After Ascending to Heaven on the Spot, I Became an Immortal

There is no such thing as becoming an immortal. It is just an ordinary person's fantasy before being hit by a car 🤫

It's just that the women are uncomfortable with it. Although the way of speaking is natural, it's very boring to always describe this, as if there is a lack of women, so I have to write about these things.

There is no immortal character, only the halo of the protagonist? Author, please make it clear that you are writing about immortals, not sex demons. You want one when you see one, and they are all different types. What about your stamp collection? In the future, when you become an immortal, other immortals will cut off love and protect the common people. You, a newly immortal, will bring a bunch of women up there to sing and dance, okay? It would be better to follow the writing method of training one's mind in the mortal world and wandering around the world. It is much more interesting than this. Have you really not reflected on the reasons for your achievements like this?

Please, stop writing about women. Do you have to have a harem? This is a good article filled with shit.

I can't stand it anymore, it's like I've never seen a woman before, one after another, she's like a stallion

You might as well just write all the women as your wives. It's too outrageous. You are not an immortal. You are challenging the bottom line of morality. You still want to become an immortal and become an ancestor. However, the author also wrote it in the first chapter, which was just a lustful thought before his death. The subsequent plot becomes more and more outrageous. At first, Qin was okay, but later on, the plot gradually became more outrageous, a bit like the style of an island country film. Keep watching if you want to see it, but if you don't like it.

The idea of ​​getting on the bus first and paying for the tickets later is a good idea. Become an immortal first and then work backwards to practice. Other than that, the plot is a bit boring. A guy who has become an immortal acts like a young boy who has not yet graduated. The protagonist has a very shallow view of himself, his family and the future. He has become an immortal, but his character has not improved much, and his work is rough and unqualified. So when I write about others admiring the protagonist, I feel that the protagonist is not worthy and his virtue is not worthy of his place. Real-name suggestion, follow the example of successful works such as "Lan Ke Qi Yuan" and learn from it. A fairy must have fairy spirit. This does not mean that he is full of fairy spirit just by saying he is full of fairy spirit. Readers cannot see the picture, and the picture described in words is very empty. The reader's understanding of the protagonist is based on what he said and what he did. The core of the immortal must be free and easy, free, with a heart for the common people, a righteousness in the chest, a universe in the belly, a sense of mission, and man can conquer nature... Personally, if there is any offense, just treat it as if I didn't say it

Don't end up getting a fox on board.

It's so good. Immortals have a harem in the mortal world. The theme is novel and great.

I'm ready to give up. I might as well change my name to Teddy Immortal. I really like any woman, especially the Korean one. She's so out of touch.