Swallowing Starry Sky Cave View

1. It does not follow the route of the original work. The protagonist does not participate in the genius battle, is not accepted as a disciple by the Lord of the Universe, and has many original plots. 2. Although the protagonist was born on Earth, he is not an Earthling, thus directly avoiding the chance fight with Luo Feng. The Secret Book of Nine Tribulations and the Star Tower were both prepared by Mountain Guest for the leader of the Earth lineage. If the co-character protagonist is a contemporary of Luo Feng, there must be competition with Luo Feng. In fact, in most cases, the talent and strength displayed by the co-character protagonist should be more suitable than Luo Feng to become the new generation successor of the Star Tower. However, many fanfics do not solve this problem very well. They either handle it poorly or simply ignore it. 3. The protagonist does not have golden fingers such as systems, panels, simulators, etc. Although his talent and strength exceed Luo Feng, he does not crush him in all aspects. Luo Feng's strength once surpassed the protagonist. It can be said that the author is quite cautious when it comes to cheating. If you have watched "Lord of All Things", you will know what it means to crush in all directions without blind spots. (By the way, the reason why I diligently watch the Devouring fanfic is actually largely due to my love for the original protagonist Luo Feng. So even if I watch the fanfic, I hope to see Luo Feng still have his own highlight moments, and I don't like to see Luo Feng being overly crushed. As for the fanfic who robs Luo Feng of his main opportunity, that is even more disgusting. Absolutely. ) 4. When this book was written, Tomato was already writing Devouring 2. Thanks to the writing time, the author used the settings of Devouring 2's origin continent and Hunyuan space. Therefore, this book is the first Devouring 2 fanfic that I have seen based on the original setting. It is also a complete Devouring 2 fanfic written from Devouring 1 to Devouring 2. Then let's complain about the problem: First of all, the author is really good at it, and I admire it. How can he write so much about the theoretical knowledge of cultivation, from front to back, all the way to the lord, and he is still writing. It feels like he can write more than a tomato... (I regard these theoretical knowledge of cultivation as nonsense and skip to read the plot. The author is really good at nonsense) Then, no I understand the significance of the author writing a son. The key process is quite outrageous... I feel that later in the writing, the author actually has doubts about the significance of this son and is not interested in it. For example, it is clearly stated that the son is a genius second only to Luo Feng at the same time as Luo Feng. Later, Luo Feng became the first master of the universe in the universe sea, and even Hongdu became a true god. This son is still the master of the universe, and he is not a super-standard master of the universe like Luo Feng. When the protagonist became a lord, due to the special reason for becoming a lord, everyone forgot that the protagonist existed, including all his relatives, but the protagonist did not recognize his son. Third, and what makes me complain the most, the protagonist and Luo Feng have always had a very good relationship along the way, and they are considered brothers. Many people say that the protagonist is Luo Feng's licking dog, which at least shows that the protagonist is really good to Luo Feng. However, just because the protagonist captured an immortal being in the Land of Eternity, the "hermit", to explore the world beyond the endless Chaotic Source space for him. This "hermit" is not a practitioner, is not a friend of the practitioner camp, and has no friendship with Luo Feng, but Luo Feng actually fell out with him! The sword is drawn! Kill the protagonist with a knife! Then they broke up! The protagonist was originally planning to catch Mogus next. Those who have watched Devouring II should know that Mogus's soul attack is the most troublesome in the cultivator camp and is the most difficult opponent to deal with. The protagonist was ready to catch him, but was stopped by Luo Feng. The protagonist asked if you know who I am going to catch, and Luo Feng said it doesn't matter who I want to catch! He fought with the protagonist regardless of the circumstances. After the fight, the protagonist said that for your sake, I won't arrest Mogus for the time being. Luo Feng regretted it again. He thought that if he had known you were going to capture Mogus, he should have let you arrest him first... In short, the flaws are not hidden, it is a very good Devouring fanfic!

