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Reba from Carat Lover is still very cute
The author can obviously portray female characters very well, but he chose to write them as bulldozers. When you meet someone you fall in love with, there will be less scenes assigned to one female character. What I wrote in wlmq and r8 in the past is so sweet, but what I wrote in the back is so speechless. It has the same problem as the previous book. Li Xiaoqin is always a little boring as the main palace, and the interactive writing is far worse than in WLMQ. Just looking at the wlmq section, I thought I had found fairy grass. Sincere advice, don't be a bulldozer if you are careless, and don't be a bulldozer if you are careless. It's too divisive to meet one person and fall in love with the other while playing games. I feel it's doubtful whether this book can still match the word count of the previous one. Although it is said that there is a serious problem in playing pure love in the entertainment industry, it does not mean that you cannot write. It depends on the author's writing ability. The author's advantage is that the interaction with the female characters is well written. I might as well try not having so many female characters in the next book, maybe two at most. Use your strengths to write the only two female characters brilliantly, and at the same time clarify your career line. It's a very good Chinese entertainment novel. At least I think the author already has his own style, which is key. PS: The author loves Chen Yuqi so much that you insist on adding a scene in Chengdu and let her appear.
The first half is awesome, the second half is hard to comment on
After reading it, tell me your feelings. When I first read this book, I felt very pleasantly surprised. The Reba in the book is the cutest Reba I have seen in the Chinese entertainment novels of Qidian. She has a good personality, strong ambition, and an online IQ. She and the male protagonist form a dual-power situation, which is very rare in Chinese entertainment novels. I read all the way until the two came to Shanghai. I had no choice but to read the book. I still wanted to read it, so I went to read the author's last book. The last book also had a lot of highlights. Nazha was well portrayed, and Zhang Ruonan's variety show was amazingly written. But I couldn't finish reading it, and I'll explain why later. Because the previous book hurt my enthusiasm for reading this book, I kept reading it. It wasn't until I finished reading the book a few days ago that I picked it up again and read it all. The advantages and disadvantages of both books are obvious, and some shortcomings are common. First of all, there are too many Shura field plots, which are constantly pulled and pulled, making the male protagonist look like a mother-in-law. His career development has stagnated. Dozens or hundreds of chapters have passed, and there is no progress in the album, TV series and movies. It is too boring. Secondly, the protagonist does not hesitate to hurt the people he likes in order to get rewards from the system. The most obvious example is that in the last book, in order to get system rewards for playing Gu Jian Qi Tan with Yang Mi, he refused to accept Yang Mi and kept hanging on to her. This is no longer a scumbag, but a scumbag. The reborn protagonist is already cheating, and the system further reduces the difficulty of the game. The protagonist should be the master of the system, and should not let the system become the protagonist's master. If the xinxing is too weak and is controlled by the system, there will be no charisma. In the next book, I hope that the protagonist will be more decisive in killing, more responsible, not too mother-in-law, less asura in the middle and later stages, and maintain the rhythm of the career line.
To be honest, Reba's appearance is really not that good. Ask yourself how many authors write about Reba because of his fame. To be honest, after getting older, Yang Mi, the poet of the Tang Dynasty + Shuang Ying, had her teeth pulled out and squeezed her teeth inward so that her chin looked small, which resulted in her premature aging. The lines on Liu Shishi's face became inelastic and hardened, causing her to have an expression of indifference, and her smile looked like a mocking face. Zhao Liying looks more comfortable without makeup as she gets older, but she has wrinkles and looks unnatural with makeup. Tang Yan may be the oldest, or she may have been with Wang Jing and can only serve as a side dish. AB found no such person. When I was young, I thought that the fairy was the best in the world. After I turned 30, I thought that the fat fairy was just that. Thinking that she was good-looking was purely a childhood filter. After I turned 35, I felt that the fairy was worthy of being a fairy. She was fatter, thinner, smiling, and cold. It was all the same feeling. It just added time to synthesize it. Bone-shaped beauties are truly God's darlings, and the lower side of their faces will not be deformed due to age. After all these years, the most impressive beauties are still the ten thousand year old carambola, the red and blue battle nightshade, and the white and thin Jianguo. Why there is no Ling'er? Maybe it's because she hasn't changed much, maybe because she has too many boyfriends in the novel, maybe because her own personality is different from Linger's. My Linger had already returned to the fairy world that summer.
I'm convinced, you can't write a stallion story at all, so just stop writing it. It's basically anticlimactic, it can't be long at all, it can only be a mess, and it's a waste of my money.
In 2007, wasn't Daolang boycotted by the mainstream circles at that time? It's hard to get ahead with him
By the way, you added a heroine from the previous book a few days ago. Don't add those little girls. The timeline of your last book was after 11 years old. This one is so far ahead of time, so don't add those younger heroines. To be honest, you were just starting at the time. The 16-year-old Reba, I thought at the time that it might be a long time before the plot. Deleted, good guy, you dare to add Mencius like the previous one. How long have you been putting it off? Moreover, your previous one also started with innocence. I remembered correctly that there was a blind sister who had the ability to empathize and she immediately became a bulldozer. It was embarrassing. I even watched it a few times at the time, and there was basically no turning point. The transformation was too fast.
I don't think it's as good as the previous one.
I can't understand this book now
The next book will add Sister Meng, Zhou Ye and Wang Churan
A few women survive in humble circumstances
I finished reading it in one go. When will the author publish a new book?
Although it looks good, I always feel guilty after taking the role. And you can't be such a time management master all the time, right? Can you think of a way to round it off?
You added Tangtang into it, which is forcing me into a trap, brother 😢
The pace of recent episodes has been a little slower. It would be better if it was a little dry
I gave you the tickets, but I didn't watch it. It really feels like I didn't pay for it. . .
Please make sure the author writes more about Yang Mi's scenes. Personally, I feel that Yang Mi has done the best job in both the previous book and the current one.
This is the finale. I haven't watched it all yet and I've already ordered it. Is it gone?
The finale is over. I'm still finishing the book. I'm still chasing it.
From what you wrote, I can see that everyone has a feeling of déjà vu, so Meng Ziyi, when will Zhang Ruonan show up?