Immortality Begins with the Snake Flowing Skill

The proficiency panel is very good, as long as you work hard, you will gain something. However, the author always uses unnecessary conflicts when advancing the plot. This method is not very good, mainly because such character conflicts are unnecessary. For example, in the first conflict incident, the protagonist wants to become a steward, and the author forcibly arranges a person to compete with him, and the person he arranges does not have a good relationship with the protagonist. As mentioned before, as long as he meets the requirements, he can become a steward, and then he will need to run for election. It would be okay if the steward is a very great position. But the stewards are a group of ordinary soldiers who also go to suppress bandits, so the more stewards the better, so there is no need to set it up like this when the protagonist only chooses one steward; secondly, when the protagonist goes from being a steward to a guard to serve as a soldier, there will be competition, and this is even more unnecessary. The guard is simply cannon fodder. It is a consumable. As long as the requirements are met, the more the better. As mentioned above, the more people are in charge, the more cannon fodder will apply for the guard. Author, you have such a strict limit at such a low level. How many people can be recruited by the guard, so such a limit is definitely not the norm. It is specially set for the protagonist. To be honest, this is really unnecessary. If the protagonist has inexplicable competition every time he is promoted, and there is such a character conflict every time the plot is promoted, it looks too embarrassing. Such a big conflict is only suitable for very important positions and very important opportunities. Just let the protagonist enter smoothly. There is no need to write these character conflicts. This is my humble opinion, I don't know what the author thinks.

The plot is quite ordinary, it is entirely designed to embarrass the protagonist. Other times everything is normal, but when it comes to the protagonist, everything changes.

The proficiency in martial arts is not too big, and the writing is plain. The early promotion stage is somewhat interesting as a modern background, and then it should be a more classic development route, food and grass.

The battle against bandits was written too exaggeratedly. This was the first battle. It was originally about elite soldiers fighting ordinary soldiers. It was close to a crushing situation. It was written in such a way that this one was crazy and that one was completely unnecessary.

There is too much inner drama, and the storyline is too slow.

Relying on the panel to become stronger, but saying that others don't work hard

The plot is good, but the writing succeeded in making me poisoned to death.

The protagonist goes to save Zhou Cheng. Sister Zhou Cheng still looks down on the protagonist? This is not good. You can tell from what he wears that the protagonist is not a coolie, right?

Which group are you a general of?

Yeah, the writing is very good, and the writing is really interesting, but it's just a little lacking.

What does the Elephant Armor Gong next door have to do with you?🙂