The Heart of Fantasy Begins with Swallowing

Explain it! The reason why no Immortal was willing to accept a disciple in Chaos City before was because, on the one hand, the path did not fit, and on the other hand, they saw that the protagonist had a mental problem. As for talent, Bolan didn't even take a fancy to it, let alone Prime Minister Li, who seemed to be inferior. Luo Feng is because King Zhenyan sees him right, which is a manifestation of the aura of the protagonist. If he chooses someone else when King Zhenyan shows kindness, he may not necessarily accept it. As for the original work, it seems that he was robbed from King Zhenyan, and he didn't say anything to Luo Feng. If he really went, he would be considered ungrateful, and the possibility of accepting it would be reduced. As for the so-called snatching, it is just a mutual conversation at that level and cannot be taken seriously. This is how I understand it. If there is any objection, I can only say that different people see different novels.

What are you writing about? This is the worst fanfic I've ever read!

If the author is not good at writing, it is better not to do this. There is no foreshadowing at all, giving people the feeling of being forced to smooth things over. So how do readers understand the following content and reverse it? A fantasy within a fantasy? Are you here to play Inception?

I don't understand why it's written like this. This is the only time traveler with plug-ins. Even without plug-ins, as long as you have some talent, you can do better than this.

Devouring the so-called state of mind is of no use at least in the original universe! Just one sentence is enough for the giant ax to survive. I don't believe in my golden finger. I believe that the inheritance should still be blocked. This is written as if the ending of a book is a dream, and it is like starting over after writing it. This plot is not good.

It is strongly recommended to have a blacklist function, it will delay the book shopping too much.

It's really inexplicable that Wen Qing is seriously ill. If you want to write Devour, don't do these things, just do it. If you want to do this kind of literary and mysterious thing, don't write fan fiction.

What are you writing about? It's a mess, and with the main character, the final result actually gets worse. The main character is a pure waste and a drag, which makes me sick.

The first 40 or so chapters are both fantasy and past and future. Becoming the Lord of the Universe, then willing the True God, becoming the True God of the Void, and becoming the Eternal True God. Then, for more than 50 chapters, it becomes a fantasy dream. Then, when the lifespan is up, I will still be the Realm Lord. Then I will not break through and become immortal, but become the realm in the Snow Eagle Lord. I will start to worry about the past and the future? ? ? What the hell, it looks like Wen Qing is sick~ I can't stand it anymore.

Although I haven't read this book much, I admire my brother's perseverance and passion for love. There are many good-achieving devourers. The author can't stand it if he is criticized for a few words, so he will stop updating.

You'd better write other articles. You're not suitable for writing online novels. Of course, if you insist on writing, you can also write suspense, mystery and horror. It's really hard to read your fan novels!

The full text is messy, messy, self-monologue, no interaction, and the wording is ambiguous.

Forget it, it's just such a rubbish novel and it has nothing to do with whether it has a female protagonist or not.

