A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: A My World System from the Start

I remember that MC has an integration package for mortals cultivating immortality. The author wanted to play it before writing this book. After reading a few chapters, the plot was intermittent and the details were insufficient.

Isn't Li Feiyu just a mortal? Where did he get his spiritual roots? First: It is very clear that Li Feiyu has no spiritual roots, otherwise why wouldn't Han Li take him to cultivate immortality (the Han family and the Li family formed a family) Second: After Han Li became an ancestor, he gave Li Feiyu an opportunity through reincarnation (Qixuanmen) (that is, Li Feiyu's reincarnation) "Li Feiyu" "Yu" has spiritual roots Third: He and Han Li don't know each other at all about "Li Feiyu" from the North Wind Realm. He finally ascended from the North Wind Realm to the Immortal Realm 😥, so Han Li only knows him Many people in the Immortal Realm know "Li Feiyu" 😊

Doctor Mo only gave you the first level of Qi training, but you can actually cultivate the sixth level in two years. It's really awesome.

I don't know why there are always people who watch anime and write novels. Is it possible that more people in Qidian read novels than watch anime?

I haven't read much, just a few pictures. So far, the creativity of this book is quite good, but the author's writing style is too immature and has the purity of a fledgling novel. Most of them are written like expository essays, introducing this, introducing that, the plot advances abruptly, the protagonist's growth jumps, and the author also adds some of his own settings from time to time. Rate the work. Novel creativity: Five stars, the collision of the game world and orthodox cultivation is still very attractive. Children's writing style: Two stars. The overly complex settings lead to fragmented plot. The eagerness to express one's own settings makes the rhythm of the entire article somewhat disordered. The control over the plot is still a bit lacking.

It's gone, it's a cool novel with too many poisonous points. I can't stand the 2B temperament that comes from the shop.

For more than two years, there is only one ax available at the critical moment. . . . . . You knew what was going to happen, why not be prepared? Do you force the plot?

It's all mine. I also repaired a few Mao Xian and made the Creation Stone invincible.

Does the author know about the assembly line, does he know about villager manufacturing machines, does he know about farming iron fields and monster towers? Two years, even if the game time and real time are the same, there are more than 700 days. If I had such a long game time, full item automation would have been out long ago. Even if full item automation hadn't come out, then there would always be enchanted alloy sets, right? As a result, the protagonist only has an iron ax when fighting the boss?

I found that the protagonist has been in the clouds since he was accepted as a disciple. He knew clearly that the person named Mo had evil intentions, but the equipment slot on his body was actually empty! There is an iron ax in the backpack. Not to mention the enchanted diamond sword, you must have the totem of immortality.