Zhan Tong: I Don't Want to Be the Male Protagonist of Zhiyu!

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Tazmi is stupid, I don't believe that Esdeath will still be able to fight after eight months.

Although Zhanmei is dark, Tazmi can actually be less miserable. As long as Tazmi doesn't choose to resist Gundam and save people, Tazmi will not die, and the little emperor will also die. As long as Tazmi opens his mouth, Esdeath will definitely not take action against him, and he can even ask Esdeath to help him build a peaceful country. Esdeath cannot refuse Tazmi, and Chitong will definitely help him, and he will directly reach the pinnacle of life.

Isn't Tazmi the strongest among the trio of fellow villagers? Why is she the weakest in your writing? Tazmi just lacks the experience of fighting with others. Look at the ground cracking when fighting Ouka. When she first joined the night attack, it was not a problem to be among the top three.

When I saw Chapter 27, the protagonist said something about "historical necessity", which really made me laugh. Female video post Zhai Dou rarely leaves the palace, why? If you write poorly, no one will read it. The character design of this original work is indeed likable, but it is essentially a novel about curiosity. The author wants to change it into a novel about fun. No problem, I support it. Don't touch revolutionary topics, it's not easy to write about. If you really want to write it, author, you can't even answer the questions in the comment area. If you want to overturn this old world, what can you do by joining a spy organization? Why not just go to the revolutionary army? Really, even if you join the Esdeath Empire Army and later surrender to the uprising, it will be much better. And the original work didn't understand the so-called oppression. Even if he asked a landlord to make a loan shark and annex the entire village's land at the beginning, I would look down upon the villagers if they didn't survive the second year. Those revolutionary troops couldn't even shout out "equalize the rich and the poor, wait for the rich and the poor", it was just as funny. If the author really wants to write about the overthrow of the old world, he should develop the alchemy industry, increase crop yields, raise monsters, promote imperial equipment, apply it to production and the army, and beat both sides. If you don't want to write like that, just write a cool novel. Follow the martial arts routine, beat a few bosses, recruit girls, and finally retire from the world. This is the most stable way to write.

After reading Chapter 60, there are not too many poisonous points in what the author wrote, but there are a few uncomfortable points. First, as a protagonist and a time traveler, I have too little impression of his strength. There is no specific thing as an anchor, which is too vague. Second, the protagonist can make up for his regrets as his own behavior. The purpose of the movement, or it can be easily completed in the process of revolution, but when I turn a few pages, I will see the protagonist repeating it: I want everyone in the original night attack to have a bright future! It's okay to repeat it every day, but it's really unreasonable to repeat it once when you see an original character. It makes you just like the male protagonist of the hot-blooded series. Third , the protagonist has too strong a filter on the character in the original work, or dare not deviate from the main line, so I have read forty or fifty chapters, and I haven't seen anything worth enjoying. It is easy to have the urge to abandon the book, and to be honest, saving the people who attacked at night is not that exciting. The selling point of this book should not be Is it to change the world? There is no need to write a big book about such a convenient thing. It is like the protagonist cannot survive unless he saves the people who are attacked at night. In summary, the author wants to do a lot of things, and he also claims that he is a good article, but I have read 60 chapters, and I am not happy at all! This is the fundamental problem

In fact, what is the difference between what you wrote in this way and the original work? What are your own characteristics? For example, why don't you set up an organization by yourself? Bring the wave of revolution to the entire world.

The protagonist's companion at the beginning can fight ten protagonists head-on. . To be honest, this description is very discouraging.

