China Entertainment: Start by Targeting Female Stars

You can't give the protagonist ten times the physique of Tyson's body, and Lao Ai's wheel-turning technique. The penis is thickened to 8 centimeters and lengthened to 25 centimeters. Every time he ejaculates, it will discharge, making the woman incontinent and unbearably happy. . .

Don't be too poisonous this time, okay? The plot of the previous book where the main character was sold out for the sake of box office really dissuaded many readers.

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Subsystems are difficult to write about. The last entertainment article that had subsystems was "The Soft Rice King" written by Weiwu. It was very thorough.

This data feels like a eunuch again

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I was pleasantly surprised when I read the subsystems for the first time, but the writing in the first book I read was terrible. Many of the subsequent subsystems were about how to control female stars, which was very boring. The author who was not good at writing really made this idea worse and worse as he wrote it.

The collection of Hawthorn's book is much worse than the previous two books. This is definitely because the beginning of the book is not attractive, and too many shortcomings are exposed in the early stage. Some book friends can't stand this kind of article about subsystems for female stars, and leave after just one glance. Some book friends say that Golden Finger is too complicated, and some even don't know what CG is. Oh, it is indeed a problem with Hawthorn. After two years of writing the book, there is no improvement. However, this book has survived the previous chapters, and the reviews from readers who read it are not bad. You can see this if you look at Hawthorn's collection, but its monthly subscription is no less than the works at the top of the new book list. I beg book friends to support Hawthorn!

Why is there Yang Mi? And Fan

A system that does not directly improve the protagonist is not a good system

It's better to give female celebrities a subsystem to guide the protagonist, so that they can open up the harem openly, instead of the protagonist to guide them.

Coming

It's well written, keep it up, I also like the setting.

To be honest, you have a good idea. The script, training, and initiative of the female protagonist are very good. Although the foundation relies on the male protagonist, in addition to the basic foundation, other female characters can mobilize themselves and actively participate in self-organization and development. It is much better than many similar novels that only focus on the protagonist and let the female characters passively follow. I am very optimistic about your novel. It is very good in terms of the current development model. Come on, I'll give you recommendations and monthly passes when the time comes.

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It has been 5 chapters without advancing the main plot.

There is a serious book shortage now! I couldn't find a monthly ticket and voted for you 😭

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Don't let the author's imagination be restricted by these trends. As a prophet time traveler, as an emotional Neptune with accumulated knowledge about picking up girls decades ahead of his time. The self-added system is simply redundant for the protagonist. It gives people an indescribable sense of self-reining. Personally, I think making a fortune is the least important basic skill for time travellers. Unless you were a gamer who didn't watch the news in your previous life. Then why doesn't the protagonist quickly become a capital tycoon first? Investing in many girlfriends and various movies and TV series. In the end, it was all cattle and horse work?

Take a look at your first picture with a flute and compare it with the one taken by someone else's advertising company. Yours is just like someone who went to work in a ravine. It's better not to create your own.

Less astringent, I like your rewritten plot

Add some more heroines. The heroine of your book overlaps with the first one to give it some freshness.

Are there any other books of the same type that you would recommend? The main female characters are good-looking.

Why don't you write about what awards you can win? With the TV series "Star You"

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