Devouring the Starry Sky, the Supreme Heavens

I gave up when I saw the sharing of talents. Please, a weak person cannot protect a secret, and if it is leaked, the protagonist will be dead.

Seeing how silly Pig's Feet always likes to do live broadcasts and exposes all the secrets to his close friends and family, I feel that Pig's Feet is written by the author as a fool. After all, any powerful illusionist in Devouring Starry Sky World can hypnotize and enslave the weak. Pig's Feet exposes all the secrets to weak relatives and friends, which is harming himself and them! As a result, once talent sharing came out, I guess many people would give up! Why? Because the author has a creator's perspective, he may feel that it's okay to share everything with his real-world relatives and friends in the novel, but we readers will only feel unhappy when we read this kind of fast food article and can't substitute so much! Moreover, the pig's foot talent should be mainly aimed at improving one's own life-saving ability and training ability, so it is most reasonable for the third talent to be a clone ability! As a result, it came directly to the late stage, or what is the talent for assisting others? The more I read this fanfic, the more I feel that it's no wonder Tomato is a great god. According to the writing, the fanfic can't arrange a wave of relatives and friends like the original pig's feet?

If I could time travel through this introduction, I would think so too 🤭

You don't have an ID card if you're not at planet level. How can you open a bank account if you don't have an ID card and you're not even a citizen? When you're on an alien planet and you're still walking on the street, aren't you, an apprentice, afraid of being slapped to death by someone else?

No! What the hell happened in the last few chapters? It was originally written well, but why did it suddenly summon "players from another world" to come over and play the game? If these "alien souls" summoned by the protagonist are absolutely loyal, then I have no objection. It can be regarded as summoning millions of soul slaves, but the author just set them as "players" with their own thoughts and uncontrollable behavior! Moreover, the protagonist has no effective means of control when facing them. He can only ban or delete their accounts like the game official does. Isn't this asking for trouble? Besides, does calling these players over to play the game bring any great benefit to the protagonist? Can we get a group of loyal subordinates? Or a talent that can enhance the protagonist's understanding of the law? Anyway, I don't see any benefits so far. I only know that these players are big troubles that are beyond their control! Forget it! Having said so much, I guess the author won't listen to it, so I'll wait for another two days to see what happens😔

I didn't want to say it at first, but I wanted to say more and more in my mind, author, can you mention the IQ of the high-ranking human beings in the book? You have reduced their intelligence and made them feel that they are not worthy of being high-ranking human beings. In the original work, after Luo Feng and Hong showed outstanding will, the top management successively dispatched the Chaos City Lord to investigate. The Chaos City Lord did not find anything, and then Juax went to investigate. Your protagonist and his whole family are so talented that they have all joined the virtual universe, yet no one has investigated it yet? Especially your description of the Lord of the Universe's control of time and space. I feel like no one in the book knows how to control time and space. You are trying to humiliate them too hard. It feels a bit insulting to my IQ when I read it. I really can't stand it anymore.

If there is no adversity, create adversity and create plant life. What is the use of this thing? ? It looks cool, but when this thing is developed and used, the pig's feet won't need this thing, and it will also cost money. If there is no conflict, create conflict. As soon as the pig's trotters get rich and have people, they will immediately arrange conflicts and force the pig's trotters to run away.

First of all, praise it well, I am willing to write an original plot, it does not start from the earth, it is very innovative. However, the author's writing and layout skills are a bit lacking, and the plot is weird. And I really want to complain about the person who shares his talents with those around him. After flipping through the catalog, it seems that the whole family of five has entered the original secret realm? Is it a little too outrageous?

This author is really awesome. He will give you a wave of poison every few days.

I hate those parents and his best friend. This is swallowing the stars. In the later stage, you are so powerful that you can support me no matter what. In the early stage, you

The third talent "Sharing one's own cultivation talent with others" is purely a failure. A book friend has already commented on the detailed analysis at the end of the chapter, so I won't go into it here.

To be honest, the more I watch, the more disappointed I am. Forget that the character of the protagonist has not been set up well. He is still looking down on this person and looking down on that person who has cultivated to the true god of the universe. There are a few people who are not talented enough to reach that level. Don't underestimate the world's heroes. You can travel through time. What if there is another one? The golden finger of the time traveler is bigger than you, and he beats you to death casually. You have no place to complain, especially your golden finger, which can be stabilized if it is obviously wretched. It is no problem for you to go on a journey. After all, there are opportunities and so on, but the problem is that you have set up a character who is afraid of death, which is difficult to describe in one word. The only thing that feels better about your book is that it doesn't start on Earth 😅

Summoning the player is not controllable yet. What kind of brain does the author have? What is the use of summoning it? If you write woolly words, the clone will be a normal clone. What kind of originality is this?

The best friend is also a failure, there are still many things to do without the strength, writing so many things about the best friend is useless, can't you just brush it off? I always write blindly about street boy

This bubble is more disgusting than Baba Tower. Can you write less about it later? Babata at least thinks about Luo Feng, but he keeps giving things from the protagonist to the heroine. Although the protagonist doesn't care much, I look so disgusting.

Everything else is fine at the beginning, but I really don't like the shared talents.

Why do I always feel that Saoki is not lovable? The author raised him as his own son.

I can't stand it any longer. I haven't read dozens of chapters yet. I'm still number one among book friends. Brother, you have so much perseverance.

It's good that I didn't follow the original work, but are you sure this isn't a cheating version of map-changing devouring? I won't recognize you after you switch on the game and change your skin, the Zhizhi version of Luo Feng? 😅

Still on water mission. You have been directly promoted to the universe level. Could it be that you are still short of those points? The biggest problem this author has is that he doesn't distinguish between priorities and priorities.

What's the use of the talent of soul projection? What kind of brain came up with this talent? You are not an online game writer. You want this to be useless. People in online games summon players like you. Isn't this talent detrimental to yourself and others? I'm speechless. It's best not to write about these alien players in the future. Don't write so many best friends.

I just read Chapter 150, it's very well written. Joining a virtual company is a huge poisonous point

Has the author never read the original work? Can it be written like this?

The previous article is very good. All the data and settings are the same as the original work, and there are no errors. It is rare to see a book with no errors in the fan settings, but this gift of sharing this gift immediately dissuaded 90% of the readers! It is incredible that the author can write with such talent! You can only share your talents with others and cannot withdraw them. If you withdraw, the opponent will die! A great realm can only be shared by one person!

Playing an online game to attract others is the biggest failure. When I see this, I don't want to watch it at all.

What's going on now? Why isn't it updated? Could it be that he was caught😁

Except for the poisonous point of talent sharing, all other aspects are well written, and the plot also has its own innovation. It does not follow the original work, but has its own style. The setting is as error-free as the original work, which is rare.

Is there any similar star-swallowing novel in which you win a big prize at the beginning? I really like this kind of surprise setting, but this book doesn't show how exciting it is to win a big prize. It gives people the feeling that winning a big prize is better than not winning.

I recommend a book called "Swallowing the Starry Sky: My Comprehension Has No Limits", it's really good

Recommend your own book, "Swallowing the Starry Sky, Starting with the Weakest Special Life", the beginning of the Prison Clan