There's Something About This Tribe

This kind of primitive tribal style has fallen into the cliché. Usually it is about how the protagonist reduces the dimension and attacks the surrounding tribes, and how many technology trees are opened. But in fact, isn't the most important thing the political, economic, and culture of the country established by the male protagonist? Including some other things, and occasionally you can even write some other minor characters' perspectives. You can have a female protagonist, but it's best not to be too distracting. And how can I put it, there is a female protagonist in the primitive tribe who looks so good at the beginning. I feel very strange. How can I be so beautiful without quitting my life? I still prefer that the male protagonist starts to develop the female protagonist when he is young, and then she becomes pretty good-looking by the time she reaches adulthood.

Come on write:

In the first chapter of the primitive tribe, a beautiful woman appears, which is very inconsistent. After casually flipping through it, I feel that the subsequent scenes are not very big. So when I wrote the first chapter, I really didn't understand the plot. Forget it, I wish you success.

I hope it can be written better. There are so few good-looking themes like this.

Finally, someone can write about the primitive tribal flow, and the author's writing is very good. The logic, layout, setting, world view and writing style are all good. I feel that you are at least a level 4 author. Some parallel level 5 authors who have been promoted are not as good as you. Although there are still some flaws, the writing is very good. The two peak books of this type are "The Human Emperor" and "The Most Powerful Tribe of All Times", but "The Emperor of People" is a passionate and personal practice, with few development and management elements and primitive and tribal elements. "The Most Powerful Tribe of All Times" is very well written. Although it collapsed in the later period, it was generally written at its peak, and the author can learn from it. If there is no problem with the quality, then I will worry about whether the author can persist. After all, it often takes a long time for this kind of book to be published, and there is an upper limit. If the author persists and does not supervise, I will definitely keep pursuing it. Come on! I have given you 3 monthly passes this month. You are not on a stand-alone basis. Our favorite book club will always support you silently. Also, I would like to ask, are you a newbie? Does it feel like a boss wearing a vest?

Why did the writing get worse and worse from the beginning of the sacrifice and subsequent chapters? Sure enough, the quality of the newcomers is still unstable. I'll take a look.

Since this world does not have that kind of supernormal power, it is impossible to live forever. Then leave them with a system.