, the city. I think you are the number one.

The author has written many eunuch books, right? His character has been ruined

Brother, let's write books part-time! You've already written several books as a eunuch I've finished writing one part-time as a support account. If I keep doing this, I'll starve to death

I wish you and everyone who sees this post good luck! ! !

After the plot unfolded, I didn't know where to start, and the career line was unclear. If it weren't for the protagonist, he was really a charlatan. As soon as he graduated, he wiped out the value of everyone around him and then disappeared. He made a promise when he was unable to fulfill the promise, and then felt that his career suddenly picked up. Especially Dandan, who appeared inexplicably and entered the game inexplicably. I thought it was through her connections to make money. But in the end, no matter what photos she took and what kind of anchor she was, her background was a burden within a burden. It seems that every heroine has a huge conflict with her family. Is this necessary?

I think the book is very good, but the author's timing is wrong. It would be better to write about the next semester of the college entrance examination. The time line from rebirth to the beginning of the third year of high school is too long. And I write too many things every day, which makes it look a little stained. lsp is the social productivity and consumption power. No matter how good your plot is, you might as well write more that people will love to watch.

Very well written, why is it not popular🔥🔥🔥

The list of authors is gone, and I don't dare to write in too much detail, for fear that I won't dare to write anymore.

Fortunately, I haven't read it. The most annoying thing about your book is Easy Eunuch. But the marketing methods are well described. When opening a new book, it is best to add a system, which should make writing easier. Not easy to be blocked

I originally wanted to gain weight, but I'd better subscribe first.

Where's your update? Update soon

I can't stand the start of 2007 at all

It would be too outrageous if it wasn't Wang Doudou.

Hey, if you hate iron, it will never become steel. The author has strength but not strength. Study hard and systematically, Eunuch King.

I told you not to finish 🔨

I don't know why I always write about such unlikable heroines. Who would like a tomboy or a strong girl, especially if you are planning to have a harem, and you have such unlikable heroines in every book?

The author has something, but not much. The sense of immersion in rebirth in the early stage is very strong and very satisfying. Many plots have the feeling of winning, but they are not written in detail. They are all big openings and closings. The failure of the first business venture is a bit complete, but it is not necessary. In fact, readers have always expected some fantasies of that kind of model in that era. The writing of First Blood is good, but sending him to Korea in order to open a harem is outrageous. There is not much content in a few characters. Amy is really pitiful. She was a little queen in the previous school, but she met a big pervert and almost drove her crazy. The plot skipped a lot after that, and then it was unfinished. What can I say, I can actually write a lot more. I bought a guitar online and it seems to be useless. The author feels that he is very good at telling stories and is very interesting, but he just can't write long-term.