
Naruto: My Burning Release Is a Bit Strong
火影:我的灼遁有点儿强
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 970k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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302Chapters
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Another person who uses Substitution Jutsu as a space ninjutsu
The previous writings are all good, but although the author clearly said it is one-sided, Minato Namikaze is obviously treated as a male protagonist. How many times has Muzan rescued people from the protagonist, and the protagonist has no way to do it, including luring Minato to save Tsunade later, which was calculated in advance, but it is useless. He can't save Minato, but Minato is like being in a deserted land, coming and leaving whenever he wants. The most abstract thing is that the protagonist fights Pig Deer Butterfly. He has already killed seven people. He has killed a demigod in Yu Ninja Village. He can be dragged away by the scapegoat old man to let Pig Deer Butterfly go. It is even more outrageous to catch up with Pig Deer Butterfly later. Akido took the secret medicine and made it a big target for Zhuo Dun (and the big toad)? Not to mention everyone ran away afterward. The most serious injury was because he was about to die after taking the secret medicine, and the rest were all physical injuries. Really, the deletion of this burning escape has no impact on the book at all.
We haven't killed Rosa and the Elders yet, so we don't know what the protagonist is doing.
It feels like the protagonist gets crazier as you go on, just like a lunatic, and it feels more and more boring. Now the protagonist pursues the idea that those who follow me will prosper, and those who go against me will perish. I don't know what the protagonist's previous life was like, but there is no need to fight to the end like a madman, right? Shouldn't we let go of the resources that we should strive for once we have secured them? Then start leveling? I don't even dare to think how many points can be gained by sparring with the whole village in a peaceful situation (I have already read the latest chapter. This is the idea that the protagonist has given me so far. It is too crazy. I dare not think about what kind of lunatic the protagonist was in his previous life and what kind of country he was in)
Author, you can't lie to readers like this! Chapter 1: System Uninstallation, I also think it is a good review. After all, I personally don't like to read system articles. What the hell is the function of automatically collecting ninjutsu in the next 41 chapters? Doesn't this mean that the system is still there? Then didn't you uninstall the first chapter of the system and feel lonely?
Don't write about your old wall lamp, which is older than Tsunade and is in her 30s and 40s. You still write like an innocent little girl. It makes you sick just looking at it.
Tsunade
Tsunade
Ye Cang
Pakula
Why are you here on a male channel when you are not on a female channel?
Does it mean that fellow Hokage fans can't harm Konoha people? ?
I've seen a lot of fandoms that don't kill famous people in Konoha, no matter what the protagonist's stance is. Many of them are made by Konoha who try every possible means to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist just finds various reasons to let them go. The same goes for this book. The protagonist uses various side ways to help Konoha. Either I feel unhappy with Konoha, or I just feel vomited by this approach.
I've reached chapter 552, and I have no idea of continuing to read. Two questions. First, it was said to be Burning Shield, but later on there was no such thing as Burning Shield. Following the old routine of other fan fiction, Sharingan is indispensable. I am confused. A system with Burning Shield and a skill with Sharingan. As long as there are two words in front of it, it is Burning Shield, right? Secondly, I have always been worried about the protagonist's two belts of earth-eyes and the death of Design Lin. The protagonist feels that Danzo has done bad things and is not a human being, but what is the difference between the protagonist's behavior in this matter and Danzo's? Aren't they all just trying to achieve their goals by any means necessary? Then don't let the eldest brother look down on the second brother.
Can Lily have a harem?
Take in Tsunade, Mikoto, Kushina, Konan, Hinata, Hanabi, Yoteru and Mimei
Blindly guessing that Tsunade is the heroine by looking at the cover
Stick! You can post it all!
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The killing was so fast. In Chapter 50, seven people were killed, including the advisory group, Hanzo, and Rosa.
At present, I feel that the writing is okay, but the plot is too weak. First, the protagonist can easily accomplish whatever he wants without encountering any decent resistance. The leader of a village easily enters the territory of another country. It is not too easy to kidnap Tsunade and leave the Country of Fire. When it is important, please attack the supply point as soon as it says a sneak attack. Information comes It's simple, infiltrating is even simpler, and the sneak attack process is the simplest. The only decent resistance is a genin Dai. The other plots are pretty much the same. If the protagonist wants to do something, it is basically simple and successful; secondly, the protagonist is inexplicably strong. At the beginning, it is said that he has reached the movie level, but no matter who he fights later, he shows two things. The first characteristic is that the physical skills are always stronger than the opponent, and the escape skills will kill you at the first touch, resulting in the following fights having no characteristics. The physical skills suppress the opponent, and then the escape skills are over; the third is that the description of the original characters with surnames is too tool-like, whether it is the process of the protagonist seizing power, Rasa's death, Hanzo's death (at this time, Hanzo's death) Is Zou so weak, or is the protagonist too strong? ), Even bringing the Rinnegan back to the village to snatch Obito, Madara didn't react at all, and Black Zetsu and White Zetsu were all in trouble. No matter how confident you are, you still have an expression of "everything is under control" when all the key people in your plan have been taken away. Personally, if the author feels something is wrong, you can delete the comment 🙏
It's Baima. If so, I'll keep it.
I'm bored, I want to watch the river of blood!
Isn't it too peaceful recently? It's all about daily life but almost no real progress. Both the emotional line and the situation are basically stagnant. It's boring in every sense. I want to see blood flowing like a river!
No, what about the fool? If you don't know how to send it, don't send it. Repeat it several times. Don't you know how to check it again?
The author ran away? 😭
In terms of settings, is the protagonist male or female before time travel?
The protagonist's current direction, chakra life form, is this transformation to the Otsutsuki clan.
Half of the eight to four in the S game have been updated. The update is not enough to watch.