Douluo: Light of Elements

To be honest, Gu Yuena is just because she is the heroine, otherwise she doesn't feel very good. She has been protected by the ethnic group for hundreds of thousands of years. She also mentioned that she wanted revenge. It should be possible to lead people away with her god-level strength. However, she said that she wanted to understand human beings and everyone trusted her, but she herself rebelled and reconciled with them in just a few years.

I was thinking that the author didn't make a fortune from Shrek when he wrote the book (why did he start to whitewash his writing about black people?), But is he stuck on it every day? I have cut several copies of it. As we get to the later stages of the era, one family becomes more dominant, and they pay more attention to being fair and avoiding the sharp edges. Why don't I read the original work? 🙂

I have read all the author's books, from the one about the Spirit Transferring Pagoda to the Evil Soul Master and then the one about Shrek. I guessed that this book should be G. The reason is that the author can read the book from Legend of the Dragon King to the Circle of Great Gods. It is easy to write about Silver Moon Douluo (Shrek's unreasonable troubles during the exam) and Light and Darkness Douluo (it seems like this? It's Long Yeyue anyway, I understand the reason). In terms of personal growth and power: In fact, the author can write about Spirit Tower, Evil Soul Master, or anything else. But the reason why it is easy to collapse when writing about Shrek is that if you take the pure Shrek approach, you will be scolded. The preparation is too long. Shrek is already at his peak in Dou San, so it is difficult to have a good breakthrough idea. On the contrary, the Spirit Transferring Tower, Evil Soul Master, Soul Beast, and even the military, the Federation, Xing Luo and Dou Ling are all in the climbing period during this period, and personal growth and power growth can be linked. In terms of female protagonists: The most popular female protagonists right now are Yin Long and Xu Xiaoyan (most of them are written about them, and a few are Yuan En). In fact, the female protagonist can be anyone, but she should not be too popular, and at the same time, she should not be too stereotyped (actually, I don't know how to handle this aspect of the female protagonist, and no matter how I do it, I won't satisfy everyone). Thinking: This feeling is the most important part of a book. Today's fans don't want to follow the main line, nor do they want to deviate too far from the main line. Therefore, it is best for the author to sort out the main line himself, and then select a few opportunities that can intervene without following the main line. Yes, I think the Tianhai Alliance Competition, Poseidon Fate, Devil's Island, Blood God Legion and later Battle. Net are all very important nodes. How to operate between nodes depends on your imagination. The imagination that can be added during this time period include: AI, VR, Star Battleship, Genshin Impact (?). Finally, let me talk about my own suggestions. In fact, if the protagonist is a commoner, it is not easy to write, because it is difficult to write the first pot of gold, and if your commoner awakens the martial spirit very well, you will have to open the Ice and Fire Mandarin Duck Pot or Dragon Valley to make up for it later. It would be slightly better to write about a family in a small or medium-sized city, as there is no need to make up the basics, and some things are more advanced. Easy to contact, I think, Sun and Moon Royal Family - Sky and Sea Competition - Central Legion (or other legions, such as the Northern Legion can usurp the Shen family) - War Temple - Federal positions (to supplement military merit, such as playing Star Luo, etc.) - Shrek Demolition Office (or you can also be Shrek Dean at this time) - Blood God Legion Legion Commander - Become a God - Poke Tang Ritian - Interstellar Era. This is my humble opinion. If you have better opinions, you can also tell the author. Don't always complain about the author's bad writing, and then not say what is bad. Doing this one after another is actually harmful to everyone.

I'm curious, do you guys get tired of watching Harem?

I feel like I have read several of the author's books, and I have a problem, that is, he is nice to some supporting characters for no reason. It does not mean that you can't be nice to supporting characters, but you have to pay attention to a step-by-step process. After they have not been together for a few days, nothing has happened, and the relationship has not reached a certain level, the protagonist starts to show his heart to some supporting characters. , You can't tell the story, for example, this book, you bought so many resources to others even after studying together for a semester, and gave Yuan En a 100,000-year-old soul bone, two yuan for each, if one dares to give it away, the other dares to accept it, speechless 😓, the last book was poisoned by this poison, and this book is still like this

I looked at the table of contents and saw Yue Qingyin in the table of contents and the writing style of the first few chapters. I guessed it was you. Damn it? In the previous book, it was written that the evil soul master was scolded to the point of changing his account? Or what? You're going to take the Shrek route for this book. I think you've always been into yellow and black, right? What, are you planning to wash Shrek?

There is no tribe of soul beasts. They are just a group of ordinary beasts. The soul beast princess is even more of a joke.

The main character of this book is too disgusting. If you see a girl, you have to hook up with her. That's not to say that harem stories are not good. What's the difference between you and that kind of wretched guy? Moreover, the writing in some places is really blunt. I can only say that you can read it, but you can't read it carefully.

The male protagonist is Tang San + Internet troll + greasy man

The adaptability of the soul bone is too low. It's nondescript and messy, and it doesn't match the protagonist's combat system at all.

It's pretty cool. I thought I could read it without using my brain, but it turned out that I couldn't read it without using my brain.

Do you play elements in Legend of the Dragon King? I feel like you should reopen it. The Silver Dragon King controls all the elements and you can't do anything to the extreme. In Douluo, the Silver Dragon King is the strongest in all elements.

Is it acceptable for the protagonist to be knocked unconscious by a woman and then borrow his seed? Just watch it if you don't know about it yet

No, buddy, according to the Legend of Dragon King, it only takes 4,000 words a day.

Later, I completely copied the original work and changed the name of the protagonist.

There is also a little bit of my own creation in the front, and it is directly pasted in the back. The protagonist comes on stage and is just mentioned in one stroke. It is rubbish! Rubbish! Rubbish! ! ! ! ! !

Isn't the male protagonist just a copy of Tang San?

The change is too sudden, there is no emotional drama at all, the harem is just a tool, the protagonist's image also changes too quickly, there is no main line, it is just mindless fun, just for the sake of fun.

Is the heroine of the harem novel Xu Xiaoyan?

Does the author have any other books😍😍A friend asked me to ask🤗🤗🤗