It's a bit overwhelming. The setting of the original equipment is really awkward. I want all kinds of abilities. In the end, there is only a strong sense of dissonance when it is stitched together. The abilities of the original equipment are relatively simple. The main character's body value enhancement, summoning mobs, teleportation, controlling subordinates, and emitting light waves. To be honest, it is better to give the protagonist a golden finger at the beginning to make it more acceptable. To be honest, the tool is called a tool because its overall data and ability are not as good as the Teigu. You have directly surpassed the T0s of Devil's Essence, Demon Sword Murasame, and Evil Ghost Haunting, and you don't have to pay any price to use the ability. This makes people feel even more unrealistic. The reason why the tool is called a tool is not because of the huge cost and side effects, but because the ability is really mediocre Generally speaking, Tazmi is highly bound to [Evil Haunted], and I don't quite approve of the original three-no tool. The adaptive evolution of [Haunted by Evil Spirits] is that the official gave Tazmi a plug-in. Dragon transformation is really insignificant in my opinion, especially after seeing the protagonist's exemption from the "source of fear", I became even more convinced. Human beings have their limits, so jojo, I won't be a human anymore! ! ! (In order to support its legitimacy, the author had to make it known to everyone. After the weapon was manufactured and named "Chenwu", it was sealed until the beginning of the comic. How come so many people know it) Afterwards, Esdeath and Mokobotemo, if I remember correctly, were developed to prevent the original Tazmi from escaping. They were directly used to freeze time and space when they first appeared in Chapter 60. Anyway, I didn't understand why Esdeath developed the ability to freeze time and space at this time.

Can't the names of the protagonists be unified? The two names look really uncomfortable.

I recently watched Warhammer and found that the world of Crimson Eyes is not inconsistent with Warhammer. What I am talking about is that these nobles and officials are exactly the same, and they are all quite anthropomorphic.

After reading more than 40 chapters, I suddenly became interested and went to Station B to catch up on this series. Well, I'm so mean 😭

At this beginning, it is extremely difficult to write a good revolutionary article. There is no territory, no army, and slightly better conditions than Lao Zhu. In terms of time, we can only overthrow the next garbage regime 😅, but by that time, the other protagonist groups are basically dead.

A useless weapon, a typical carrot pit, a weapon created based on the needs of the male protagonist first. 5 Abilities, all kinds of bells and whistles.

A top killer like Qiemei was directly killed by the author's plot because of her compatibility and being influenced by the male protagonist. Black Eyed also had a sister scene with Red Eyed Eyes later on. And many people don't really think that Esdeath is a love brain. This guy is purely an anti-human lunatic. In the end, a continent-level Blizzard, the army and the Imperial Guard gave Red Eyes a chance to win. In the end, Will and Black Eyes, as former enemies, were properly placed by the revolutionary army and helped find a doctor. It is quite abstract, but it may also be because of Will's later betrayal, Red Eyes' sister, and the fact that both of them will not live long.

Reading the author's comments, I wrote this fanfic because of my feelings. The performance of the book is not very good now. I feel that using love to generate electricity will not last long. I am not surprised when this book becomes a eunuch. I am reading it with the intention of reading it, and I don't dare to read it at all.

It's so rare to see a Zhanmei fanfic where the protagonist turns out to be the protagonist of the original work. Is that any trouble? The protagonist in the original work is too weak to reach the ceiling of combat power. How can he defeat the Ice Girl without being defeated?

Well written! But the flow of unpopular fandom is really low, I hope I won't be a eunuch 🙄

Now that Tazmi is no longer haunted by evil spirits, what kind of Teigu should I give him? I hope the author knows this. Strongness is definitely needed, and handsomeness is also essential. To be honest, I still think that the haunted one is suitable for Tazmi. As for emotions, let's stick to the feelings to the end. It can be arranged like this: the haunted evolution, Tazmi transforms into a dragon, and finally a design that is not found in the original work. Control the weapon with willpower (fiery soul), suppress the super dangerous species, reappear from the dragon state back to the armor state, and the armor upgrades and evolves to form the ultimate armor.

It looks okay, but I always wanted to be a dog in the previous Night Raid series.

🤫 The eunuch's normal rhythm, if he takes leave, his descendants will be gone.

If you want to read about the protagonist's reform, you can quit. This book doesn't have this aspect, or not much, and the author's direction is wrong.

No way, I've been reading another book for a while 🙂

Unconsciously, it has been a year since the author's death.

Where is the cool article? Is the cheating NPC who has no role in the two original works better than the protagonist?

Are there any good Zantong fanfics out there?