There Are so Many Charming Red Buildings

I spent money to read more than 210 chapters. The author handles the details of the writing well, and the short-term reading experience is very comfortable. Every supporting role and even one-time character is described more vividly, and the character background and personality are carefully designed. The long-term outline makes people unclear, and it feels that the author has ideas and designs, but the plot unfolds too slowly, so that people cannot guess what he wants to do. As for the mid-term plot design and reading experience, it can be said to be a complete piece of shit. The author uses a lot of words to describe history, humanities, allusions, dynastic backgrounds, and the ins and outs of so many original characters, so that there are very few times when the main plot is truly promoted. The plot of Twenty-Four Filial Piety alone took so many words, I really can't complain about it. As a non-Rong Ning family member, what the protagonist does has little to do with the Jia family. But the author is actually very good at describing daily daily accounts. If the protagonist is an insider of the Jia family, then the plot and supporting characters will definitely be based on the inside of the garden, and the situation will be much better than now. However, the reality is that the protagonist is not a Jia family, and readers spend a lot of reading costs to understand the daily accounts of a large number of original characters, which is not worth the gain. The protagonist is probably the most chaste among the male protagonists of Red Mansion. In more than 200 chapters, there are only three ambiguous ones, and there is not even one who is sure about his feelings, let alone one who is close to him. There is no servant girl, Qing Wen Xiang Ling doesn't have much related text at all, and she is lonely. Qin Keqing's treatment gives people a feeling of being both responsible and upright. This level of chastity can be said to be a breath of fresh air among the male protagonists of Red Mansion fan fiction. Let's not say that Red Mansion fans must accept women, but we should arrange more plots related to them and let them live their own happy lives. After all, the original text is a book about the daughter's family. But the male protagonist seems to be more interested in chatting with pork sellers, chess players, and eunuchs from the Ministry of Internal Affairs. I don't think this book can be considered a fanfic of Red Mansions. It should be classified as a historical novel with the setting of Red Mansions. It can't even be considered as this. It should be said to be a chat diary with the names of characters in Dream of Red Mansions. If you can't accept it, it's best not to read it.

After reading a few chapters, you first said that Wang Xifeng's daughter was born, and then you said that Dongfu has not yet married his granddaughter-in-law. Qin Keqing hasn't married yet. Have you read the original work?

There is a hammer here and a hammer here and there, and no main line can be seen at all. It just feels like a self-pleasure prose that outputs opinions. It is not even half-hearted, and it is difficult to even read it.

I hope it's not another Lin-licking novel. I've read so many Red Mansion novels, and the whole article is about how to lick the Jia family's female relatives. Knowing that the Jia family is about to end, they still force themselves to get involved. When I see Lin Daiyu, I immediately feel that Jia Baoyu and Jia Baoyu are not suitable, and they will hurt Lin. Maybe they like to hurt each other. When I see Qin Keqing, I feel that Jia Zhen is forcing her, I must save her. Maybe she and Jia Zhen are in love with each other. They are worried all day long because they are afraid that others will develop their relationship. When they first time travel and have nothing, they feel that they can save this and that. In the end, they can't save themselves. So please put aside the plot of helping others, respect the fate of others, and don't want him to be like the Great Sage.

Before you came, Jia Mu was a widow; now that you come, Jia Mu is still a widow. Didn't you come here in vain?

I can't figure out what you want to write in the last ten chapters? Is there something wrong with my judgment?

Qiaoer is already born and Jia Rong is not married yet. Although it can be explained by the confusion in the original work, it still feels weird. Moreover, the author needs to change the fifth chapter. Xichun is the legitimate daughter. I always feel that the author has read some strange fan fiction. Moreover, there are a lot of ancient texts in some places, which makes it difficult to read. It is recommended that you add less when writing later. Not everyone can read it.

Do you want to stop writing because you don't want to write well? The most annoying thing is to speak Internet slang with the ancients, but the brain

There is no official title or reward, but 550,000 taels are sent to the emperor. Is there anyone who wants to be an emperor like this? A bandit, a ninth-grade chess attendant, is that what the protagonist should do within the scope of his authority?

I gave it up. There are too many digressions and unnecessary threads. It's hard to read.

Fortunately, there weren't many events at first, but later there were more. The author had few updates, and it was hard to keep up with the updates. I always felt that there were a few things going here and there, and there was a main line, but if it was missing, I really couldn't see it. For example, the main character was good at chess, and the foreshadowing took a few days of updates to connect. Although it is very clever to let the protagonist come into contact with the royal family and the Jia family in a suitable capacity, your update is slow and easy to hang up.

All kinds of bad things happen every day, isn't it because you want to study?

I just traveled through time, and I don't have any skills or background to save this one and that one. Don't you know what you are doing?

I found that the number of words in each chapter seems to be quite large, and the plot is progressing well. This is an advantage, but you must pay attention to your writing style. Your book is quite serious, and it can be funny, but there is no need to use some jokes, which is quite inappropriate in the Red Mansion novel. . That's it for now. It's pretty good.

A lot of plot expansions have been added, which means that the plot of Red Mansions is greatly reduced. In particular, there are many chapters about pork, and he was deeply involved in the succession of the throne in vain. Isn't it enough that the Jia family suffered from these things and was ruined? . . What if the emperor's agent suddenly kills the protagonist, but he is nothing more than a chess piece; if the emperor is restored, can the protagonist interfere with the Jia family by virtue of his merit? . .

I passed by it a few times before and saw no one in the comment section. This time I clicked in and took a look, and found that it was surprisingly good. At least the author's skills are online. The writing is very simple and the details are well thought out. Compared with ordinary Red Mansions novels, it is very innovative. It is just that this book feels far away from the garden opera, but the writing is very good. Come on.

Brother, it's normal that your book is not popular 🙂

You have talked about so many chapters. I wonder what you want to write? Market survey? Social survey? Hierarchy analysis?

Having watched many garden dramas, this different perspective feels really good.

Don't pick on the contradictions in Dream of Red Mansions. Cao Xueqin also writes first and publishes first. Like you, he is an author of online articles. There are 100% logic errors, 100% mistakes before and after, and 100% bad endings.

The novel should have taken a lot of thought, but it's a pity.