I'm Directing the Extraordinary Era in Tokyo

The plot is just like playing house, I was so embarrassed at the first plot climax. As a director, are you the kind of war movie about a million-strong army crossing a river? There are more than a dozen people lying on the ground, a few people floating on the water, and two or three pig feet charging? Awkward or not? You are a boss who wants to sacrifice millions of people to resurrect the evil god. Do you immediately make faces after coming out? How many mortals can't be killed? It's so funny. Can't you write a story where you stir up trouble in secret, sacrifice thousands of people, and then Haohmaru guides the person who leads the government to deal with the follow-up story that leads to you?

I hope I don't want to plant trees and lead Naruto. If the combat power is inflated and the ending is unfinished, the biggest poisonous point is that the combat power is inflated and the ending is unfinished, coupled with a cheating heroine who has no sense of existence.

So far, none of the extraordinary people have died, and none of the big shots have died. All the people who have died are ordinary people. What is the use of these extraordinary beings? Every time they are awakened by explosive seeds, it is too deliberate.

Boring, the author is looking at his childhood as a Chinese, with a strong government that loves the people, highly aware people, and a harmonious and unified top management. Boring, I came to see Xiaoli bleed like a river, not to see Xiaoli collect extraordinary things and then dominate the world and dominate the world.

In the early stages, Dongxiang never died. There were various coincidences. The author always promised that he would be miserable later on, but he didn't die until it was about to be released. He had to go against the readers' emotions. He really deserved the bad results.

The author probably doesn't have much experience in writing books. I personally feel that the character rhetoric in the writing is too bloated, which is mainly reflected in the character descriptions and dialogues. Repeated rhetoric often appears, and everyone's speech reflects the same emotional expression as a fan chart. It is often "xx emotions with a hint of undetectable xxx emotions." I'm a bit clumsy, so I can use the AI ​​assistant to give some suggestions (not to experience AI writing)

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 114. It's another trick of tricking the positive side to make the negative side escape. The negative side threatens the wounded, so the positive side must be obedient? Please, the wounded on the scene were all injured due to the battle between extraordinary people. From the perspective of the front, one of the two extraordinary people had already run away, and the other was about to run away. You are threatened by the wounded at the scene. Is it possible that these two people ran away, causing greater casualties in the future. Dongxiang hasn't caught it yet, so will he still create hidden dangers for himself? There is also the on-the-spot reaction, saying that you dare not bet on whether the bomb is real. Is it true that the person on the negative side can't survive? The boss of the negative side can't let a person who knows everything fall into the hands of the positive side, otherwise this escape will be in vain! Please ask the author to use his brain. Is it difficult to rely on intelligence to advance the plot all day long? Is it difficult for both the pros and cons to have online IQs?

Ai writing plus praise robot

It's so good that I read it all night. As for the rhythm, I feel it's pretty good and not messy However, I still feel like there's one thing I can point out, that is, when the power is released, you have to mention it, otherwise a person will suddenly appear and the reader won't know.

A small villain in the early stage lived until he was released on the shelves. I jumped to the subscription chapter to see how Dongxiang died, but he was still killed by the villain. The author himself also talked about eternal pain. I said the author was just patronizing his own writing. At least Dongxiang must die in the hands of justice so that everyone can watch it happily, right? Otherwise, why would you kill someone with the name of justice?

It feels like the author got too excited and forgot about the main character

If you think about it seriously, superpowers are not so attractive. First of all, the students and teachers who like superpowers indiscriminately are the students and teachers of various universities. This gives them the opportunity to observe the world from another angle, commonly known as writing papers. Therefore, even a useless superpower such as hair lengthening and hardening can support a group of medical students. As for some offensive superpowers, they are really useless, such as fire control. In life, everyone is actually a master of fire control. We use gas for cooking and smoking. Or you have a lighter to light things, even when you go to a restaurant to eat, there are candles burning under some of the dishes that are served. The ability to fly sounds cool, but is it difficult to fly? Besides, just because you can fly, does not mean you can fly like an airplane. Can you receive GPS positioning from the sky? Do you have radar to locate yourself and other aircraft? Can you fly at high altitudes without lack of oxygen or cold? In the end, aren't you tired? If you fall asleep while flying, you will be reborn on the spot after the crash. Do you still have such flying ability? It's not as useful as other people's parachuting, bungee jumping and wingsuit flying abilities. As for the healing ability, it's even more useless. If the self-healing ability is discovered, the doctors of the medical group will not rebel. The United States can't even automate the port. I'm not sure whether this thing can be studied quietly. The huge medical group and related staff are enough to suppress this ability. At most, the top group of people will use it quietly. Immortality looks very tempting. But it can easily lead to rebellion among your subordinates. You seem to be immortal and don't want to abdicate, right? After you are killed, I will sit on you and become immortal again, because there is no equal opportunity. Even if you don't have the right to be a rich man and live forever, the people around you who take care of you will think about how to kill you as time goes by. As for the world, most people are immortal, and society has basically stagnated. Without interstellar travel, human civilization will basically become extinct, and super powers are just so-so.

