Advent to the Heavens: Brother, Something Seems Wrong with You

I had a full subscription, but I had to give up this book. Typos are mostly trivial matters. The real problem is that the male protagonist and the girl named Huang rescued the girl named Huang, and sometimes she was Huang Ying, and sometimes she was Huang Heng. I have a low IQ and don't understand. Is it two people or something? It doesn't matter if you write one chapter or two like this, you've always been like this. This is not even a stupid mistake. I doubt you did it on purpose. I really can't stand an author who doesn't care about his work. There is simply no professional ethics and the plot of entering the dungeon simulation is okay, that is, sewing. I quite like watching sewing. But your real-world plot is written like a piece of shit. I even suspect that this book was written by AI

Why don't you just use the original version of The Deer and the Cauldron?

If this name is brother, you smell so good, it will be a killer

Chapter 20: Isn't it too ugly to just accept money and eat?

For a specious plot, it is better to use the original plot and add a time traveler variable. Otherwise, just create an original plot. Why is it necessary to make it look like the draft of Golden Hero now? It's like using your plot design ability to compete with Golden Hero... Do you have the confidence to change it to be better than the original version of Golden Hero? It's really unnecessary. I still like to see this kind of one-world setting with no time limit. I can sew a lot of things in, but the way I write them is really discouraging. In addition, in the early stage, you are just trying to follow the Jin family's world view. If you directly try hard skills, it seems a bit stupid. Really, those who are trying to hoodwink the Jin family should not engage in any horizontal tactics. In Jin Daxia's works, Lian Henglian's characters are basically background characters. In fact, the protagonists written by Jin Guliang and Wen are basically not experienced at all. Why. And if you want to upgrade your dimension in the later stage, horizontal training will only make you look stupider. I really don't understand why everyone is so obsessed with this. I usually give up when I see horizontal training. Part of the real-life version of Henglian is actually creating micro-bone fractures countless times and then growing them so that the bones will grow out of shape when they grow again, that's all. The advantages are not obvious, but the disadvantages are numerous... This part is my personal preference.

Chapter 28 is on the shelves, abandoned, abandoned

The protagonist is a real villain. If he doesn't change his character, you will definitely fall into the street. And the dogs that pounce are not as good as that.

Cut leeks, it will be on sale at 28

You should have run away on the first day of the lecture. You all knew there was a problem. How could there be so many people around the emperor and no one analyzed it for the emperor? This is the ultimate whirlpool.

Mental retardation, what a bad plot

This is a hand that is not prepared to practice weapons. Are you preparing to perform the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms with one hand?

It's better not to change the name, the plot is all familiar.

There are too many typos that affect the reading.

I don't see any use for this talent.

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This book is not bad at all but not enough to read.