Everything about this book is good, except for the heroine. The heroine is the orphan of the protagonist's captain. When the protagonist was still confused and had a missing soul, she stole the protagonist's cell tissue for research. Later, she used these tissues to give birth to the protagonist's child. After the protagonist's soul is complete, he knows about the child and goes to see the heroine. As a result, they ended up having sex as soon as they met. Where is the logic? The protagonist, the invincible God of War, can't find a girlfriend on earth? Are you having sex with such a morally deficient person, or someone who is a junior? Female channels don't even dare to write like this! You said that the protagonist loves her, but you want to write that the protagonist is devoted to cultivation and has no heroine in his heart. Then they switch to the universe. The two are in two universe countries. They start to write about the heroine being independent and self-reliant and starting her own business. She borrows money from the protagonist to draw a line. I thought the two of them were going to separate and settle down. Who knows? ! After the protagonist returned to Qianwu Universe Kingdom, he got together with this woman again. You can say that the heroine loves the protagonist. The protagonist is semi-demented at the beginning, and the heroine steals cells so that she can be promoted in a scientific research organization. You can say she doesn't love her, but she went to the battle to give birth to a child herself. If she wanted to cling to the protagonist, the sheets would have rolled over her later. The protagonist went to explore the universe, and she wanted to draw a clear line with the protagonist. It would be inexplicable if she knew that the protagonist didn't love her so she gave up, but then the protagonist came back to develop a relationship with her. That Long Yue is stronger than her, and she has no idea what kind of heroine she wants to create. Obviously the protagonist is very good and the plot is very good, but it turns out that it is matched with such a female protagonist. If you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't write it. Just create a background heroine (such as Xu Xin), but you have to create such a disgusting thing.

The plot after entering the secret realm is so disgusting🤢🤢. You know that the background of the story is disgusting, why do you continue to go on for so long? Are you a great god? They also forcefully arranged for the protagonist to reveal his understanding and talent. Until now, he is still a piece of pork on the chopping board, waiting to be enslaved by his soul. If the dungeon ends with the protagonist escaping due to an accidental fall from the sky, then delete the book directly.

It would be better if the protagonist's enemy is changed to a feudal prince, or to a soul slave of the feudal king faction. A king who is good at souls, and his methods are so ruthless. It is impossible for the protagonist's father, a realm lord who is comparable to immortality, to hold him back, let alone let a realm lord escape. Just put any soul slave and it will be solved.

It's terrible. The latest update is terrible. It's not like it was written with a lot of thought. It just happened to happen. It was forced to come together. There was no reason and no result. Because I didn't want to change Luo Feng's chance, but it also disrupted Luo Feng. Feng's trajectory, I almost missed the opportunity to write about Luo Feng, but I managed to piece it together in this way. I can only say that this piece of writing is just like when I was in school, my teacher said that I didn't have the heart to write randomly. This chapter feels like a piece of porridge dropped into a pot of good porridge.

The writing is very good, don't write it next time.

The heroine is so disgusting. The protagonist is on earth and in the universe. He can't find any girl. He keeps pushing and pulling, breaking the connection and drawing a clear line. Come on, the female channel is still a piece of shit. Really, the Devouring Stars fandom either has no heroine or has a harem. The rest has a single heroine. It's so funny.

It has its own content, but I just don't understand why the protagonist is so licking when he is with the Earth Gang. Not giving coordinates when leaving the Earth can be understood as plot advancement. What happened on the Earth before the secret realm came out has been forgotten. Others treat you as an outsider and guard you. You are in a relationship with the people on Earth as a philanthropist, and I don't have any resentment in my heart. There's no need to be so awkward. It's good to have the status of an outsider. If you force yourself into the circle and others don't want to see you, you have to arrange for your son to have the status of an alien brother.

It's a waste of my money. It's a rubbish novel. The Lord of Huang Jian is so forced. After becoming the Lord of the Universe, he should be taught a lesson.

Is it inappropriate to use a pig's trotters to fight against a genius in Pre-War 3? Then, wouldn't it be better to become a master of at least the Venerable Master than to practice on your own? You also have an immortal enemy who has been crowned the king. The result is that Pig's Feet is working hard on its own, lifeless, unmotivated, and uninteresting. Finally, it can't hold on any longer.

Not hanging up, disturbing Luo Feng's opportunity, just waiting to die

People who are watching this book must first understand this book. He is really bad, and the protagonist is that kind of unmotivated and lifeless, just like you are hollow and lifeless. You have to jump to read it, and it makes you crazy while watching it.

I read it to read the Devouring fanfic, not Cthulhu. I don't understand why I wrote this plot, so I gave up. Goodbye 🙏

Finished reading the Earth Chapter: Literary Youth + Will Not Change the Plot (Licking the Dog)

The recent plot is too fake and unreasonable. . The protagonist's family is also a third-class bloodline. This kind of bloodline is basically considered the upper echelon of the human race. And this planet also gave birth to an immortal military lord who was close to being a lord. And he is also a subordinate of a moneyless lord. If a certain king is invincible and takes a fancy to a treasure on a certain person, it is understandable that he will kill people and seize the treasure halfway. But you just smashed a planet into pieces. Aren't you just slapping the moneyless lord in the face? The moneyless lord is also the Lord of the Universe.