Nowadays, the protagonists behind the scenes are all prop masters or the ones who announce the scenes are real behind-the-scenes staff. Any character other than a supporting role is more like a human being. Apart from giving strength, it is no problem to delete it. There is no impact on anyone and everything is allowed to develop on its own. There is no hint of a gangster. Even those with strong shadows who want to be hidden bosses have more strength and presence than the protagonist.

What on earth is the author messing with? Who do you think you are when you write so many subplots? Game designer? People only like to play games and look for Easter eggs. You are a novelist, why do you write so many subplots?

I read more than 10 chapters and skipped through a few more. This novel is dead. It should have been written by AI

The plot of these chapters is a bit ridiculous. The author of the Twisting Magic Eye has set it up to be able to twist when you see it with your own eyes, but now facing the bullets that are constantly being shot from all directions, can the Twisting Magic Eye and a semi-disabled person really solve it? She can't keep turning her head 360 degrees every 0.1 Seconds, right? I originally thought that I would write that the entire building was twisted and destroyed directly outside, but I don't know if the author was a young man who committed a crime and went in with a disabled body. It seemed unreasonable and a bit poisonous. It was too stupid. Or maybe the user of the Twisting Eye has actually improved in ability? But the author didn't explain it clearly.

I can't bear to die, everyone is wise

I don't know why those who write about the behind-the-scenes genre in Tokyo don't write a complete system, like the Sea of Fire, a complete and extraordinary system with a high upper limit, and then throw out the abilities of this system to passers-by and watch them fight crickets, instead of having this magic eye, fire control, super powers, ghosts and gods. If you write about the combat power in this way, it will be easy to collapse. It is better to write it like chakra or devil fruit. , As written in the Devil Fruit domineering system, the upper limit of the animal-type fantasy beasts is stronger than the ordinary animal type, but no matter how strong it is, there is a limit and the limit will not be too severe. And eating the fruit will not make you invincible immediately. You have to train your abilities, and then leave the fear of sea water and seastones, and the domineering settings to the official or publicly released. In this way, watching the supporting characters fighting crickets for the fruit is more interesting than a superpower cauldron.

The prelude of "Tree Planting in Tokyo" is very good, but it also has a common problem: power expands too fast. Overall, it is just a novel that can be expected.

I can't watch it anymore. The protagonist has no sense of existence at all. It's a group drama with behind-the-scenes streaming. The protagonist is just a human-computer that wholesales plug-ins. Whether it exists or not does not affect the plot. So the question is, if there is no protagonist in fantasy super, what kind of magical things will be written? Oh, author, that's okay. . All I can say is, don't be deceived by the introduction. It's not the one-on-one type. It's not exciting at all. It's just an urban super fight. Fighting just for the sake of fighting. It's rated as the last episode of Titan.

When will Ashina be finished? You've read a million words in the title and you're still stuck in a small place with crazy spending lines? Is it really boring to keep integrating the plot characters of anime and games without following the main plot? Or does your book have no main plot? Is it possible to finish writing Ashina?

Investigation report: "No." -308 Investigation target: "I directed the extraordinary era in Tokyo" - the male protagonist - [Minamoto Seiki] Investigation result: [Soul Penetration Seizes the Body] Judgment basis: Abnormal characteristics: Time-travel investigator, as the name suggests Yi is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know the time-travel situations of travelers in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any errors, Wanwang will correct me ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on July 23, 2025

There is no reason for the author's poor performance. The chaotic and evil character refused to let him die. The author probably thought that the character was written with a personality as charismatic as Dio. It is purely disgusting to the audience. I suggest everyone to read chapter 30 and then run away.

You don't know how to be a eunuch anymore, so you should take leave during the Chinese New Year.

Yuan Qinghui's role is too small, how can a bystander still be called the protagonist?

The rhythm is a bit messy, but you can take a look

The Chaofan official in Xiaotian is too strong. How to play Chaofan from other parties? It's completely unbalanced. Basically, other extraordinary people will be killed when they show up, and they can't get up at all. How to develop the protagonist's power system in a balanced way?

Has the author never written about fighting? A lion fights a rabbit with all his strength. The villain is beaten and weakened and buffed. Apart from being tough-talking, he has no desire to fight back. Only after he is beaten to death does he know that he has to fight seriously.

It looks good so far, better than other Tokyo Extraordinary types. Logic and emotions are good.

35 Monthly tickets have become 70. Come on, author