Many people also discovered that the story was somewhat broken. At first, I started writing this book because I couldn't write the previous two books. With enthusiasm, I basically updated it at a rate of more than 10,000 words a day for a while. Then, I tried to apply for a contract and succeeded. But later, due to some things in life, my enthusiasm waned, but I still had to maintain two updates of more than 4,000 words a day. Due to the lack of inspiration and insufficient writing, although I tried my best to save it, the plot of the Devouring Starry Sky chapter still fell apart. Since there were problems with the previous writing, I simply re-wrote the Snow Eagle Lord chapter. Of course, the plot still continues, but some of the plots in the Swallowing Starry Sky chapter were too hasty, such as the dream world, which should have been written in detail, but the state was not right, so it ended up like that. I will not change what has already been published. Even if it conflicts with the original plot, it will be treated as a fanfic. I will write it down. As for the writing problem, I am working hard to correct it, but that's it for now. I will continue to write this novel. Since it is a bit broken, I have talked with the editor and will not put it on the shelves yet. Now, I have saved the manuscript, but in order to avoid the previous situation, I still publish at the rate of two updates a day. At least, this way there will be less interruption, right? The novel is a little bit broken, and it is not on the shelves. I basically don't have much income in other aspects, but I have to get perfect attendance! I welcome readers to read it. After all, I have been thinking about this story for a long time. This is also the last motivation for a novice author when the book collapses. However, as a newbie, there are indeed many shortcomings, so I can only ask for your understanding! Since this previous book has collapsed, there are no plans to put it on the shelves for the time being, so that's it. I will try my best not to collapse again in the following plot. I might as well give some spoilers. Many people have also guessed that Yu Jingyun is Prime Minister Li. I also laid the foreshadowing of the specific situation in the previous chapter of Swallowing the Starry Sky. However, did no one really notice? I think it is very obvious. The protagonist of this book is actually Prime Minister Li. Okay, that's all. I hope more people will read my book, even if it's not on the shelves. However, if I really can't read it, then I can only apologize. Perhaps, the same goes for reading from Chapter 86, which would be equivalent to treating the Swallowing Starry Sky chapter as a prequel. Anyway, it's free. If you can keep reading, you might as well read more. I plan to finish this book, no matter how dismal the results are. Also, there are some parts that are too trivial, because they are too similar to the original work, and I don't really want to write about them. However, since someone has already mentioned it, I will make more changes later. However, some habits have been formed, and there may still be the same situation as before.

There are still very few fans of Lord Snow Eagle, so keep writing.

This is the most unsatisfactory book I've read among the Devouring fandoms. It's written in a mess.

I have to say that this author is also great, and the comment section is full of bad reviews.

When reading this book, it is better to forget the original annotation. It is better. I don't know whether this book is good or not, but I think this book is not good. I believe many book friends should have seen it. Someone demonstrated what it means to write 40 words from 10 words. There are also people who will keep talking about one thing over and over again. That is really bad. . . Personally, I think this book is worth reading.

The most basic setting is hard to understand, but in chapter 46, he becomes the master of the universe. Is this the outline you wrote? Lord Hunyuan can deliver messages to the protagonist in the original universe. This setting is also 666. If you don't have the writing power, don't touch the past and the concept of the future.

To write an old monster to be so weak and evil, doesn't he know how to know everything?

After reading Chapter 50, I was confused...

The protagonist's golden finger is inferior!

It feels like fewer and fewer people are watching

A running account, can the author read it first? A messy batch, just like a bunch of random thoughts mixed together, and then shown to the readers. It made me really want to vomit. There is no logic at all. I just write whatever comes to mind. If it can't be fulfilled, I call it a fantasy.

What did you, Lord Snow Eagle, write? Have you always been like a native, but you can look at modern society while meditating?

How should I put it, it feels like a running account. There are still many details that have not been grasped in place. Many things in the original work have been changed randomly. For example, people who enter the original secret realm. There are still 30 years in Chaos City, and Luo Feng is on the fifth level. Bolan is on the sixth level. Is it okay to make readers feel uncomfortable after you change it? After all, you are writing fan fiction.

It's so uncomfortable to watch, the outline is still not done well

I just watched the battle between geniuses, and I discovered a problem. There is nothing good about the protagonist. I really didn't find any advantages at all! Bigou can't compare to Gou Sage who writes about Sword Master, and Bigan can't compare to Brother Dongzi. To sum up, there is no villain's life, but all the villain's diseases! I'm speechless just looking at it! If you write him as a protagonist despite all his faults, he is still very decent. If you write him as a villain, I think this is a very successful character!

Never been on the shelves? 😰

This book would be better if Yan Yan and Xueying were completely separated. Most people who like Yan Yan are dissuaded by the assembly-line outline in front of them. The plot of Snow Eagle does clearly show the author's progress, but if you like Snow Eagle, it's hard to be attracted to it.