In 2038, Luo Feng was born on June 8, 2038. In 2056, after Luo Feng became an adult at the age of 18, he achieved planetary level in about 3 years and gained inheritance. Then he took away the Golden Horned Behemoth (2060), dormant for a year and a half, and cultivated for about a year and a half. Hong and Thunder Gods awakened, eliminated the monsters, and Luo Feng stepped into the universe Later, Luo Feng became a star level and participated in the cosmic mercenary exam. Core, registration deadline, May 16th, pre-selection starts and lasts for 1 month; 3 years of reincarnation war, obtained demon killing clan clone In 2074, Luo Feng was 36 years old, arrived at the headquarters of Virtual Universe Company, and spent 3 years on the road, his mental power broke through the universe level In 2279, Luo Feng was 241 years old, and he was tasked with sweeping the original secret realm. In the 11th year of Hong's love affair, Luo Feng broke through to the realm lord level In 2331, when Luo Feng was 293 years old, the golden-horned beast broke through to the realm lord level and was recognized by the original law: Jin In 2518, when Luo Feng was 480 years old, the secret of the earth was discovered. In 6979, Luo Feng was 4541 years old, in the battlefield outside the territory, in the broken star belt, a hundred years In 14470, Luo Feng, more than 12,000 years old, recognized the master of the Star Tower, in 6092, and slept for 9 years, a total of 6101 years In the year 97,000, Luo Feng was more than 90,000 years old and became immortal In the year 115,000, Luo Feng was 110,000 years old. He spent 180 million years in the small universe of the ancestor of the starry sky beasts (ten thousand times accelerated) One year after the battle on the original star, the Breakthrough Master emerged. About a hundred years of battle on the original star, achieving the status of Lord of the Universe 160,000 years, setting off in 9106 after accepting the inheritance, and arriving in the original universe more than a thousand years later Then, the giant ax fell A few months later, thousands of Lords of the Universe in the original universe fought in a decisive battle, and Luo Feng broke through to become the Lord of the Universe. Eight million years ago, the Jin world appeared.

I specifically subscribed to one just for the purpose of commenting. It's really good. I think, son, I was really going to be poisoned to death by that episode. Really good ex, I really can't stand it. I feel like the author is not young, so why must there be a heroine and a son. . .

When I saw Chapter 29, I didn't know where to go. I wanted to post a chapter review but couldn't. I had to give a reward and subscribe before I could post a comment. Is this a garbage plot intentionally written by the author to make readers who want to scold and complain subscribe and give rewards? Author, you shouldn't have set a reward of 100 points for one point, and no reward for one point. Also, Li Yao died earlier. Is the author guilty of his death? He went to avenge his son, not specifically to deal with monsters. You feel guilty. Are Li Yao and his wife good people? After his son died, he had to offend others. He even stole the lead role before. Is this the author trying to express a mentality of being cruel on the inside and tolerant on the outside? I have read a total of 29 chapters and there are a lot of flaws, that is, I want to read Devouring Fans. For other novels, look at the author level and the number of comments. If they are too bad, I won't read them. If you don't reward and subscribe to the author's comment section, you won't be able to post them. There are more than 50 comments, level 2, and more than 900 chapters written. What level is this?

I just read more than thirty chapters. It can be said that the author wants to be as embarrassed as possible in the emotional scenes, and does not listen to advice at all. Originally, swallowing the heroine is a kind of creature that is very slow, so he had to add emotional scenes. It was embarrassing once, and it was even more embarrassing the second time, and my scalp went numb.

I would like to ask the author if the dog-licking and nannying style has improved since it was put on the shelves. I can tolerate your nannying family, but Luo Feng and Hong have to nanny, and they also have hot faces but cold buttocks. This kind of thing is really uncomfortable.

There's no point in trying to level up if you have to stick to the last doubling.

The author actually has some ideas. For example, he tried to reproduce the rapidly developing low-tech civilization of the earth (earth civilization in the previous life), using his own kingdom of God as a testing ground, and eventually cultivated "alien" such as the Holy Number Civilization. I have read too many fans of Swallowing Starry Sky, and I am quite tolerant of plots where the author has his own ideas (as long as they do not violate the basic settings of the original work) because I have read too many cookie-cutter plots.

Pig's Foot was about to kneel down and beg Luo Feng to accept the golden-horned beast.

It's getting better and better from now on

Phew~ It's a great book, I recommend everyone to read it quickly! I didn't laugh

I would like to recommend my own book, "Swallowing the Starry Sky, Starting with the Weakest Special Life", the beginning of the Prison Clan

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